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Kirei, neh? *grin* I'm very happy about this one. The words are probably hard to make out, but that's kinda better. Parts got cut off so it makes less sense, but deals with the bone I pick on in Chapter five- the idea of destiny and things that are "supposed" to happen. The blonde is Lakishana, and she's Elvish. We finally get to meet a real Elf! Aphraell knows bits of the language, but I want to get into Elvish culture and the like. Her ear's kinda small but... it's fine. I had to doctor their skin a bit... markers are crappy skin tones. But I tried. Like? ^ - ^