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Star warS,-,A DARK PATH,Screenplay by Brian Crosby and Jacob Hamelin 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


A long time ago in a galaxy far

far away…

 

 

STAR

WARS

 

 

A DARK PATH

 

Years have passed since the death of Luke Skywalker and the collapse of the New Republic, and the Sith are attempting to rebuild their lost empire.

 

The Jedi, working without the support of a central government, are doing the best to prevent another occurrence of the Great War between the Jedi and the Sith.

 

The Jedi High Council, seeking information about the evil Sith in order to better defend themselves in case of a war, have sent Jedi Knights throughout the galaxy to search for vital information…

 

 

1.      SPACE

 

Pan down to reveal a tiny old freighter.  Following the freighter, a massive planet is uncovered.  Coruscant, the dead husk of a once prosperous republic is just a large metal ball devoid of life hanging amongst the stars.  We follow the vessel as it passes silent towers standing out of a relatively smooth surface like vigilant giants of a broken past.  The old ship flies by the old Jedi Temple, which contains a light inside one of the outer towers, and lands behind it.

 

 

2.      INT. OLD JEDI TEMPLE (CORUSCANT)

 

Two young Jedi are rummaging through rubble and debris looking for something, anything left by the looters and space pirates that belonged to their abandoned order.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

Find anything; scrolls, artifacts, holocrons.  Anything we left behind in the wake of the plague.

 

KIO MULDOEN

 

Jaen, (pauses) why didn’t the Council send us to retrieve the Jedi artifacts earlier?

 

Jaen Galek-Wan remembers the stories of the Great Plague that led to the downfall of the Republic many years before.  He thinks of the answer, the answer of how the Republic had also abandoned the Jedi who had protected their feeble government for hundreds of years.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

The plague that devastated Coruscant has been deadly up until recently.  Yet we still have to wear the masks so that we don’t inhale the virus which will kill you within one standard hour.

 

A brief silence pierces the building.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

Enough stories of times past young Jedi.  We only have twenty minutes of breathable air left in our tanks before we become infected also.  Come, we must hurry.

 

The two resume their searching, a search that may one day save the ancient order of peace and hope.  The one ray of hope standing alone in the night.

 

 

2A.    INT. OLD JEDI TEMPLE (CORUSCANT)

 

About twenty minutes later there is a faint crumbling sound out on the ledge right outside the window.  Jaen Galek-Wan walks over to the window and looks to the roof five stories below.  Stepping through the window and avoiding the broken glass Jaen jumps out to the roof below.  Kio Muldoen looks out the window and down below.

 

KIO MULDOEN

 

Jaen?

 

 

2B.    EXT. OLD JEDI TEMPLE - ROOFTOP (CORUSCANT)

 

Jaen Galek-Wan looks up to Kio Muldoen and motions for him to stay there.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

No, you stay right there.

 

Jaen takes a step forward and grasps his lightsaber handle from his belt.  He senses something is very wrong.  He looks back up to Kio to see the young Jedi pointing upwards.  Jaen looks up to see a black-dressed man falling from about twenty stories up.  It is a Sith warrior (Darth Ungard).  The Sith lands on the roof with his lightsaber already drawn and lit, it's crimson blade blazing.  As the Sith begins charging Jaen, the Jedi's lightsaber is already lit with a green blade.  The blackened warrior lunges ferociously at his Jedi opponent and swings his blade making contact.  At this point Kio jumps down from his post in the window in order to help the Jedi Knight in his struggle against the Sith warrior.

 

KIO MULDOEN

 

I thought you could use some help.

 

As he is talking his yellow lightsaber is ignited.  Using Kio as a distraction, the Sith uses the Force to throw Jaen back against the wall where his lightsaber falls and is deactivated.  Jaen is slightly stunned and then he looks up to see Kio take a high swing at the Sith.  Only his swing is too high and the Sith pierces him in through the chest.  The apprentice falls to the roof unmoving.  As Jaen jumps up and reignites his lightsaber the Sith runs and jumps off the roof.  The Jedi runs to the edge of the roof and looks over but cannot spot the murderous warrior.  Jaen turns around and remembers his fallen comrade.  Running to the fallen Jedi, Jaen Galek-Wan notices a few scrolls that the Sith dropped and picks them up.  Jaen then picks up Kio Muldoen and carries hime back to the inside of the old temple.

 

 

3.      INT. NEW JEDI TEMPLE – TRAINING ROOM (DAGOBAH)

 

We see a man’s face.  A bead of sweat rolls off his brow.  The camera backs up to reveal not a man but a young Jedi apprentice.  He raises his lightsaber and deactivates it.  The padawan is in a well-lit room.  His master gets out of his chair and walks towards the padawan. When he gets to his charge he bends down and picks up two parts of what we now realize is a training remote.

 

REOND-ADI

 

Remember, Talvari, the Force is your ally.  Try to feel it flowing through you.

 

TALVARI

 

Does it control us, Master?

 

REOND-ADI

 

It’s part of you and will also obey your commands.  It’s like your blood.  It helps you move…  Feel it within you.

 

Reond-Adi holds up the broken Jedi training device, and looks at it.

 

TALVARI

 

I know… I know.

 

REOND-ADI

 

This is the seventh training remote you’ve destroyed this month.  The idea is to deflect it’s  blast, and not turn it into a piece of scrap metal.  You must control your actions. (sighs and pauses)  Did you feel the Force?

 

TALVARI

 

I could feel it Master, but there was a darkness, a coldness there also.

 

REOND-ADI

 

That would be the dark side of the Force.  Once you start down the dark path it will dominate your destiny, forever, so beware.

 

TALVARI

 

Beware of what, Master?

 

REOND-ADI

 

Fear, anger, and aggression.  They lead to the dark side.  Remember to use the Force only for knowledge and defense, never to attack.

 

The Jedi Master places the broken remote on a table next to scrolls, papers and spare lightsaber parts.

 

REOND-ADI

 

That’s enough for now.  Quiet your mind, Talvari.

 

Talvari sits on the cold floor and closes his eyes.  He slowly exhales and falls into peace, meditating.

 

 

4.      INT. NEW JEDI TEMPLE – HALLWAYS (DAGOBAH)

 

A Jedi Knight rushes through the hallways of the New Jedi Temple.  He has a small mechanical device in his hand.  The walls and floors seem to never end.  People move aside as a the Jedi rushes by.  He stops at a door and presses a button.  After a few seconds the door opens and another Jedi steps out.

 

MESSENGER

 

Is Master Reond-Adi here?

 

JEDI

 

No.  He’s in the training room with his apprentice.

 

The messenger continues on running at full speed down the hallway.  The other Jedi goes back into the room and the door slides shut.

 

 

5.      INT. NEW JEDI TEMPLE – TRAINING ROOM (DAGOBAH)

 

The Jedi messenger rushes into the training room out of breath and exhausted.  Talvari is still sitting and he doesn’t break his meditative state.  The Jedi hands Reond-Adi a small, hand-held device.  Both the Jedi messenger and the Jedi Master stand  and slightly bow to each other as a show of respect and intelligence.  The messenger turns and walks out the door.  As he is leaving Reond-Adi turns away from the door and activates the device.  He reads the message upon the screen and shuts off the device.  Talvari opens his eyes.

 

REOND-ADI

 

We are ordered to leave the Temple here on Dagobah to search the old abandoned Sith ruins on Messu.  We are to look for artifacts to aid the Council in their education of the evil order.

 

Talvari stands up and walks to his master’s side.

 

TALVARI

 

Why does the Jedi Council want more information of the Sith, there are very few left, right.

 

REOND-ADI

 

We shall see, padawan.  But as long as there is light there will always be dark.

 

 

6.      INT. DARK ROOM (UNKNOWN)

 

A black figure stands in a dark grey room.  The figure stands before a black circular stand.  The stand has no buttons or markings. (smooth)  He stands patiently, as the stand’s top begins to light up the black figure takes a more demanding pose.  A hologram of a dark robed man appears.  The man is revealed to be Darth Thymar, the Dark Lord of the Sith.

 

DARTH THYMAR (hologram)

 

Go to Messu, Darth Ziost.  The Jedi will look for the information there to destroy us.  Don’t let them get that information, my apprentice.

 

Darth Ziost bows his head towards his master.

 

DARTH THYMAR (hologram)

 

I am choosing you to carry out this mission because I know of your strength.  (pauses)  You are strong enough to pull the ears off a gundark.  (smiles)

 

DARTH ZIOST

 

I know Master.  I pulled off it’s head.

 

The image of the Dark Lord flickers and disappears.  Darth Ziost turns to us to leave.  We see his face is masked by a gundark skull.

 

 

7.      SPACE

 

A crusier flies by.  It is the Jedi ship, Chimera, carrying Master Reond-Adi and his apprentice Talvari.  We follow the starship until a blue and green planet is revealed.  It is Messu, a planet covered with lush forests.

 

 

8.      EXT. FOREST CLEARING - SURFACE (MESSU)

 

The Chimera lands in a small clearing in the forest.  It lands a short distance from an ancient Sith Temple.  The temple is in ruin.  Two, brown robed figures emerge from the ship and walk towards the temple.

 

 

9.      EXT. ANCIENT SITH TEMPLE – FRONT DOOR (MESSU)

 

The two Jedi stop in front of the temple and stare up at the doors.  There are two statues on each side of the doorway.

 

TALVARI

 

I sense something, Master…

 

Reond-Adi’s hand rests on his apprentice’s shoulder.

 

REOND-ADI

 

Yes…  I can feel it also.  A tremor in the Force.

 

Reond-Adi looks up at the front of the temple.  He walks up the stairs and towards the door.  He feels the door with his hand for a minute then turns around.

 

REOND-ADI

 

The door is sealed shut, and is made of Cortosis, a metal which we cannot cut through with our lightsabers.  We will have to find another way in.

 

He realizes that Talvari has been staring at the roof of the temple the whole time he has been talking.

 

REOND-ADI

 

Talvari! (slightly sharp gaining his attention)

 

Talvari snaps to reality.

 

REOND-ADI

 

What do you feel, Padawan?

 

TALVARI

 

Something dark… (he looks back up)  Almost… (pauses) mystical.  From up there.

 

Talvari out stretched his arm, pointing to the roof.  Reond-Adi looks up then uses the Force to propel himself towards a ledge hanging over the roof.

 

 

10.    EXT. SITH TEMPLE – ROOF (MESSU)

 

Reond-Adi lands on the roof steps forward, surveys the area then waits for his apprentice to join him.  Talvari lands on the roof behind his master in a clumsy fashion showing his inexperience in using the Force.  The two Jedi walk forward a couple of feet among the rubble of the ancient, weatherworn temple.

 

REOND-ADI

 

Wait here.

 

Talvari stops in his tracks and watches his master slowly navigate the crumbling ruins.  The Jedi Master pulls out his lightsaber handle and continues towards a group of toppled stones, gripping his weapon tightly.  The temple ruins seem to watch the slow-moving Jedi.  What Reond-Adi or Talvari don’t know is that not the temple is watching them but a figure in the ruins above.

 

A Sith warrior, Darth Ziost, dressed in black, leaps down from the group of toppled stones, the red blade of his lightsaber blazing a humming song.  With reflexes trained through years of battle, Reond-Adi ignites his lightsaber.  The yellow blade leaps from the handle.  The two blades clash together with a loud crack.  The Jedi Master knocks Darth Ziost back using his strong Force powers and leaps away searching to gain a better footing.  The two rush at each other again and battle, blades crashing together for short moments, battling their way towards a tall wall.  Massive pillars stand in front of the wall, supporting a higher landing.  A giant statue of a once-great Sith Lord watches the battle from above, on top of the pillars.  Reond-Adi quickly fatigues, sweating profusely, too old for combat.

 

Talvari stands alone, obeying his master’s order to do so.  He watches the battle intently, his eyes blazing with the want to run to his master’s side and fight.

 

The blades crash once more.  Reond-Adi thrusts hard against Ziost’s blade, throwing Ziost back and with a swift move.  Reond-Adi quickly diffuses his lightsaber and stands in mid-battle, closing his eyes serenely, calming his body.  Seeing the Jedi Master as no immediate threat, Ziost pauses for a short moment, slightly confused.  He then sends a final stabbing blow into Reond-Adi’s chest.  The wise Jedi’s robes fall to the ground as his body becomes one with the Force.  The handle of the lost Jedi’s weapon clatters on the ground next to his robes.

 

TALVARI

 

NOOOO!!!!!

 

Darth Ziost turns his menacing face, masked behind a gundark skull, to Talvari.  Charging towards the Sith, Talvari activates his blue blade and crashes it down upon Darth Ziost’s red blade held above his head with a terrible crack.  The two opposing blades crash together again and again, although neither the Sith nor Jedi can gain much ground.  Darth Ziost swings a heavy blow, disarming the young Jedi apprentice.  Darth Ziost kicks Talvari in the chest.

 

Talvari falls back hard against the crumbling stone.  The Sith holds his red blade inches from Talvari's face.  Although his face is hidden. The wanton Sith taunts the fallen Jedi.  Talvari stares at the red blade, frightened.  He pulls himself away with his elbows but Darth Ziost just extends his arm to regain the lost distance.  Talvari's face tightens in anger and he bears his teeth.  Tapping into the dark side of the Force he activates his lost lightsaber and uses the power to throw the weapon at the emissary of evil.  Darth Ziost jumps back, but throws his arms in the air at the same time.  The blade misses Ziost's head but chops off his left hand.  He quickly deactivates his lightsaber and clips it to his belt.  He then turns around and begins running towards the edge of the temple roof.  When he gets to the edge of the roof he launches himself off and disappears into the trees.  Talvari looks up and sighs.

 

Pulling his lightsaber to his hand, Talvari attaches it to his belt and runs to his master's robes.  He lifts the brown clothes and the fallen Jedi's lightsaber and stares off, after the Sith warrior.

 

 

11.    EXT. CAVE ENTERANCE - NIGHT (MESSU)

 

Talvari walks up to the entrance of a cave.  There is a carving in the stone above the doorway.  Talvari lifts his glowrod up to see the glyph.  He then looks behind him and both ways and enters the darkened cave.

 

 

12.    INT. CAVE - NIGHT (MESSU)

 

Darkness engulfs Talvari as he continues farther into the cave.  Had it not been for the glowrod he would have stumbled on the cave floor and gotten injured because it was so dark.  He begins hearing windy, wispy noises from deeper inside the cave.  The young padawan continues down the black passageways.  He comes to the end of a tunnel and finds a larger room, a cavern.  He enters the large cavern and looks around, the room is unnaturally lit.  At the back of the room two statues of Sith Lords guard an artifact on a stand.  Talvari walks closer noticing that the artifact is a small pyramid.  The pyramid is small and red with black carvings placed on it.  The artifact is about palm-size and lit from within, sending dirty, red rays of light across the room in all directions.

 

TALVARI

 

(with a sense of wonder)  This is it!  A Sith Holocron!

 

He takes a few steps closer to examine the palm-size pyramid.  He stares at it in wonder and amazement.  Talvari kneels in front of the Holocron.  He scoops up the Holocron <DELETED SCENE? Fight with Sith statues> in his hands and runs out of the cave

 

REOND-ADI (ghostly voice)

 

Once you start down the dark path, it will dominate your destiny.

 

 

13.    INT. DARK ROOM

 

Darth Ziost sits hunched over a table.His back to us, and his gundark mask on the table next to him.  His hood is pulled up, over his head.  With his right hand (and only hand), he holds an electric tool.  The tool buzzes and suddenly a spark flies.  Ziost stands up quickly from pain and anger, and curses.

 

DARTH ZIOST

 

Shirak!

 

He sits back down and continues working.  He grabs another tool and snaps it into his new hand.  He then holds his new robotic hand up, moves the fingers and then pulls a glove over it.  He puts his mask on and flips a switch  on a veiwscreen that had a blinking light under it.  The Dark Lord of the Sith, Darth Thymar, appears on the screen.

 

DARTH ZIOST

 

The Jedi Master Reond-Adi has been destroyed.  It is only a matter of time before his apprentice the Jedi that took my hand will suffer the same fate.

 

DARTH THYMAR (veiwscreen)

 

This does not surprise me, Darth Ziost.  You must not let the Jedi descover the secrets of the Sith Order.

 

DARTH ZIOST

 

Yes, my master.

 

The veiwscreen goes black and Ziost flips the switch.

 

 

14.    EXT. FOREST – NIGHT (MESSU)

 

Talvari is walking through the forest.  He stares down at the Holocron that he holds in his hands.

 

TALVARI

 

This is much like the Jedi Holocrons back at the temple on Dagobah.  They hold information recorded by other Jedi, maybe this works the same way.  (talking softly to himself)

 

Talvari sits down on the forest floor and puts the Holocron on the ground in front of him.  He sits there for a while, focusing his Force powers.  The Holocron begins to glow red as Talvari taps into the dark side of the Force, and mist-like fog begins to roll out.  He lifts the Holocron and looks at it, but not only at it, into it, and beyond it.  Red light shining on his face, the fog begins pouring out of his hands and an evil grin crosses his face.

 

 

15.    INT. JEDI TRAINIING ROOM (DAGOBAH)

 

Jedi Master Ja-Gon Myrik and a small group of students are in a training room practicing meditation studies.  Master Ja-Gon Myrik stops and grabs his head.  The students discontinue their meditating and gather around their wise master.

 

STUDENT 1

 

What is it Master Myrik?

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

I feel a tremor in the Force.

 

STUDENT 1

 

I can sense it too Master.  Something doesn’t feel right.

 

A Jedi Knight, Jaen Galek-Wan, enters the training room and stands there.  An aide rushes up.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

Master Ja-Gon Myrik?

 

The aide points in the direction of the wise Jedi Master.  Ja-Gon Myrik looks up and notices Jaen Galek-Wan walking towards him.  He motions for his students to go back to their meditation, and walks over to Jaen Galek-Wan.

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

Yes, Jaen Galek-Wan

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

We haven’t heard from Master Reond-Adi or Talvari in the past two days.  They were supposed to report in the other night, but they didn’t.

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

Was their ship destroyed?

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

No, the ship’s beacon is still functioning.  The signal’s coming from Messu.

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

Do you feel a tremor in the Force, also?

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

Yes, I felt it a moment ago.

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

So did I.  Hmmm... Perhaps we should send more Jedi to investigate the disappearance.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

May I go Master?

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

I will have to address the Jedi Council for a final decision on this matter.  I shall present you and another student to go.

 

 

16.    INT. JEDI TEMPLE – HALLWAY (DAGOBAH)

 

Jaen Galek-Wan is pacing outside the door to the Jedi Council chamber waiting for the Council meeting about the current matter to conclude.  The door opens as Master Ja-Gon Myrik steps out.  Jaen Galek-Wan turns  quickly and stands next to the wise master.

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

What is your reason for your anxiousness in this matter?

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

Talvari and I are good friends.  I want to make sure he is alright.

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

Your reason for taking this mission is a personal one.  It may cloud your judgement.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

My friendship with Talvari will not cloud my judgement in this matter.

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

Are you certain?

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

Yes.

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

We shall send you... and one other Jedi.  Sadamiri.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

Sadamiri?  (not recognizing the name)

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

Yes.  She is young, but strong in the ways of the Force.

 

Jaen Galek-Wan nods.

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

May the Force be with you.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

And with you, Master.

 

 

17.    SPACE

 

The Jedi cruiser, Vigilante Eight, carrying Jaen Galek-Wan and Sadamiri flies away from us, towards Messu.

 

 

18.    INT. VIGILANTE EIGHT – COCKPIT (SPACE)

 

Red, green, and yellow lights flicker on multiple control panels.  Jaen Galek-Wan pilots the cruiser.  Through the cockpit window, we see the beautiful green planet of Messu getting closer and closer.  A small screen on a control panel flickers on with a slight wave of Jaen’s hand.  On the veiwscreen an approach vector appears with a small blip on it.  He waves over another monitor and a picture of Master Ja-Gon Myrik appears.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

We have picked up the signal from Reond-Adi’s ship and will be landing near it shortly.

 

JA-GON MYRIK (veiwscreen)

 

Very well, young Jedi, but be careful.  I sense dark forces at work there.  May the Force be with you both.

 

Jaen Galek-Wan waves his hand over the monitor again and it switches off.  He then focuses back on his piloting towards the planet.  He flips a switch and a heads up display of the approach vector appears before him.  Sadamiri looks over at him then back towards the nearing planet.

 

 

19.    EXT. FOREST CLEARING – DUSK (MESSU)

 

The Vigilante Eight lands in an open clearing in the forest.

 

Jaen Galek-Wan and Sadamiri walk off the Vigilante Eight.  Sadamiri starts to walk off but stops when she notices Jaen standing right outside the ship door with his eyes closed feeling the Force around him.  He slowly opens his eyes, looks both ways, then walks off past Sadamiri into the forest.  She pauses then follows.

 

 

20.    INT. CHIMERA – COCKPIT (MESSU)

 

Talvari is eating off a plate and drinking a blue liquid when a faint beeping is heard.  He puts his drink down and flips a switch on the veiwscreen.  He watches as the Vigilante Eight lands in a field.  He looks at another monitor to see where the ship is relative to his.  He flips a switches to both monitors to deactivate them and rushes out the ship.

 

 

21.    EXT. OPEN FIELD – NIGHT (MESSU)

 

Darth Ziost stands high on the field, peering through a set of macrobinoculars, pointed towards the forest.  (Ziost is on a hill)  Darth Ziost suddenly twirls around, red lightsaber ignited.  Talvari approaches him, holding out his hands, showing he is unarmed.

 

TALVARI

 

I want to learn the ways of dark side and become a Sith warrior.  (pauses)  Can you teach me?

 

A brief silence pierces the air.

 

DARTH ZIOST

 

(caught off guard)  Yes...

 

Ziost slowly diffuses his lightsaber, looking at Talvari awkwardly.

 

 

22.    EXT. FOREST – NIGHT (MESSU)

 

The darkness of night surrounds the training warriors.  Ziost stands aside, watching Talvari dodge the trees as he runs.  He jumps and flips, ducks and rolls.

 

DARTH ZIOST

 

There is no pain where strength lies.  You must be prepared to lose your own life in order to win.

 

Talvari stops and looks at Ziost

 

TALVARI

 

I am prepared.

 

Darth Ziost looks at him curiously.  Talvari stops and stands tall before his new master.

 

TALVARI

 

I am prepared.  (more confident)

 

 

23.    EXT. FIELD – NIGHT (MESSU)

 

The same field where Talvari came up to Darth Ziost to begin training is now occupied by Darth Ziost and Talvari.

 

DARTH ZIOST

 

Anger is a living thing.  Feed it and it will grow.

 

Ziost lashes out his foot, knocking down the turned Jedi.  Ziost twirls his lightsaber around in the air and points it straight at Talvari’s face.

 

DARTH ZIOST

 

(speaking through clenched teeth)  I should kill you for failing.  A Sith warrior cannot fail in battle.

 

At this, Talvari rolls aside, thrashing out his leg, tripping Ziost and sending him falling to the ground.  Talvari leaps up to his feet and drives his lightsaber into the ground right next to Ziost’s head.  Ziost quickly turns to see the lightsaber inches from his head.  He looks back up at Talvari and stands up, brushing himself off, and laughing.

 

DARTH ZIOST

 

Good... Go-od...

 

TALVARI

 

Another ship has landed, Darth Ziost.

 

DARTH ZIOST

 

I know.

 

TALVARI

 

The Jedi High Council has sent someone to look for me.  I can sense it.

 

DARTH ZIOST

 

Let them come.  Then you can show them your new allegiance.  You must destroy them.

 

 

24.    EXT. TALVARI’S CAMP – NIGHT (MESSU)

 

Talvari’s encampment, just outside Reond-Adi’s starship is being investigated by Jaen Galek-Wan and Sadamiri.  Sadamiri is crouched over the fire pit when Jaen emerges from the late Jedi’s starship.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

He’s not in the crusier, but there’s an unfinished meal sitting in the cockpit.

 

Sadamiri touches the fire pit.

 

SADAMIRI

 

He hasn’t been here for a while.  The fire pit’s cold.

 

She stands, wiping her hands together, soot falls from them, and looks over to Jaen Galek-Wan.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

We must find him.  I sense something very dark near... almost, (pauses) cold.

 

 

25.    EXT. FOREST – NIGHT (MESSU)

 

Jaen Galek-Wan and Sadamiri walk through the forest pf Messu searching for their lost friend.  They stop and look ahead, seeing Darth Ziost ahead of them.  Jaen Galek-Wan, feeling a distrubance in the Force, turns around and at Talvari glaring at them.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

Talvari, where have you been?

 

TALVARI

 

Studying the Sith ways.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

You mean your mission to search for Sith artifacts?

 

TALVARI

 

No, not my mission.  I realized something on my mission.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

(almost afraid to ask) And what was that?

 

TALVARI

 

The Sith order has more to offer me.  The Jedi can be so boring.  Saving and protecting everyone that hates and fears us.  It no longer means anything to me.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

(surprised)  You’ve joined the dark side?

 

Talvari smiles evilly.  He then pulls out his lightsaber, ignites it, and changes his stance for battle.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

You traitor.

 

This being said, Darth Ziost charges Sadamiri, lightsaber drawn and humming wildly.  Sadamiri pulls out her lightsaber and activates the yellow blade.  Ziost swings high and lowers his blade upon Sadamiri’s with a loud crack.  Jaen Galek-Wan ignites his lightsaber, and the emerald blade hums to life.  Talvari brings his lightsaber up and down on his old friend’s weapon.  The two push their blades together and come face to face.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

Once you start down the dark path you cannot turn back.

 

TALVARI

 

It’s great over here, old friend.  It’s wild, almost uncontrollable.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

Like a savage beast.

 

TALVARI

 

Not savage, untamed.  Come one... Join me.

 

Jaen Galek-Wan pushes on his lightsaber and throws the turned Jedi backwards.  He raises his lightsaber above his head and rushes towards Talvari.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

(yells) NEVER!!!

 

Sadamiri and Darth Ziost continue their little battle.  The Jedi swings upwards but the Sith blocks the attempt.  Sadamiri backs up two steps to rest but Ziost advances full of life.  She drops to the ground and kicks out, hitting the Sith in the leg and knocking him back.  Sadamiri stands up and points her lightsaber at Ziost’s chest, his weapon only a few feet away.

 

SADAMIRI

 

Stop!

 

Sadamiri remains positioned with her lightsaber close to Darth Ziost’s chest.

 

Talvari and Jaen Galek-Wan continue to battle.  Their lightsabers clash and clash again.  With a swift motion, Talvari jabs his blue blade into Jaen Galek-Wan’s lower side.  The Jedi winces, grips his wound, and falls to the ground, barely conscious.  He drops his weapon, which deactivates.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

Fine.  Your treachery is complete.  You can’t turn back… You’ll never win.

 

Talvari deactivates his lightsaber and steps back, realizing what he had done.  His face reflects his shock and horror.  Jaen Galek-Wan is laying motionless on the ground, half-delirious, and dying.

 

Darth Ziost jumps up, lightsaber jumping to his hand, and grabs Sadamiri’s arm making her drop her lightsaber, which deactivates.  The evil Sith puts the younger Jedi in a headlock with his blade to her neck.  Talvari turns to Ziost and Sadamiri in horror.  He raises his arm towards Ziost.

 

TALVARI

 

Leave her Ziost.  Let me finish her.

 

Darth Ziost pushes Sadamiri towards Talvari and steps back, she falls to the ground no longer supported by the Sith.  He deactivates his blade and stands with his arms crossed.  Talvari activates his blade and walks towards Sadamiri.  He whirls around quickly and kicks Ziost in the chest.  He raises his arms and launches him down the hill with a short burst of Force power.  Talvari looks down the hill but sees nothing.

 

Talvari leans over and helps Sadamiri to her feet.  They both walk over to Jaen Galek-Wan.  Talvari bends down next to the dying Jedi.  Jaen lifts his head and looks weakly at Talvari.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

Go ahead.  Kill me, Talvari.  Once you start down the dark path, there’s no turning back.

 

TALVARI

 

No.  You can turn back.  I’ll make everything right again.

 

Talvari stands up and looks at Sadamiri, who is rubbing her injured neck.

 

TALVARI

 

Take him back to your ship.  Help him… I’m going to fix this.  I’ll be there shortly.

 

 

26.    EXT. FIELD – DAYBREAK (MESSU)

 

Darth Ziost is standing out in an open field, again, looking through a set of macrobinoculars.  Talvari approaches Darth Ziost from behind.  Ziost turns as Talvari ignites his blue lightsaber, Ziost also ignites the red blade on his weapon and walks towards the reformed Jedi.  Talvari holds his lightsaber outstrtched behind him and runs towards the Sith.  When he gets within a few feet off himhe jumps into the air and swings the blade forward and drops it towards Ziost’s head.  The dark Jedi throws his blade up horizontally and deflects the swing.  Ziost pushes the blades up and throws Talvari back.  Talvari’s lightsaber deactivates and he drops the handle.  Darth Ziost throws out his leg and knocks down the young Jedi, and points his crimson blade at the padawan’s necks.

 

DARTH ZIOST

 

You are beaten and will be destroyed.

 

TALVARI

 

No.  Not yet.

 

Talvari’s lightsaber jumps to his hand and he hits Darth Ziost’slightsaber away and jumps to his feet.  Their lightsabers clash back and forth, moving in all directions.  Talvari finally finds and opening and knocks Darth Ziost’s lightsaber out of his hand and knocks Ziost to the ground.  Darth Ziost rolls to his lost weapon and jumps up, weapon in hand, blade extended.  The Sith warrior rushes Talvari right as he jumps aside.  Ziost starts falling forward and Talvari twirls around and lunges his blade in Ziost’s back.  As Darth Ziost hits the ground, Talvari pulls his lightsaber out of the Sith’s back.  (Darth Ziost rolls over to his back.)

 

Talvari stands over the dead Sith for a while looking straight at the gundark’s skull then deactivates his lightsaber and slowly walks off camera.

 

 

27.    EXT. FOREST CLEARING – VIGILANTE EIGHT (MESSU)

 

Talvari makes his way through the forest to the Vigilante Eight.  His lightsaber hangs from his belt, his face serene and calm.

 

 

28.    INT. VIGILANT EIGHT – MAIN HOLD (MESSU)

 

Jaen Galek-Wan lays unmoving on a cot in the starship’s cargo hold.  Talvari makes his way through the ship to the hold to see his friend’s progress.  The injured Jedi moves slightly to see Talvari approach.  The reformed Jedi kneels by his friend.

 

TALVARI

 

Don’t move.  You’ll only slow the healing process.

 

JAEN GALEK-WAN

 

(wincing) What happened?

 

TALVARI

 

(head bows) I… (pauses) won.

 

Sadamiri stands in the passageway between the main hold and the cockpit.  She turns and returns to the cockpit.

 

 

29.    INT. VIGILANTE EIGHT – COCKPIT (MESSU)

 

Talvari walks into the cockpit.  Sadamiri looks up from her final checks and forces a smile.

 

TALVARI

 

Ready to go?

 

SADAMIRI

 

Yes, anytime.  Is everything set out back?

 

TALVARI

 

Yes, let’s go.

 

Talvari and Sadamiri climb into their seats.

 

 

30.    EXT. FOREST CLEARING – DAY (MESSU)

 

The Vigilant Eight’s thrusters fire to life and the ship lifts off into the sky.  The ship blasts out of the atmosphere and into infinity.

 

 

31.    INT. SITH COUNCIL CHAMBER (UNKNOWN)

 

A five-sided table, with a chair at each side, is placed in the middle of a large, dark room.  Guards stand posted at the doors.  Darth Thymar, wearing a long, black cloak stands at his chair facing the council.

 

DARTH THYMAR

 

The Jedi have killed my apprentice, Darth Ziost.

 

The chamber erupts into soft murmuring and low muttering.

 

DARTH RECHLIN

 

You must choose another apprentice, Master Thymar.

 

SHYBON DOONHUR

 

Yes, Master Thymar, Darth Rechlin is correct.  You must choose.  So says the code.

 

DARTH THYMAR

 

I know the code.  A few promising dark Jedi have been brought to my attention Shybon.  I shall look into their potential.

 

 

32.    EXT. NEW JEDI TEMPLE - LANDING PLATFORM (DAGOBAH)

 

The cruiser carrying Talvari, Jaen Galek-wan, and Sadamiri lands on a large marked platform.  Jedi Master Ja-Gon Myrik stands on the edge of the platform, awaiting the Jedi.  The Vigilant Eight’s hatch opens to reveal Sadamiri helping Jaen out of the ship.  Talvari walks over to Ja-Gon Myrik and bows as two Jedi hurry to take the injured Jedi off of Sadamiri’s shoulder.  She then walks over to Ja-Gon Myrik and stands next to Talvari.  Sadamiri bows to Ja-Gon showing respect.

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

Sadamiri

 

SADAMIRI

 

Yes, Master Ja-Gon Myrik?

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

The Council would like to see you now about your journey.  I will be in shortly.

 

Sadamiri walks off into the temple.  Talvari starts to follow but the Jedi Master outstretches his hand to stop him.  The two turn to face each other.

 

TALVARI

 

Yes, Master?

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

You and I need to work on some things.  Then, you and Sadamiri will be sent to finish your training with the great Jedi Master Shinji Vaar off world.

 

Talvari starts to turn and leave but Ja-Gon Myrik stops him once again.

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

Talvari… (pauses) You have seen the dark side.  What is it like?

 

Talvari winces as if someone has just poked a gaffi stick in an open wound.

 

TALVARI

 

Wild. (pauses) It’s like an untamed beast within your heart.  Uncontrollable power, Master.  It starts to consume you.  It’s horrible.

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

We need you Talvari.  We need you to help unlock the mysteries of the Sith.  There is a battle coming, a battle to remember and a battle to have nightmares about.  A fire that will sweep the galaxy.  We have to be prepared.

 

TALVARI

 

I understand, Master.

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

Now I need you to recite the four points of the Jedi Code.

 

TALVARI

 

But Master, I’m free of the Dark Side.  I-

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

(nods) I know, I know.  Please.  (outstretches hand to urge on)

 

TALVARI

 

There is no emotion; there is peace.  There is no ignorance; there is knowledge.  There is no passion; there is serenity.  There is no death… (pauses) there is the Force.

 

JA-GON MYRIK

 

(smiles)  Welcome back.

 

The young Jedi stands there staring ahead.  Master Ja-Gon Myrik steps forward and pats Talvari on the shoulder and walks off into the temple.  Talvari finds himself standing alone but it does not matter, he is at peace.

 

 

33.    EXT. LANDING PLATFORM – NIGHT (???)

 

A stone slab serves as the landing platform for an ancient Jedi temple.  A man, dressed in a long, brown robe stands watching the ship land.  The door opens and Sadamiri followed by Talvari step out.  They carry various duffel bags containing their belongings.  The two Jedi approach the man.  He walks forward also.  The man waves his arm at the ship’s pilot and the craft takes off.  Talvari closes his eyes and concentrates.

 

TALVARI

 

You are not Shinji Vaar.

 

GEEROC

 

No, my name is Geeroc.  You two are Talvari and Sadamiri, the two young Jedi from Dagobah.

 

SADAMIRI

 

Yes, we are.

 

GEEROC

 

Come follow me.

 

Geeroc and the two young Jedi walk off towards the temple with their belongings.

 

 

34.    INT. ANCIENT JEDI TEMPLE (???)

 

Geeroc leads the Jedi through the great temple.  The hallways look just like the ones in the temple on Dagobah only older and darker.  He leads them into a large room with a man meditating on a large platform.  The man awakens and looks over to the new arrivals.

 

SHINJI VAAR

 

Ah… You must be Talvari and Sadamiri. (smiles) Yes.  I have heard much about you.  You were sent here by Master Myrik to finish your studies.

 

SADAMIRI

 

Thank you, Master Vaar.  We won’t disappoint you.

 

Master Vaar smiles and Geeroc leads Sadamiri and Talvari away.

 

 

Iris out: END CREDITS