This is my first attempt on a fanfic. If it's really bad, don't kill me.
Please tell me if it's good or bad and some other comments
or suggestions on how to make it better. Oh yeah! I am in the USA so I'm using US names. And also thanks a lot to Angel, KIT and her sister Eden for
helping me revise and think of better ideas.
They're some of the best people around.
If you get time read some of their fanfics, they're really good.
Name meanings:
Tomoyo-Madison
Nikki-Naoko
Rita-Rika
Chelsea-Chiharu
Chapter 1: "The Destruction"
Written by Clow
Angel
She was
totally bored. Walking down the street,
she remembered how she had asked Madison, Rita, Chelsea, and Nikki if they
wanted to go to the mall, but they all said they were too busy or just too
tired to do anything. Now, the only
thing left to do was to walk around, doing nothing...
Sakura sighed in frustration... 'Why is today so slow, anyway?!'
Suddenly, Sakura's key started to glow.
She jumped into some nearby bushes and released her key.
"Key that hides the forces of darkness! I command you under contract!
Show
truth's image to me. Release!" With the incantation said, the key slowly
turned into a staff, which Sakura held onto tightly.
She
ran towards the park where the penguin slide was, feeling that she will find
what she is looking for in there... By
the time she got there, it was too late.
Almost everything was destroyed.
She watched in horror as the slide crumbled and broke into billions of
pieces.
Something
was coming behind Sakura. She didn't
see it, but a boy with his chestnut colored hair waving against the wind,
wearing a green robe did.
His
quick brown eyes just as quick as his mind, he drew out his sword with his
right hand. He saw what was going to
happen. If he didn't do something fast,
Sakura will be badly hurt and he wouldn't be able to stand that happening.
He
jumped out of the tree he was hiding behind and shouted, "Lightning!"
Sakura
was totally surprised as she turned around.
"Li?" she asked in amazement.
"I'll help you out on this one, as usual," Li said, quite
proud of himself for saving Sakura's life.
Li and
Sakura fiercely attacked the card together.
Li used his sword while Sakura used her staff, the sword, fight, and
watery cards were helping too. They
also tried their best to protect each other.
They battled the card for quite a long time. Finally, the card seemed to
weaken. Li, noticing this, called out
to Sakura, "Capture it! It's
weakened!"
Sakura
nodded and obediently captured it. "Clow card return to your true form,
confined!"
The
card landed in front of her. She slowly
bent down and picked up the card.
It read THE DESTRUCTION.
Sakura
turned to Li to thank him, but then noticed that his left arm is bleeding.
Quickly realizing that the card must have injured him during the battle, she
walked to up to him, intent on helping.
"Are you okay", she asked him with a concerned look on her
face.
Li
stopped a smile as he thought, 'She looks so worried for me...' and finally
replied, "Yeah, I'm okay".
"Let
me help you bandage it " Sakura as she wrapped the wound up with a piece
of cloth which she had ripped off her own shirt.
As
Sakura bandaged his wound, Li began blushing furiously. He looked straight into her eyes.
'Her
eyes looks so carefree and loving,' he thought, mesmerized... Finally, he came back into his senses and
said, " I'm fine. I ought to leave
now." He turned and walked away
thinking about Sakura.
Sakura
sighed as she watched him leave. 'I love you,' she thought as the green robe
disappeared from sight... She gathered
up her stuff and smiled to herself at the thought then turned around to leave.
More to come . . . .
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So, how was it? Did
you like it? More will come. There are more chapters coming. Please tell me how it was.
-Clow Angel