Alexandria's rating:
Alexandria's comments: "Hmmm... not sure what to say, Pikapuff. The plot is very good, but there's a line that did some damage. You don't like Ash, no? Well, next time try not to insult him without it being in parentheses, stating your opinion. I would think that authors create stories for *everybody's enjoyment*. If this fanfic is only for those who hate Ash, then you may want to think about brining the fanfic to a site *fully* didicated to Team Rocket."