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Reviews for A Touch of Jealousy

Name:maria
Chapter: All of them
Review:Hi! I'm a Spanish girl, so I'm sorry for my mistakes (I don't write very well English, at least, I understand it quite well). Your story is great, fantastic. Please, keep on writting. I did really enjoy your story. You have to know you do have a fan in Spain. I started a story by myself, but it was about Charmed (do you know it?, it's great), of course it was in my own lenguage: Spanish, but one day, I just stopped writting. Please, don't do that. Ok, so, please keep on.

congratulations. bye, adios.

Mary


Name:Ariel (better known as Faeriefolk)
Chapter:
Review:Hi i love, well adore your story and i can't wait till the next part. This little world you created is great. See my thing is that i want to write a review for Blurb on your story but i can't do that on unfinished works so i hope you finish this so i can write one up thx get in contact with me you post a new chapter thx

-Ariel


Name: raine77
Chapter: 31
Review:does this mean we get some spuffy-loving next chapter?
PLEASE?! :) great chapter, and especially loved Spike's "God, who am I kidding." it was very him. :)
update soon- like, NOW soon, alright? :)

~Raine


Name:Debricka
Chapter:
Review: Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! You're Evil!!!!
I love it and your work!~


Name:spufette
Chapter: 31
Review:Here's a two snaps up! And a big YUMMY!
God, I can't wait until everyone goes to bed in that cabin!

Luv, Spuf


Name:Natalie Marsters
Chapter: 30
Review:i need to know what spike said to buffy while they were kissing, please don't tell me he said dru!!! i really like this fic it's one of the best i've read!!!!


Name:Margie
Chapter: 30
Review:Oh! When will they get back together! Your such a tease! What's the deal? Please please please make it soon!
Good chap. Poor confused Spike. He doesn't know if he's coming or going...


Name:Lucky
Chapter:
Review:Usually I hate reading WIP fics cause the authors take forever to update but i made an exception for this one and im glad i did....this story is very good and you often make things happen that i sooo didnt expect would. Please UPDATE...and make sure Buffy stops ignoring spike and hopefully have Spike get her something really thoughtful for Christmas PLEASE!! UPDATE


Name:Margie
Chapter: 28-29
Review:Argh! I'm dying! I don't want buffy and spike broken up! update soon. please please please? Why can't he just tell her why they fought? And why can't she just tell him what angel said? And why does she have to be so stubborn? They were so sweet slow dancing at the party! Hurry and update! Good idea to force them together for a week. Hopefully they will work it out??? Please???


Name:Debicka
Chapter: 27
Review:Ahhhhhhh! Wonderful if yet short every chapter drives me a little more crazy and I love it too lol!~


Name:NiKiTa
Chapter:25
Review:Ha! I knew it!
It just had to be Giles. I loved the way you've been discretely buiding up to it. It's no secret that this has turned out to be one of my fav stories. Keep the chappies coming. I Love them!


Name:Margie
Chapter: 25
Review:Finally they meet! But what is going on with Spike? Was he being secretive because he knew all along? Why can't they just get over it and start with the luvin and the smoochies already? They're so cute together!


Name:Margie
Chapter: 23
Review:Ooh! You're such a tease! Next chapter please :)


Name:Debicka
Chapter:23
Review:Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! He's a guy for God sakes man!~#!@$$!~!!!!!!! Plan Ahead!~
As Always love you work a wonderful read and I want to kill you!!!
Lmao Chapter 24!@!@!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!


Name:Debicka
Chapter:22
Review:Man this fic is taken over my addiction to surfing I just head straight to Crumbling Walls updates!
Good luck with your school work and thanks for the new chapters lol
Well written a GREAT read! Bo-ko Talents here! I'd give you a Emmy!~


Name:Pat
Chapter:21
Review:Well as usual I am very impressed. Even more impressed that you did the SAFE SEX part.


Name:Mia Devine
Chapter:21
Review:ooooooo...I need more soon! or else! I loves ths story lots and lots!


Name:bansheeh
Chapter:21
Review:great chapter* ............ please post 2-3 chap. at once* .........
.......a question whats up with spuffyarchives ?? the site doesnt work......


Name:Debicka
Chapter: 20 & 21
Review:Love this writer love this story and love how every chapter she leaves me hanging! Everyone must read this and then sit trying not to pull out their hair like I do when the chapter ends!!!!!Ahhhhhhhhhh!~
Can't wait for what happens next!


Name:LILI
Chapter: 21
Review:Two more caps!! I just love tbis fic, and this new cap, HOT!!! WOW!hehe
well, I hope you update soon cause this fic is AMAZING!!!!


Name:kate
Chapter: 21
Review:I love this story soooooooo much, please write more and soon!


Name:Spufette
Chapter: 21
Review: I think the phrase you ended the chapter with pretty much sums it up!

Oh My God!

Thank you, thank you! Luv, Spuf


Name:Regan
Chapter: 20
Review: Great chapter!!! It's about damn time she gave in. I've been following this story since you started it. How pathetic is it that I am just reviewing now? Anyway, great job! Hope to see a new chappy soon :)


Name:Margie
Chapter: 18-19
Review: Argh I love this story :)
Spike's so sweet, sometimes at least. And he didn't even want to take advantage of the poor girl! Hope she feels bad for kicking him out in the morning!
BTW I love the jealousy! Jealous Spike is the best! He's so manly and well, manly :)
Hope you update soon.


Name:Flames
Chapter: 19
Review: Aww Hun, that was a cruel way to end it. But Drunk!Buffy is notoriously bad tempered and modody, so good characterization. Keep it up, I can't wait to read more!

Flames


Name:Spufette
Chapter: 19
Review: Okay, I'm about ready to go to Sunnydale and kick these two loons in the boofys! Ooooh, Spike! Oooooh, Buffy! Are they blind?

Luv, Spuf


Name:Pat
Chapter: ALL
Review: I hope you are writing a real novel or writing on a Tv show, or writing a movie. Cause you are too good to be hiding out here.


Name: LILI
Chapter: 18
Review: That damn phone!!!!
I can`t belive those two, one second they are fighting the other they are... well.hehe


Name: ast*P
Chapter: 18
Review: Hey. I've been following this story for a while, thought it was about time I reviewed. I really like it! Hope you update really soon.


Name: Ashaunatay
Chapter: 18
Review: That was mean to leave us hanging. It was a very good chapter. I am looking forward to the next chapter.


Name: Margie
Chapter: 14-17
Review: Argh! I can't believe you left it there! I love this fic. I never saw the movie you based it on, but I love jealousy fics in general. And now that they are finally getting their exes jealous they can be jealous of each other :) I love the sweet and tender Spike. Hope you update soon.


Name: LILI
Chapter: 17th
Review: First I have to say that I love the fact that yu are updating so fast!!!
second, is that your fic is that the new cap is more than amazing, and how could you stop there?hehe and finally, please keep going on the update fast thing, really good!!!hehe


Name: Kate
Chapter:
Review: Just read this story, it's great. Write more soon.


Name: LILI
Chapter: 16th
Review: I can`t say in words how I love this cap!!! I`s SO cute, and the whole story is AMAZING!!!!
and I`m loving that you are updating so quick, hope read a new cap soon!


Name: Pattue
Chapter: 14 & 15
Review: I just wanted to tell you how much I'm enjoying this story. You're moving them along at just the right pace-building the tension and desire. Very good. Keep it up-can't wait for the next chapters.


Name: Debicka
Chapter: 14 and up
Review: I really love this writers style nothing is forced or insulting to the characters. Writers knows her stuff when it comes to Spuffy. Every chapter leaves you going" Ack!!! Tune in Tomorrow" I've just resently started reading her work and I must encourage every Spuffy lover to do the same! Writer has true talent and a gift for her work. I give it 4 stars! And a Spuffy Award. And as I sit here waiting for more chapters thinking Wow!!! Ahhhhh! Whoa! Woohoo! Hott!!! Please writer have pity on us and post more more more!!!~ ASAP~


Name: Lili
Chapter: 15
Review: The new cap is AMAZING!!!! a lot of spuffy!!! hehe I REALLY loved it!
you say "Review - Makes chapters come way quicker! ;)" and I say, please, please, please, update soon!!!


Name: Johanna
Chapter: 15
Review: I love this fic!! You balance humor and sex so wonderfully and I love the way Buffy is starting to have feelings for Spike - her being uncomfortable how Spike says Dru's name, etc. Spike is coming around, too. Although, his "Betty" is annoying - and that's the point, isn't it? ;)
I look for updates of this story everyday. Please update soon, really soon, very soon.


Name: Spufette
Chapter: 14 & 15
Review: Lord, now I remember why I don't miss High School! Anyhoo, lovely, just lovely, I can't wait until the 2 knuckleheads (Buffy/Spike) wake up and smell the coffee! (Like I wish ME would do on the show!)
Luv, Spuf


Name: Johanna
Chapter: 14
Review:really really goood storyline*
never read such a god fic with this sort of story line *lol*
When are you gonna update ????*