First Impression 3/5
It didn't really grab my attention that much. Try to make it a little bit more appealing so people will be more likely to enter the site. Also, since you have an enter button, linking "enter" on your requirements isn't nessessary, actually even putting the text there is unnessessary.
Layout 3/10
Tons of scrolling! I have to scroll to the side, up and down, it's endless!!!! You give the requirements as 800x600, and that's what I'm using and I have to scroll to much. Also, what's with the grey text boxes? It just really doesn't fit the layout. I mean, you have mostly white and then you stick in a grey box? Also, the rust colored text just looked bad. I'm sorry, but it didn't appeal to me at all. Also, don't make your text change colors all the way down the page, which reminds me, the red at the bottom is way to bright. Another note, for having that large a main page, I think you nav. buttons are to small and stuck way to far out in the middle of nowhere. Also, the title text doesn't really fit the layout and it looks kinda bad. Um.. don't align right, it just looks odd. You need consistency. Several pages had different backgrounds or layouts, and they really all should be the same so they fit your layout. Some of the text on some pages blended with the background and was hard to read.
Navigation and Organization 4/10
Why are "galleries" under info? Also, your gallery pages DO NOT need to pop-up. It's pointless and irritating! Back buttons??? Why not have them? Yeah you could just click the nav buttons, but then I have to scroll back up, and a back button would be more convienient. I won't take off for it, but you might want to make sure your image maps actually fit the picture correctly. Oh look, more pop-ups! You don't need to make the fan arts pop-ups, also make sure all your pages follow the same layout. Ok, I'll just say this once more, I think you get the point now but stop making all the pages pop-up!!! Make them fit in the layout!
Content 15/50
This kinda sounds harsh, but you really go for the bare minum on info don't you? I mean, your profiles seriously have an info lack! Also, when I went to Mamoru's page, the background was black with seriously large ugly red text! I think you need to fix that... Also, since the cat's page isn't linked, take it off your profiles menu, having it there is pointless. Text links, ::cringes:: thumbnails? Please? Yeah, you need em. Text links, while haddelable, are very anoying. Well, I liked the Otaku Senshi, they were cool. Take off the bravenet button on your graphics page.
Technical 9/10
A few spelling errors. Not bad.
Originality and Creativity 8/10
The otaku senshi were creative and you did use self-made graphics, but the rest of the site seemed pretty much like most other BSSM sites. Try adding more original sections.
Personal Feel 2/5
There wasn't anything on the site that really pulled me in and want to come back. I got bored while reiewing this site (which is never good), and I didn't really find anything that just stuck out to me.
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