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Guys At The Club

By Iseoie

First of all i'd just like to give u a bit of info on my made up character iseoie

name: iseoie

age:23

weapon:double edge (two 2meter long blades)

birth place: ryukyu kingdom

occupation:pirate

ok now on with the story

maxi kilik and hwang walk into a night club filled with men and women dancing 4 girls catch their eye. The girls are standing at the bar having a drink and a chat.

Maxi:hey!, check them out (he says with a cheeky grin on his face) the three men walk over to them and stand there

maxi: hi (he says to one of the girls)

iseoie : hello (she says with no intrest at all)

maxi : where you from?

iseoie: ryukyu kingdom

maxi: no way! me too

iseoie : really

maxi then talks to another girl standing at the bar

maxi : hey whats your name?

venus : venus (she said not looking at him)

maxi then stands in between the two girls putting his arms round them

kililk: hello.... (he says in a nervous voice)

xianghua: hello

kilik: whats your name?

xianghua: xianghua

kilik: thats a nice name

then to the right of kilik hwang is chatting up the 4th girl at the bar

hwang: so any ways i said long time no see and you'll never guess what he said

seung mina: what

hwang: yeah you two (hwang starts to laugh as mina looks totally bored)

maxi: any ways fellow ryukyuen whats your name

iseoie: iseoie -_-

the guys stay there several hours drinking

maxi: hey guys lets go and do karaoke

hwang + kilik : yeah come on!

the 4 girls stand at the bar and watch maxi hwang and kilik get up on stage

they strat to sing : " i love you baby and if its quite alright i love you baby won't you hear what i say!"

maxi then wakes up finding himself in his bed on his pirate ship

maxi: man what a freaky dream