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S
Sentence-Building Problems
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C
Problems with Conventions
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M, V, O,
&P
Other Problems
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Major sentence-building errors
S1 Write with a sentence structure that is easy to
understand. See
more.
S2 Don't clutter up a sentence with unnecessary
words and phrases. See
more.
S3 A sentence must contain a complete
thought. See
more.
X a) The subject is missing.
X b) The verb is missing.
X c) This is only a prepositional phrase.
X d-e) participles and appositive phrases
X f) This is half of an if-then sentence.
S4 Limit the length of the sentence. (Use a period once in a while!)
See
more.
Moderate sentence-building errors
S5 Write sentences that are consistent. See
more.
XX a) parallelism
XX b) plural-singular
XX c) verb tense
Minor sentence-building errors:
S6 Use variety in sentence length
XX and structure.
XXa)
Avoid a series of short, choppy sentences.
XXb)
Avoid repetitive sentence beginnings.
S7 Don't begin sentences with
XX conjunctions such as and, but, or,
XX or so. These
words should be used to
XX connect things within the
sentence.
S8 Avoid placing words between the
XX word to and the verb that follows
it.
XX (a split infinitive)
XX See
more.
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Major word choice errors
W1 Use strong, specific language. See
more.
a) Replace weak verbs with action
verbs.
b) Move beyond that got a lot of stuff writing.
c) Pronouns must be clear.
d) Avoid all-inclusive or all-exclusive words.
e-g) Other problems. See
more.
W2 Know the elementary-level homophones. See
more.
a) are our
or b) because
cause
c) have of
d) knew new now know
e) then than f)
too, to, two
g) there their they're h) your you're
i) were wear where
W3 Match the verb and its subject. See
more.
W4 Use the correct word. See
more.
W5 Don't switch verb tense without a reason.
See
more.
XXXX Moderate word choice errors:
W6 Use variety in word choice.
W7 Use the correct
pronoun.
XX a) When someone’s doing it, use I, he, she, they, or we.
XX b) When it’s done to someone, use him, her, them, or us.
XX c) After prepositions use me, him, her, them.
XX d) In comparisons, use I, he, she, they, or we.
XX e) predicate pronoun
XXXX Minor word choice errors:
W8 A
pronoun before an ING verb should be possessive.
W9 When describing a wish or an imaginary situation, use
"were" instead of "was".
(subjunctive)
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Major Errors in Conventions
C1 Place the correct
end punctuation at the end of the sentence.
(Should it be a period, a question mark, or
an exclamation mark?)
C2 Don't use unneeded apostrophes. See
more.
C3 Capitalize correctly. See
more.
C4 Don't join two sentences with just a comma (or
worse, no punctuation at all). See
more.
C5 Don't break a sentence in two by placing a
period where a comma belongs. See
more.
Moderate errors in conventions:
C6 Avoid unnecessary punctuation and formatting. See
more.
Xxa) !!!! and ???
Xxb)
by:
Xxc)
Avoid the slash /
Xxd)
prefer the comma to fancier punctuation
Xxe)
no comma between subject and verb
Xxf)
no comma betwn verb & predicate noun or adj
Xxg)
A list must have three items to need commas.
C7 Use apostrophes when needed. See
More.
C8 Use commas when needed. See
more.
XX a) in pairs like parentheses
XX b) in a compound sentence
XX c) with multiple adjectives or adverbs
XX d) after an introduction
XX e) with a direct quote
XX f) in a list
XX g) separating end elements
C9 Use quotation marks correctly. See
more.
C10 Use correct spelling See
more.
XX a) Do not split compound words. Do not
XX combine into compounds words that shouldn't be.
XX b) Use hyphens when needed.
Minor errors in conventions:
C11 Write titles
correctly.
C12 Periods
and parentheses.
C13 If a sentence introduces a list, use a colon. video
C14 Use semicolons
in a list containing lists.
C15 Leave
out the
conjunction when linking a compound sentence with semicolon.
C16A writer may need to use a long
dash to join a long appositive to the end of a sentence.
C17 When using
numbers, know when to spell or use numerals.
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Organization
O1 Organize
material into paragraphs.
O2 Organize with a three-part
structure: Begin with an introduction; develop with a body; end with
a conclusion.
O3 Use transitions. Don't just jump from one topic to another.
O4 Information that is not appropriate should be moved or
deleted.
O5 Find a strong opening line.
O6 Don't cut a good paragraph in two.
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Presentation
P1 Double space everything
except a works cited.
P2 Use reasonable
fonts.
P3 Use one-inch margins all around.
P4 Align text appropriately.
P5 Use two spaces after end punctuation (. !
? …). Use one space after interior punctuation (,
; :).
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Acronyms, capitalization C2-f
active
Voice V3
Agreement, other than subject-verb
agreement,
subject-verb W3
Alignment (centering, left-align, etc.)
Apostrophe
XXX in a contraction C6-a
XXX in a plural C1
XXX in a possessive C6
XXX unneeded.C1
Appositive, as a sentence fragment
Capitalization
C2
XXX first letter of sentence C2-c
XXX proper nouns C2-a
XXX titles C10
Clarity
Colon, unnecessary C5-b
colon
introducing a list C12
Commas C7
XXX with compound sentence halves C7-b
XXX with direct quote and tag C7-e
XXX with end-of-sentence elements C7-g
XXX with a list C7-f
XXX with multiple modifiers C7-c
XXX parenthetical use C7-a
XXX splice C3
XXX unnecessary C5
Compound sentence, comma use C7-b
Compound sentence, repairing comma splice
Compound words, split C9-a
conjunctions beginning sentences S8
Contractions, apostrophe use C6-a
Dialect
avoiding in an essay V4
Direct quote and tag, comma use C7-
Double negative V4-c
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end-punctuation,
correct C4
End punctuation, with direct quotes C8-c
End-punctuation and parentheses C11
focus,
lack of M1
Fonts P2
Fragments S3
XXX missing subject S3-a
XXX missing verb S3-b
XXX only a prepositional phrase S3-c
XXX only a participles
phrase S3-d
XXX only an appositive
phrases S3-e
XXX half an if-then compound S3-f
Gerund and possessive pronoun W8
Hanging Modifier
homophones
W2
Hyphenation
If-Then sentence fragment
Infinitive, split
List, comma use
Lists, with semicolons
long
dash C15
Margins P3
Modifiers
XXX Hanging S1-c
XXX intensifier with a weak word W1-e
XXX misplaced S1-
XXX commas with multiple C7-c
numbers,
to spell or not to spell C16
Numerals, Roman C16-c
Omitted words
Paragraph structure in organizing
Paragraphing with dialogue
Parallelism
S5
Parentheses and end-punctuation
Paragraphing
failure to use O1
Participle Phrase, as a sentence fragment
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passive
Voice V3
Periods
and parentheses.C11
Plurals, misapplied apostrophe C1
Plural-singular Mix-up
Point Of View Shift
Possessive pronoun and gerund
Possessive, apostrophe use C8
Predicate pronoun, case of
Prepositional phrase, as a sentence fragment
Prepositional phrase, too many S2-d
Pronouns
XXX of deities, capitalization C2-g
XXX case as predicate noun W9-a
XXX case after a preposition W9-c
XXX case in a comparison W9-b
XXX case, possessive before a gerund W8
XXX unclear antecedent W1-c
XXX you and I V1
Punctuation, unnecessary C5
quotation
marks C8
repetitive content M4
Roman
numerals needed C16-c
Run-on sentences S4
Semicolons
XXX conjunction
in compound sentence C14
XXX repairing comma splice C3
XXX
in a list C13
Sentence, broken S7
Sentence
Fragment S3
XXX missing subject S3-a
XXX missing verb S3-b
XXX only a prepositional phrase S3-c
XXX only a participles
phrase S3-d
XXX only an appositive
phrases S3-e
XXX half an if-then compound S3-f
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Sentence,
passive Voice V3
sentence
run-on, length S4
sentence
splice C3
sentence,
split. S7
sentence variety S6
Slang,
avoiding in an essay V4-d
Slash, avoiding C5-c
Spacing, line (double or single) P1
spelling
C9
Split infinitive S9
Standard English V4
Subject, doubled V4-f
Subject, omitted S3-a
subjunctive
mood W7
Third person verbs, adding S
Titles, capitalization C10-c
Titles, formatting C10
Topic
Transitions O
Vagueness
Verbs
XXX agreement
W3
XXX Tense, Unnecessary change in S5-c
XXX omitted S3-b
XXX Weak W1-a
Voice, using a consistent V2
Word order confusion S1-d
Wordiness S2
Words, commonly misused W4
Words, omitted
Word Choice, Weak
word
correct choice W4
You V1
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