Murry Bergtraum High School for Business Careers

G. Julian, Principal

English Department, G. Reisin, Assistant Principal
 

Regents Task 2
Based on the unit of The Streetcar Named Desire  by Tennessee Williams
Created by B. Wu & Teri Dennehy

Task II Sample Essay

(Introduction) Over the past few decades, our economy has grown tremendously, providing many new job opportunities.  Increasingly, higher educational degrees and knowledge of new technologies have become necessary in order to attain these job positions and become successful in today's world.  Therefore, high school students should continue their education and gain more knowledge about modern technology in order to make a better living in the future.

(Example 1) To begin with, high school students should continue their education so that they may attain a higher salary.  In recent years there has been an increase in the wage gap between those with a college education and those without.   According to the article, the gap between the average salary of a college graduate and a high school graduate had risen from about a third more in 1980 to more than 70% in 1993.  This steady rise in the ratio of hourly wages is also shown in the second graph.  The ratio has risen from about 1.35 in 1975 to about 1.60 in 1997.  These statistics show that people have a better chance of achieving a much higher salary if they stay in school and achieve a college degree.

(Example 2) Another reason that high school students should strive to attain a college degree is that the job force is becoming increasingly competitive.  Having a higher degree will give students an edge over those who are less qualified.  As stated by the article," In 1997, a record 67% went on to college."  This shows a high increase from the 49% of high school graduates who attended college in 1979.  Since employers have many more qualified individuals to select from they will naturally choose those with higher degrees over those without.  According to the first graph, unemployment is at an all time low.  However, in order for one to be considered for a high-income, top position, one must have achieved a higher college degree.

(Example 3) Lastly, high school students should pursue their education in order to learn more about technology.  This component is extremely necessary in the ever-changing job world.  In fact, community colleges have taken a fundamental role in this effort to educate individuals.  According to the article, "their stepped up training efforts increasingly embrace all workers."  This means that all individuals are required to possess knowledge of the new technology that is becoming an essential part of our everyday lives.  Students should pursue a higher education in order to gain the skills that are needed to succeed in a technologically advanced society.

(Conclusion) In conclusion, high school students should further their education in order to attain success.  This will allow them to attain a higher salary, achieve higher job positions in a competitive market, and develop the technological skills that are needed in all fields.  Through furthering their education, students will be better prepared to achieve their goals and receive the rewards that the job world has to offer.