One-Year Comment(ary)
As of... nowish, it's been one year since August Moon was first posted. It does seem that long though, likely because i've seriously neglected it for the better half of 2001. That's not to say that i'm not going to finish it- because i want to. I really dislike it when i'm reading a fic, but the author never finished it. I think we all know how iritating that can get, and that's not to blame the author, but the annoyance factor still stands.
I've been getting older, and subsequently busier as ever, so sadly, August Moon has been thrust to the bottom of my "To-Do" list time and time again. As said before, i will finish this ... even if it takes me a few years ^.^
Arc I
Arc I got off to a good start, then a bad part, then a worse part, then a lame part, then it picked up a little, then it got back to the lame part. (Yeah, can you tell i'm not too please with it?) That's not to say i hate it, i just think, no i know i can do better. Characters are out of character, it reads like a Soap Opera half the time and there are plot-holes up the wazoo! That said, i'll be editing and re-writing Arc I soon- obviously this will interfere with my writing of Arc II, but once i get this off my chest i'll be able to focus better.
Arc II
There's not much to say about Arc II, as i only have one part posted. I do have high ideals for it though *knocks on wood* i just hope i don't jinx it. I feel more comfortable writing about Zoisite and Kunzite (for obvious reasons) so hopefully Arc II will depict some of my stronger fiction skills.
Plot (holes)
Yeah, there are a lot of those, arn't there. If i'm really bored one day, maybe i'll do a "Mystery Scienc Theatre" to one part. (Yeah, when i'm really bored.) I do need to find some direction in this story though, it's really hopping all over the place. I do know how it's going to end, so i guess that's something.
Yeah, i know this is pretty lacking- i'll be adding to it once i edit and re-read everything (since i can't remember what i wrote)
(And on another note, i just noticed now i have pretty crappy grammar.)