Empathetic Clairsentience Ruby- Awww, this is a truely wonderful awakening inside yourself to understand what different trials of life are out there and a true interpretation to how they make you feel! I think a majority of women can relate to this piece. Your thoughts are verbatim and sound clear with your words. Perfection!

Empathetic Clairsentience Dave- Clairvoyance is a powerful gift.The power of prescient thoughts can be overwhelming.Empathetic sensations go hand in hand with clairvoyance.Interesting, intense poem!

Empathetic Clairsentience SoElandra- Powerful description of the effects of clairsentience on the inner individual psyche, the pain felt by the viewer, really well communicated and the asking for relief from psychic vision on one's knees, great line "peel my mind from yours" great poetry by a sensitive, P.S. It takes a lot of inner strength to see and still be.

Selfish Humanity Dave500- What a wonderful,truthful poem!Most people are concerned with self.Self-preservation,self-interest and self-ishness.Nice writing.Keep it up!Peace be with you.The author has a sensitive heart.

Selfish Humanity Wieuco- Wow... Nicely done. Very deep, very emotional, and also very true. Tough subject matter, It really touched me. You did a very commendable job sticking to your rhyme scheme and it flowed very well. No suggestions from me, just appreciation. Nice job!

Like a Moth to a Flame Mangben- With its good use of rhyme and meter as well as imagery, this poem is so beautiful and powerful. I like the metaphor of the moth to a flame to illustrate soeone falling in love to someone who is as hot and as consusming as a flame! this poem shows the craftmanship of the author--very skilled.

Like a Moth to a Flame Ambika1978- I got chills for this one. Good strong writing. You have a good title and you gently walk me through to feel your love. This is positive sharing of hope and faith and charity of words. Peace and good will. Big smiles.

Like a Moth to a Flame KeithTotton- This has a very good flow from beginning to end. The writer kept building to a very effective ending.Very good rhyme Phrase and imagery . Reads nicely. I like this one very much.

Cemetary Mary Laurel46- Wonderful poem and flowing so well, It is beautiful and is so well written, Thanks for sharing your very good talents with us all. BRAVO!

Cemetary Mary Nmemmott- Oh my God, I love this poem. The imagery is great, the meter is consitant and you really empathize with Mary. Though impoverished she wants to share her sympathy with the forgotten in the cemetary.

Feathers AnnGlendenning- THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING POEM! YOU HAVE TOUCHED ON A SUBJECT THAT MANY OF US WOULD LOVE TO BE ABLE TO FEEL, THE INNER PEACE AND HOW WONDERFUL OUR DREAMS CAN BE! WELL DONE I REALLY LOVE YOUR WORK!

Feathers AlphaTK7- Wow, that was a really POWERFUL poem, and yet, so delicate, like a sweet little prayer. I think that was very nice, and it flowed so smoothly too! It wasn't so unproportional like some poets like to make theirs. It seems that you made this poem a very nice piece of literary art, and, at the same time, conveyed your message about dreams very effectively (to me, at least, but I'm sure, to others as well). Not a lot of people can do that. keep writing! You have a very interesting style that... is one in a million. I can really see you as changing the world someday.