If you make another fanfic, make it BETTER.
No... you still need some improvement there.
Oh, I know you can do better than this...
You're getting there... just a couple of points off of the rack...
It's decent. Let's keep it at that.
Pretty good! Keep it up and you can be known by web surfers everywhere!
You know, if you get even better at this, you might even try becoming a writer when you grow up!
You've got the words "author author author..." written all over your face.
No, really, you should be an author when you grow up!
THAT FANFIC SHOULD BE PUBLISHED INTO A BOOK!!!!
