Ai No Senshi Reviews
Reviewer: Sailor Phobus

Splash: *ooooo* Very simplistic, yet complex. I see an almost sophisticated appeal to it. However, what are those at the bottom of your pages about I follow and I'll stop? If those are cliques, you should put them on a cliques page.

4/5

Content I: Awesome, Awesome, Awesome! The interaction area was fun and cool. It kept me entertained for a while, but Luna cheated!!!! And your little slot machine?!?! It stole my money!!! But, moving on to reality, I didn't even check the picture galleries solely because you didn't have thumbnails. What if I was one of those unlucky people and only had a 28 K modem (ok, so that will be me when I go home tonight, but not here at work)? I don't want to wait all day for those pictures to download. I want to see something before I think it's working opening! One line descriptions just aren't enough.

8/10

Content II:
I need to update the profile pages yet <---take the word YET out of that sentence.
Moon Gourgous Meditation<---you mean Gorgeous?
You forgot to add many commas on Mercury's bio page--check her attacks.
Mars Celestial Surround<---That's: Mars Celestial Fire Surround.
You've put two bullets on Jupiter's attacks, and you've missed your spacing after the commas.
You forgot to mention the double attack on Pluto's profile that Pluto and Saturn do.
Concentrate is the correct spelling. (that's on your tic-tac-toe dialogue box).
On the awards page, you FOLLOW simple rules, not folow.

5/10

Creativity/Originality: *cries* Your slot machines gypped me and Luna cheated!!!! But, I still thought it was fun and pretty creative. Thanks for the entertainment! But, on to those profiles/stats pages...you can find that information anywhere! Hence, it's NOT original. Those little pocket books, like Meet Sailor Moon, have all that information and more in them. Perhaps you should try adding more content to your profiles. Giving your opinion about them always help. How about a personality analysis? This is simple if you go to an astrology site and get the personality traits for Aries, Leo, Libra, etc and post them, in conjunction with your thoughts, on your profiles.

7/15

Layout: The whole point of putting the site requirements on the splash page is for optimum viewing. This means omitting things like SIDE SCOLLING!!!!!!!! So, if my browers and monitor meet your requirements, I shouldn't have these kinds of errors. You can fix this by narrowing your third column, since it looks like it has too much extra room.
Your iframe window is too large (from top to bottom). I shouldn't have to scroll top to bottom (in the main window). As a matter of fact, I should be able to see the entire iframe window without scrolling to catch the ends. This way, I don't have to double scroll to read the longer articles. That's annoying and bad planning, and that's also the reason you posted your site requirements.
You definitely have got to make your text colors contrast more on the Constellation Senshi bios. You can't read the text over the Sailor Aquarius logo on the left margin. 4/10 Broken Links: The cats/guardians link doesn't work. If you don't have it up, let us know it's coming soon or take it off the page entirely. You need to update your link for Lycentia's SM WebGraphics Shop. They've moved. Check your California Inc. link--it's gone sour too. Your Obsession link is not functioning either. Sailor Firon's Fire Palace has been suspended. You might want to update that too. Only your poems link works on your My Love Dedication Page. *pouts* I wanted to see pictures!

4/10

Navigation: Ok, I went to the history page...how do I get back? Back buttons!!! Please! No site is complete without them! And I do mean in your little iframe, because I see you have a universal menu, but it doesn't do me much good since I couldn't see it to begin with because of side scrolling. Moving right along, there aren't any back buttons on your stats/bios page...does this mean I have to go through the Info link and then through the Stats link again?? Every single time?!!? Come on now, make it easy. Most of your adoption links don't open in a new window. This is irritating, and especially annoying when the back button on my browser won't get me back to your page and I keep getting redirected to the www.loveofanime.com site. *ugh*
Also, on a side note, you should make the links colors just a little more different than your text colors. I had a *very* hard time trying to find what was and wasn't a link.

4/10

Other Major Errors: On your Links page, you should have all buttons there, unless you've got enough room for those banners without side scrolling (which you don't). It looks neater and more uniform.

8/10

Loading Time: I'm running on a DSL line here, and I thought it was kind of slow. Usually, the pages just pop right up, but yours didn't at all. *wonders why* I dread to go home and try that on my 28 K modem.

8/10

Overall Opinion: Frankly, I'm rather put off by reading the very opening of your page. If I didn't have to complete this review, then I wouldn't have done it. What you say about review sites failing your site is...well...honesty. I mean, you don't go there for an ego boost, but help. Your site was pretty, don't get me wrong, but what failed you here was the mechanical problems. I am a very technical reviewer. I pay attention to grammar, spelling, punctuation, links, looks, etc. I'm not abstract. If you say it, I expect to see it. Here, what irritated me was the fact that you have site requirements, but in reality, your site doesn't even follow them!!! How does that work? easy...it doesn't. If you said it, I expected to see it.
Boosting your site won't be as easy as it looks. Adding the aforementioned information to your profiles can help tremendously! Then, don't forget to fix your links and add back buttons on your profiles, or any page that goes into a sub menu. Also, thumbnails can only help your galleries--forget word links!

5/10

57/100 Super Total

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