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Tien didn't know no one did until it was to late.....

Tien was outraged now cursing at himself doing anything to let out the hurt. The others watched in tears they were in as much pain as he. Except for his was worst than the others. " Tien stop it there was nothing you could've done." Goku did his best to explain ,Tien would simply ignore and go on the tantrum he was throwing. Goku looked back at the others and his eyes swelled up with more tears. " Goku give it up he wont listen, he never will. Just let him move on." Krillin was now sitting down looking at the ground in sorrow.

"We can't just leave him here all alone." Goku was kind of annoyed at Krillin's remark. Bulma gave a gesture, saying that she would try. "......Tien, I'm sorry about what happened but we gotta move on one day." She looked down at where he was sitting. Tien calmed down and sighed. Tien looked back at Goku in a confused sad way. Goku looked straight in his eyes (the two normal ones =P).

All Goku really saw in those eyes that day was a lost little boy with nowhere to go, no one to run to, no where to hide,Confusion , fear , guilt, and the sorrow that engulfed him , not the same light , crystal clear green eyes he used to see (i'm not a dramatic person). " Lets go." Gohan was getting even more sadder as the minutes passed on. They all flew off with Tien straggling behind. When they got to Capsule Corp. everyone sat down. Tien had to struggle to his seat being careful not to fall from weakness. He was trying to hide his weakness. He slouched over and waited for what would be said. There was a eerie silence throughout the room.

Even Vegeta was silent (surprisingly enough). Then Krillin started to snore. Vegeta popped him as hard as possible. The silence was broken with a large thud on the floor. Krillin had done been knocked out of his seat (thought Tien done collapsed eh?). "That ought of shut him up." Vegeta looked guilt stricken as 18 looked at him in an evil face. Vegeta backed off. 18 neared. 18 striked. 18 hit homerun. Vegeta fell on the floor in pain. " STOP IT !" Chichi got up. " Tien has been through so much today. I'm sure he wants some peace and queit in here!" Chichi stated firmly as she neared Tien to make sure he was okay about all this. She asked him and he just smirked. Chichi smiled in a kind of happy way and went to go cook cupcakes for everyone. Goku followed and never came back alive (he's one greedy fellow). Chichi came back with the cupcakes and gave Tien one instantly. " I don't want one." Tien through the cupcake (you'll hear why he through it). It hit the wall and made a hole.Vegeta looked at it. " Chinese Fighting Cupcakes Chi chi's specialty." Krillin said joking around. Vegeta hit him again and almost didn't survive 18's attack. While Vegeta was in the critical care unit, everyone was trying to lift Tine's spirit, but every try they failed. "Why don't you all stay here until we get over this." Bulma was trying to be of help. " Yes, we all will. It will be more safe this way ." Goku looked up at Tien. " But if you want to leave I can't stop you." Tien sorta sighed and sat there. " Who do you supposed would do such a thing?" Goten was curious now (I bet your thinking HFIL he's curious). "BUU would!!" Bra said, (stiking her nose in other peoples business). Uub looked up at her. "I'm not bad anymore you slut." Vegeta got up and almost killed Uub beafore Chichi stormed in and attacked him (Tien's got Chichi on his side scary huh?). "We might as well all go to bed. Its 11:31 Pm. anyway." Everyone got up in there rooms while Goku stayed downstairs with Tien (okay so Goku's alive). " You going to go to bed soon?" Goku said as he started to walk upstairs( that sounded gay). " Yes I will." Tien stared at the T.V. to see what tomorrows weather would be. " Okay. Goodnight!" Goku went to his room on the 5th floor. Tien got up and stampeded upstairs to his room on the sixth floor. Almost falling a few times he made it. He got in the bed and couldn't sleep as he remembered that horrible moment he lost his best friend..... forever : (heres the story) Tien and Choutzu were having a normal day. Training, making fun of Vegeta and his kids names (whose knows they might actually do that), and doing whatever.

Then the sky went pitch black, instantly. Tien and Choutzu looked up and sensed a strange power heading straight for them. Tien stood up and so did Choutzu. For all they knew she/he was strong.

Then the fight begun whith no warning. The enemy dug its claws into Tien's back and scraped down (oochies).Choutzu flung around and managed to hit the enemy once or twice. Tien noticed somting floating in mid air he fired at it whith a Dodon ray (is that how you spell it?). He hit it but unfortunately it didn't hurt the danged thing. Tien flew up to it and they went into combat. Tien was able to hit a few times. But the thing started to attack again. It lashed it's claws out and attacked fiercely (I'm a bad speller) knocking Tien to the ground. Choutzu started to charge at it. Then Chouzu felt something cold run through him. He felt limp and lifeless as the pain got more painful. Tien was stunned he couldn't move. Thoughts nd memories of their good times and bad ran through his head as if there were no tomorrow. The thing ran tworawed. He still stood petrified at the site. Then it all went... black. (Back to our story) Tien stared at the ceiling hoping to think of something else. " AHHHH!!!!"He heard a scream from downstairs. " Huh... Who's there?" Tien ran downstairs to find Bra and Vegeta watching scary movies. Vegeta looked up at him. " I swere I'd be asleep if I were you. Going through that much in a day. Why are you up anyways?". Tien looked back down at him." Im not tierd. What are you watching?" Tien started walking up to them. "Scary stuff!!!!" Bra looked really scared."Huh. Wait those are pictures of Piccolo." Tien was confused now. " Piccolo so ugly he's scary." Bra screamed again as Vegeta turned the page to more pics.

"Wanna look at them with us?" Bra looked up at him and smiled. "No thanks." Tien had noticed a pic of Choutzu,Bulma,Goku,himself, and Chichi posing like the ginyu force in Bulma's backyard. Tien was Bata and Choutzu was Jeice. Bulma was Jissu and Goku was capitin Ginyu. Frog Ginyu was in Choutzu's lap screaming like a woman. Bra looked down at the pic. Tien was looking down now. " I miss him to." Bra hugged Vegeta and started to whine. Vegeta closed the book. " This is enough for tonight. We should all go to bed now." Vegeta went upstairs to his room. Tien went to the balcony to gaze at the stars. " What the everliving fuck?" Tien smelled a strangre smell in the air. " Damn what is this!?" He felt weaker than beafore. Things started to spin, he fell to his knees. Tien turend around to see a smirking Goku. Things went black.

Part two the bold and the brave coming soon

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