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Welcome to the review page. Here I'll review your otaku senshi(I ALWAYS give good reviews!. Send me as many as you like.
Anyhoo, I'll be rating your senshi based on the following:
Profile: Detailed info about name, astro sign, blood type, likes and dislikes, etc.
Guardians: Does your senshi have a guardian? What kind, and how old? What is its personality?
Henshin phrase and item: What does your senshi say to transform, and what does she use?
Realm of influence: What element(s) does your senshi use, and where do her powers from?
Powers: What sort of attacks and powers does your senshi have? The more descriptive you are, the more impressed I'll be. Remember, different abilities are fine, but lots of attacks aren't always a good thing.
History: Tell me about your character's past and how she became a senshi. I like stories, and so do the rest of my senshi!
Originality: Did you come up with an original story idea?
Please email all review requests to saturnfan80@yahoo.com.
Guardians: Oo, A bat. I don't think I've seen one of those before. That's very original on your part. Crimson sounds cute, by the way.
Henshin: Pretty standard, but the black bat thing is cute. I like that random little change.
Realm of influence: Definitely ice. Another standard choice, but you've done a good job with the attacks.
Powers: I do like your attack names, and how you describe them. You put an interesting twist to the standard ice power. Aquarius Star's weapon is also an interesting addition. I've never seen a senshi with that kind of power, though I do have one that can protect or kill souls by reaching out to them.
History: Looks like an angst story to me, but that's okay. The history is just enough to make me want to read more about her, which is always good. I've got a few antisocial senshi myself...hmm, sounds like a fanlisting to me!
Originality: Looks like you've taken some common aspects of otaku senshi and added your own touch. I can tell that you've put some work into her.
Overall: 9/10.
SENSHI REVIEW: SAILOR PHEONIX (that's how she spelled it; never mess with the creative mind! ^_^)
30 July, 2003
Created by: peanut_butter419
The background is quite original; the several cycles of death and rebirth to go along with the name is quite fitting. In an interesting twist, Pheonix and her senshi were hated by their people after her family was killed in her first cycle of life.
Hi-chan's profile includes the basic likes and dislikes, along with an interesting description of her personality and background. For anyone who's curious, her powers are, naturally, flame-based.
Overall, I'd give this one a 10/10. Very original, very tragic character that has room to grow in spite of her mistrust of others.
The character: Sailor Bellum is an interesting character and is considered more of a guardian than a senshi. I like the non-royalty idea; not all of my senshi are royalty either. I also like her punk/goth aspect :)
Powers: Bellum's powers appear to deal with war/battle. I've seen a couple of senshi like that, but it's a nice change from the usual elementals. I also like the combined attack with her fellow guardians; I've seen combined otaku attacks become a growing trend, and I like it.
History: A nice little paragraph about guardians of realm gates and solar systems, a battle, and appearance on Earth for rebirth.
Overall rating: 8.5 out of 10. I'd love to see fanfic for this one.
