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Sharpen Your Sentences
THE ACTIVE VOICE REACHES YOUR READERS ![]() It's time for a grammar lesson. I'll keep it brief. Use the active - not the passive voice. These sentences are in the active voice because they show that the subject acts, or does something: ![]()
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2. is more personal 3. uses fewer words 4. is easier to follow 5. is easier to remember Cut "I think," "I believe," "I know," "It seems to me that," "In my
opinion."
![]() We think prices are already too high and know people are hurting.
Sentences that begin with "There are..." often weak. Try rewriting them. ![]() There are alternate ways that must be found by us to solve the problem.
2. If it is possible to cut out a word, always cut it out. 3. Never use the passive where you can use the active. 4. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent. 5. Break any of these rules sooner than say anything barbarous. Excerpt from "How To Write & Give A Speech" by Joan
Dee
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