NOTES:
BT 219 TV Prod Writing

DOCUMENTARY ELEMENTS:

Though there are a number of types of documentary that have significant differences there are ELEMENTS that are common to most documentaries. These elements need to be considered when analyzing a documentary you watch or one that you make.

Broadly speaking there are two categories of elements…

…CONTENT elements and FORM elements.

The FORM elements are, in no order of importance..

Visuals

Images, cutaways, coverage, visuals, are described by various terms and represent the key to a powerful successful documentary. The visuals are the key to 'showing' your audience what they need to see to grasp the meaning of the documentary. As a rule student documentaries are weak in this area. Having visual coverage of your topic is critical in avoiding talking heads. Having visual coverage is key to structuring your 'doc' in the editing phase. Finding 'good' visuals can be a challenge for some subjects. Some subjects require real creativity in finding things to show. Remember a key question any producer will want to know of a television documentary is…'what can you show!'. If you can't show it then you have a radio documentary

Interviews

The interviews are the 'bread and butter' or your documentary. The interviews provide the information, the insight, the emotion , the reality of your subject/topic. Without good interviews i.e. well shot and well recorded- and good from a content point of view- i.e. the subjects addressed the important questions on camera you need them to address, your documentary will fail. The success of the interviews depends to a great degree on the level of trust established between the interviewer and the interviewee and the questions asked. Many student 'docs' are weak because they fail to ask the important questions. Also students tend to assume that all you need to complete a documentary is a series of interviews.

Narration

To narrate or not to narrate…that is the question. As a rule you use a narrator only if it is absolutely necessary. Student productions often suffer here because of the poor writing of the narration/copy and the difficulty of finding and directing a narrator. These problems are faced by professionals as well. Some narration to explain what is not obvious or to link sections may well be unavoidable. Good narration can add a great deal to a documentary.

Sound

Broadly speaking sound is mainly a technical issue but when one considers that sound embraces everything from interview sound to narration to ambiance to music and effects, it should also be clear that sound is an aesthetic issues as well. Consider Microcosmos and the care and planning that went into getting the sound of the insects and the rain etc. Sound is frequently given poor consideration in student documentaries.

The CONTENT elements are in no order of importance

Theme/POV/Core Assertion/Angle/Issue are all terms applied to the implicit or explicit statement about your topic that emerges at the end of your documentary. You will have one whether you plan it or not OR if you don't then you will likely have a failure because you will have failed to have any point of view pro, con or otherwise. There is nothing wrong with having an opinion. Indeed 'opinionlessness' is the enemy of a good documentary. Taking a position does nor mean the same as bias. If your topic is clearly one with opposing sides then you are obliged to strike a balance between both and give both opinions the opportunity to emerge. Bias is almost always obvious and tends to anger most viewers and drive them toward the other opinion even if they were not so inclined to begin with. This content element is the most difficult to define BUT it is at the core of what makes a good or bad documentary. An implicit 'assertion' at the core of most of the good nature documentaries we see today is that these animals, plants, parks etc -whatever the topic- are wonderful, precious things to be protected and admired. The POV at the core of 'Surviving the Reform', which incidentally is implied in the title, is that cut backs to health care that effect the very vulnerable mentally ill are being done with little regard for the welfare of those who need the care and may threaten to hurt them. The core assertion of the Clifford Boggess story was stated off the top. Its an examination of a murderer who confessed his crime and whether capital punishment made sense. The more clearly you can define your core assertion the better your documentary will be.

You should try to begin with a working hypothesis in mind which is to say a point of view even though there is a good possibility this will change as you progress.

Structure

Though you may not think of the documentary as the same as a drama or a story film you must realize that you are telling a story and like a good story the beginning, the complications, and the ending and the arrangement of all the internal elements are critical to the success of your documentary. This organizational plan or arrangement we will call STRUCTURE. Indeed, without a structure you will be able to proceed only so far. You can't edit your piece until you decide on the structure. The earlier you can determine a structure the better, in most cases. Structure means, for example, deciding on what you will open with, how you will arrange the different interviews you have and what you will end with. Some topics that are clearly 'issue' based may demand a pro and con structure where you alternate between viewpoints, comparing and contrasting each one. An event centered documentary may demand that you start with the preparation phase and end with the event ( say an athlete preparing for a race and ending with her/him winning ot losing). Different topics will demand different structures. A good part of your creative energy will go into imposing a structure on your material. Remember the major sections of the Clifford Boggess documentary . The intro where we met Boggess, the murder, what he did, then his history, who he was, then back to the present, what he’s like now, and finally the outcome, his execution. Without a solid structure you will have lack of clarity or much worse confusion.

Progression and Climax

Related directly to structure are the ideas of progression and climax. Your material must be seen as progressing somewhere…going forward or deeper into the topic. There has to be a sense of movement in the viewer's mind. (PACE is the technical part of progression.) Progression involves introducing new material or ideas relating to the topic as the documentary unfolds. When the viewer gets the sense that the story is 'dead in the water', or 'going nowhere' then he/she is observing that there has been no progression. Things may just be repeating. Progression is another vital element to a good documentary. The END of the PROGRESSION should be the CLIMAX. The climax is the high point of tension. The moment just before the conclusion where the topic reaches its outcome. In the Clifford Bogus documentary the climax comes obviously with the death of Bogus by lethal injection. A profile of an athlete may climax with his winning or losing a competition. Some topics do not so clearly lead to a climax and sometimes you must search for a way to create one.

------------------------------------------------------- Documentaries in the Resource Centre

Avro Jet Liner - the story of Canada’s great achievement in airline design that was squashed.

Frontline: The Lost Children of Rockdale County - Sex Drugs and violence in an affluent US County
What’s up With The Weather- 2 hr doc on Global warming

Biography:
Charles Manson
Ted Bundy

Nova:
Surviving Aids
Super Bridge

Tough Guise - Violence Media and the Crisis in Masculinity
Burning Times - The history of the persecution of Witches in Europe
Romeo and Juliet in Sarajevo- a unique story about the Balkan conflict

The War Against the Indian
Kanehsatake

Not A Love Story - on pornography

All the Right Stuff - teens and consumerism

Superior Under the Shadow of the Gods- history of Lake Superior

Drowning in Dreams- profile of Fred Brummel a Thunder Bay diver and inventor

East side Showdown- a battle over a Toronto neighbourhood

Turning Away - on Toronto street Kids

Through A Blue Lens - Vancouver Cops document the Drug scene in East side

First Nations Blue - on policing a reserve [by a Film grad]

Scared Straight- on an unusual program for delinquent teens

Burns Bog- A fight over an environmentally precious area in BC

Parrots Look Who’s Talking

**Any doc from FRONTLINE or NOVA is acceptable

**Any doc not on this list must be approved by Eric before writing a critique.

Writing the Feature Documentary


While neither as glamorous or lucrative as feature films, nor as noble as a significant stage play, writing documentary scripts still offers challenge, compensation, creativity, and credits. A producer once told me, "There are no boring film subjects, only boring filmmakers!"


Any time you see a show about nature, or a biography, or a host of other subjects, the narrator is reading from a script, which had to be written by somebody. And that somebody was paid, worked and sweated over just the right combination of words, and undoubtedly felt satisfaction upon hearing the words broadcast.


While there are boring documentaries that seem to go nowhere and prattle on endlessly, there are also documentaries that present interesting information in a fresh and exciting way.


When writing a documentary script, there are many of the same components to go through as with any other dramatic script. Aristotle's dramatic elements still apply: theme, plot, dialogue, characters, spectacle, and music.


Theme
What is the documentary about? In the traditional theatrical sense, there is a theme and a protagonist trying to achieve some goal. While there may not be an emotional theme to a documentary show, it still is about something: a location, an historical person or event, some aspect of nature, or some explanation about a technical invention. There will also be some aspect of the subject, such as the person being benevolent, the location being exotic, or the invention being useful. As with theater, this theme needs to be maintained throughout.


Plot
The story line, while probably not as action-packed or emotional as a Hollywood feature, will still be the vehicle through which the theme is portrayed. There may not be a protagonist on a compelling quest, but the level of interest in the viewer certainly needs to be considered carefully. As with any show, the writer needs to constantly be mindful of whether the show maintains interest to the viewer, gives the viewer a reason not to change channels ... a reason to come back after the commercials. Historical and biographical subjects, for example, frequently employ reenactments to provide action. With nature and location subjects, as another example, there are the exotic and varied plants and animals.


Dialogue
This may be the most challenging area for the scriptwriter, especially if the documentary focuses on technical aspects. The key here is to present the information in a way that the average viewer will be able to comprehend easily, but at the same time includes all the details needed. With historical documentaries, for example, there may be many dates, names, and events. Just rattling them off will lose viewers quickly. The scriptwriter, therefore, must incorporate them into the dialogue in a casually conversational tone, providing the information without sounding like a lecture.
An important aspect of dialogue for such shows is the standard theatrical adage of "show, don't tell." Letting the camera tell the story as much as possible will greatly benefit the production.

Spectacle
This is where the camera really takes over. The good scriptwriter does not write every camera angle nor every shot and close-up. As with theater, let the director do that job. Even so, the scriptwriter should suggest types of shot needed, such as a panorama of a location, or views of old painting and photographs. Provide an adequate foundation for the director to make the film.


Music
Many times, documentaries will hire someone to score the film. After all, moviemaking is much more a team project than writing a script for a play. Similar to the camera shots, the scriptwriter may suggest certain types of music, such as a broad and majestic score for a beautiful panoramic scene. Particular songs or song types may be suggested.


Summary
With all the information a writer will put into a documentary script, it should be remembered that creating a movie will be the result of many creative talents. Unlike the theater, where the playwright traditionally has complete control over the script content, in the movie world, the director is the person with complete control, accepting input from the producer(s), writer(s), and many other stakeholders. While a strong ego is necessary to commit one's personal thoughts and (sometimes) reality to paper, such an ego must also be flexible enough to withstand the multiple personalities and sources of inputs that will become part of the final production.

Narration

Finding the right narrator and directing a good reading is one of the most difficult aspects of making documentaries" (Rabiger)

To narrate or not to narrate that is the question ! When do you decide?

"normally settled during editing.... " (Rabgier)
its strengths
getting the film underway linking sequences keeping the film moving providing a sense of resolution focus attention and avoid confusion

The Narrators voice is the voice of the film itself, audience makes judgement about the film's intelligence by what it says AND by the quality and associations of the voice.

"goal is to let the viewer make her/his own judgements from the evidence you are giving not from the voice/narration."

Two methods used:
a)write a script and have someone read from it b)slightly improvised

Improvised
•Several ways. Show a rough script and have reader paraphrase (tough)
•Give narrator a character to play, then interview the character and use the responses as the narration after editing out director's voice

The importance of 'oral' copy in narration

it must be read aloud active not passive voice avoiding jargon maximum meaning out of a few sylables (like poetry)

The importance of voice quality

When writing the narration:
look at each section of the film, write what you think is necessay , then read it with the film be sensitive to the rhythms of outgoing and incoming sequences

Adjust the syntax to accommodate impact of incoming shot

e.g. the shot:

big rising sun with a small figure toiling across the landscape("She goes out alone before anyone else is about")
accommodating to the sequence of the viewer's perception
("Early, before anyone else is about, she goes out alone")
also you may need to alter to accommodate a sound effect or sound feature
The Power of the first word to fall on each shot (p 132-133)
much like altering the meaning by word empahsis see Fig 13-2

Operative words

in any piece of narration or speech there are strong and weak places against which to make a picture cut (p134)
"I want you to wait right here and don't move. I'll talk to you later."
a likley reading
" I want you to wait right here and don't move. I'll talk to you later.

Complement don't duplicate

narration should add to the image never describe the image's content.
Try out the narration with a scratch recording
could be your own voice run against a rough cut (as a test run)

SAMPLE PROPOSAL
Shipping/Receiving
(a proposal for a short documentary)

On any given work day at Confederation College thousands of dollars of material come and go. Fifty thousand dollar cameras are sent out for repairs or returned after being repaired, new computer software programs arrive so the computer system keeps running smoothly, chairs arrive for the library, books for the bookstore and soup for the cafeteria. All of it has to be checked and recorded, or packaged or insured or distributed by the staff of the shipping and receiving area .

Tucked away out of sight an mainly out of mind at the back of the Shuniah building is the shipping and receiving area of Confederation College. The staff of two, Glen and Mary are the first contact for all the goods, mail, purchases, rentals that come to the college. They must see that whatever arrives is checked properly and shipped out to the students and staff that are waiting, sometimes eagerly, for that special something that will make their work easier.

Shipping and Receiving [SR]will document a day in the life of this vital service area of the college. Starting from early morning until the end of the day SR will follow the staff of shipping and receiving as they go about their work. Interviews with the staff will explain their jobs, their good experiences and their bad experiences and capture the dynamics of a day in SR. The 4 minute documentary is not simply a how-it-works video but a tribute to the people who we often take for granted but who do a job that is vital to the institution.

Glenn and Mary have agreed to participate in the documentary. We have been given complete access to all the areas of SR we may require.

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Below is a commercial companies' sales pitch to prospective clients. It details the creative process, so check it out....

Television commercials. One minute you hate them and can't hit the mute button fast enough, the next your laughing your eyes out and talking about them around the water cooler. Commercials are definitely a love / hate relationship—one that has created a multi-billion dollar industry. But there is no disagreeing that television commercials are a powerful medium because it can communicate with both sight and sound.

It also has the ability to motivate viewers into immediate action and to sway consumer loyalty from one brand or service to another.

Project Process for Film and Video

Our goal is to make you comfortable working with us, even if you've never used professional creative services before. And, of course, your 100% satisfaction. To meet those goals we like to explain what you can expect from us, right up front.

Project Information Gathering

(Phone consultation or meeting)
This is the first step in the process of creating your commercial. We arrange a meeting to discuss your project in detail. The purpose for this meeting is to determine your specific advertising needs and to develop a strategic work plan outlining your key benefits, communication goals, target audience, and perceptual challenges. We will also gather information about your target market in order to help define and differentiate your business from the competition.

Creative Development

We develop 2-3 unique concepts based on our consultation with you. The concepts are presented in storyboard format including key frames, video descriptions, and audio details (dialogue, voice-over, script) and provided as digital PDF or JPG files for online review. Based on your input and suggestions, we will revise concepts until you are 100% satisfied.

Pre-Pre-Production

Upon approval of the concept, creative and production teams will meet to discuss script details, shot list, locations, talent, and alternatives for optimizing production costs.

Shot List and Production Estimate Approval

We will present you with a production script, shot list, and a detailed production estimate for your approval. Upon approval, we work with you to schedule a date and time to shoot your commercial. We also schedule time for post-production.

Pre-Production

Creative and production teams will meet to finalize shot list, locations, and production schedule. If casting is required, we will research and select actors to cast for each role. Primary and backup selections are made after the casting session. Our casting sessions are usually videotaped for future reference.

Production

Once casting and pre-production are completed, we will begin location and studio shooting. Only the most skillful and experienced professionals are employed. Shooting is truly a group effort, where the producer, director, crew members, actors and our clients collaborate to transform words on paper into images on videotape or film.

Post-Production Editing

After shooting is completed, we will prepare an initial "rough cut" for your review, complete with selected music, scratch track narration and graphics. Based on your feedback and creative input, a final edit is created using color corrected live action, animation, finalized titles, special effects and dissolves.

Mastering and Duplication

Once the final edit has been approved the commercial is mastered and the duplication process begins.

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ARTICLE: THE FUTURE OF TV WRITING
Q. Does dramatic TV have a future?

A. There's been a lot of guff about how reality TV is going to kill off fictional television.

Reality TV is cheaper to produce than drama. Production values are practically nonexistent, you don't need writers or actors, just people willing to embarrass themselves on TV and a catchy, cheesy concept.

For a while there we were all hoping that producers would run out of Reality TV concepts. After all, how many Survivor rip-offs can the public swallow? At some point they have to get bored.

And they will. Eventually. (There are more cheesy concepts out in the ether than anyone realized.)

But there's another element of the market that may rescue dramatic TV before concept exhaustion does: the DVD.

Reality TV fails utterly in reruns. No one wants to watch the episodes of The Bachelor that they missed. It's like sports. Once you know who won, you're not interested in how. They especially don't want to watch episodes they've seen before. Reality TV is almost all sizzle and no steak. Who will Donald Trump fire this week? Once you know that, can you stand to sit through the episode to see why it happened?

So, DVD sales of Reality TV have flopped. At the same time, DVD sales of well-written, well-produced series like The West Wing are through the roof. You can watch your favorite episodes over and over, without sitting through the commercials.

Game shows used to be the bane of dramatic TV. Then talk shows. Now it's Reality TV. But people have longed for good stories ever since the invention of fire gave them a reason to stay up past lights out. There will always be an appetite for well-told stories.

DVD sales may also see off another threat: the TiVo. People with TiVos can ignore the commercials. Commercials pay for the shows. In the future we may have to go to a subscription model -- think HBO. But people are already paying for cable, so that might work.

So I have been feeling fairly sanguine about the fate of dramatic television. But a friendly network exec points out that DVD sales may be counterbalanced by MPEG ripoffs. Just as the music industry may be suffering from file sharing programs like Kazaa, there's little to stop people from trading pirated episodes on the Net.

On the other other hand, there is the argument that the "slump" in the music industry is just because CD sales were unnaturally boosted so long as people were replacing their vinyl; and that people tend to rip tracks that they would not otherwise have bought anyway. My parents would buy DVD's if they could figure out how to plug their DVD player in (they still don't have Call Waiting); they would never consider ripping off Season Two of Sopranos. (Nor would I. I don't think people who make a living selling content should steal it, though I'm less sure it's evil to pirate Microsoft products.)

I do think we're going to be seeing a huge rise in the number of TV shows available on DVD, just because it costs almost nothing to package up the content and sell it on Amazon. The marginal cost is tiny. Which is good for all of us TV writers who need to research shows we're spec'ing.

Another reason not to worry about fiction is that the quality of the eyeballs it attracts are better. With the exception of subscription cable like HBO and Showtime, the networks get paid not by viewers but by advertisers. Movies are about getting asses in seats. TV is about getting customers' asses in couches.

People who watch fiction are watching it more closely -- more likely to actually sit down in front of the show rather than to glance over at the TV while doing something else. That means they'll actually watch the commercials, too. Also, they are higher quality viewers, from an advertising point of view. Smart shows sell expensive products to well-educated, rich viewers. A show like West Wing survives not because it has mammoth ratings but because it has superb demographics and reasonable ratings. One businessman watching a Lexus ad is worth -- to an advertiser -- ten high school students watching Target ads.

So I'm not worried about the demise of fiction. What has been happening over the past few years, though, is that cable television has raised the bar for dramatic tv. Back in the day when there were three channels, a show like The Waltons thrilled no one, but made everyone content. Now more families have multiple television sets, and everyone can watch a show that might thrill them. HBO shows like Sopranos and Six Feet Under that push the envelope for violence, foul language and experimentation with the medium continue to raise the standards for drama. Broadcast shows are becoming sexier, fouler-mouthed and more daring conceptually in order to compete.

Another force is CGI. Science fiction concepts that would have been impossible to produce on a TV budget a few years ago are now feasible.

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Protect Yourself: Some Intellectual Property Basics by Glen Berry (May-15-2001)

Your attention, please. This column should not be construed as legal advice. You should always consult with a lawyer about the law, not a filmmaker.

The most important thing to remember about copyright is that the moment any work is put into tangible form (eg. screenplay, song, image, sound effects) it is protected by copyright. Using copyrighted material without obtaining permission or a license is a violation of the law which could possibly result in civil and/or criminal liability. Yes, that means you.

If you wish to protect your own work against the innocent infringer, you must provide some type of notice to identify the holder of copyright. This is most commonly done with the circle © symbol, the copyright year, name of the copyright holder and optionally, ALL RIGHTS RESERVED. If your work is clearly labeled with these symbols, copyright violators cannot claim that they did not know the work was protected. This protection does not require registration of any kind but must be present if you wish to receive damages for improper use of your intellectual property.

No formal registration is necessarily required to protect intellectual property, which is a change from recent years. Although it has not officially been ascribed to the Internet and digital distribution, it is no longer practical to register copyrights and research copyright holders through a central office, although going through the expense and procedure may save you time and costs in the event an infringement does occur.

With the emerging market for online films and digital production, many projects are being put together not only on shoe-string budgets but also in a very short period of time. This compressed schedule often leads to poor decision-making in the post production process, especially when the selection of music and sound effects are concerned. Yes, that means you. If you wish to be in compliance with the law (don't we all?), you must identify the holder of copyright on the piece you wish to use and obtain the proper permissions.

Since there are many derivative rights from any item of intellectual property, be sure to determine the correct contact names to obtain the rights you need.

Another possible intellectual property liability that the filmmaker needs to be aware of is the onscreen use of branded products (ie. beverages, tobacco products, clothing) that carry their own trademarks. These may also pose a potential liability in the event a manufacturer may view the association of your content and their brand in a negative light. Some product managers can be quite picky about the way their products are portrayed. It is advisable to seek permission, hide the product label, or change it entirely to a fictitious brand.

Producers who commit a violation of copyright are playing a dangerous game of Russian Roulette. Depending on whose rights you chose to violate, you will be faced with a number of potential responses. The most common would be a simple communication telling you to stop your violation immediately. However, you could simply be hit with a lawsuit without any warning whatsoever. Film producers can also be prosecuted on criminal charges, depending on the dollar amount of damages. Yes, that means you.

Copyright exists to protect your intellectual property. Clearing your rights ahead of time means that you will decrease your risk of facing civil and criminal action. If your film becomes successful, you will be in no position to negotiate licensing of images, sounds or songs with copyright holders. The bottom line is that you should clear the rights first to decrease your risk.

A small production made with your friends for fun may never be open to such liabilities. But, you never know. As we say in show business, always prepare yourself for the possibility of a hit! Which is why you should always protect yourself.

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SELF DEFENSE

Article by Mark Witlak

As an entertainment attorney I am often called upon to assist writers who have gotten themselves into trouble because they don

As an entertainment attorney I am often called upon to assist writers who have gotten themselves into trouble because they don't understand how their work infringes the rights of others. A writer who learns the fine points of the law through trial and error is receiving an expensive education. Here is a brief explanation of how to protect yourself.[1]

TROUBLE FROM PEOPLE PORTRAYED IN YOUR WORK

I. FICTIONAL CHARACTERS

If your script or film contains fictional characters -- characters from your imagination -- you generally do not need to obtain any permissions or releases. However, if there is a chance that the public could mistake your imaginary characters for real people, you could be liable if you have thereby infringed their rights.

You can protect yourself by making sure your fictional characters cannot be mistaken for real people. Give characters unusual names that no living individual would have. Check the phone book to see if any people with your character. s name reside at the location portrayed in your story. If there is a person in that community with the same name or a similar one, consider changing the locale or setting the story in a fictional locale. Add a disclaimer at the beginning of the film stating that any resemblance to persons living or dead is purely coincidental.

If fictional characters are drawn from another. s literary work, you might be infringing that author's copyright unless the work has gone into the public domain, or your use is considered a fair use. You may borrow personality traits, however, without infringing another's copyright. The first author to create a hard-boiled private eye, for example, cannot prevent other authors from creating their own hard-boiled private eyes.

Characters that have a visual component, such as comic book characters, are more likely to be protected under copyright law. Moreover, if you borrow the name of someone else's character you may be infringing trademark rights they may have in the character, and engaging in unfair competition.

As explained later, in some circumstances you may have the right to portray real-life individuals without their permission, especially if those persons are public figures or public officials.

II. FICTIONAL CHARACTERS BASED ON REAL INDIVIDUALS

A writer's imagination necessarily draws upon one's life experiences and people the writer has met. A writer can freely borrow ideas, historical facts, personality traits of characters and themes from other copyrighted work without liability. These items are not copyrightable.[i]

If a fictional character is loosely based on a real-life individual, and the public cannot identify the real-life individual from the context in which the fictional character is portrayed, there is little risk of liability. On the other hand, suppose you wrote a novel about the widow of a former American president assassinated in Dallas, and the widow character later marries a Greek shipping tycoon. Although you have labeled the book a "novel," have said that this is a work of fiction, and have given the characters fictitious names, readers may nevertheless believe you are writing about Jackie Kennedy. If you defame her, or otherwise invade her rights, she may have a good cause of action against you.[ii] You can be liable for defaming an individual even if you do not name her.

An interesting case is Leopold v. Levin. The plaintiff was Nathan Leopold, who pleaded guilty in 1924 to kidnaping and murdering a young boy. Because of the sensational nature of the crime, the case attracted international notoriety which did not wane over time.

In 1956, Levin, the defendant, wrote a novel entitled Compulsion. The framework for the novel was the Leopold case, although Leopold's name did not appear in it. The book was described as a fictionalized account of the Leopold murder case. A motion picture based on the book was released with fictitious characters who resembled the actual persons from the case. The promotional materials referred to the crime but made it clear that the story was a work of fiction suggested by real-life events. Leopold sued for invasion of privacy. After the novel was published, but before the movie was released, Leopold published his own autobiography.

The court was faced with the issue of whether Leopold, who had fostered continued public attention after having engaged in an activity placing him in the public eye, had a right of privacy in a fictitious account of that activity, or in the use of his name in promoting such an account. The court found against Leopold, stating that books, magazines and motion pictures are forms of public expression protected by the First Amendment. The court noted that while the book and movie were "suggested" by Leopold's crime, they were evidently fictional works. The novel and film depicted portions of Leopold's life that he had caused to be placed in public view. The court did not consider the fictionalized aspects highly offensive, which is the standard for determining invasion of privacy.

The court noted that a documentary account of the Leopold case would be constitutionally protected. Also, an entirely fictional work inspired by the case would be protected if matters such as locale were changed and the plaintiff was not identified.

III. PORTRAYING IDENTIFIABLE PERSONS

A person's right to privacy has to be balanced against other people's rights under the First Amendment. If Kitty Kelly wants to write an unauthorized biography about Frank Sinatra, she can do so without his permission. Likewise, Mike Wallace and his "60 Minutes" camera crew can film others without their permission. However, journalists' rights are not absolute. If Mike Wallace placed a hidden camera in a department store dressing room, he would be liable for damages for invading the privacy of customers.

Determining whether a filmmaker has infringed upon the rights of a subject who has not consented to be portrayed can be a complex matter. The status of the subject -- whether he is a public figure or public official, and whether he is alive or deceased -- may be important. Whether the activities portrayed are newsworthy may also be decisive. And the manner in which a person's likeness is used -- whether in a film or on a coffee cup -- is relevant as well.

The most likely grounds upon which to sue for an unauthorized portrayal are defamation, invasion of privacy, right of publicity and unfair competition. Let's consider each in turn.

A. DEFAMATION

Defamation is a communication that harms the reputation of another so as to lower him in the opinion of the community or to deter third persons from associating or dealing with him. For example, those communications that expose another to hatred, ridicule or contempt, or reflect unfavorably upon one's personal morality or integrity are defamatory. One who is defamed may suffer embarrassment and humiliation, as well as economic damages, such as the loss of a job or the ability to earn a living.

The law of defamation can be very confusing. That is because the common law[iii] rules that have developed over the centuries are subject to constitutional limitations. To determine the current law, one must read a state's defamation laws in light of various constitutional principles. For example, recent United States Supreme Court decisions have imposed significant limitations on the ability of public officials and public figures to win defamation actions. If a state's law is inconsistent with a constitutional principle, the law is invalid.

There are a number of defenses and privileges in defamation law. Therefore, in some circumstances a person can publish an otherwise defamatory remark with impunity. Why? Because protecting a person. s reputation is not the only value we cherish in a democratic society. When the right to protect a reputation conflicts with a more important right, the defamed person may be denied a recovery for the harm suffered.

The most important privilege, from a filmmaker's point of view, is truth. If your remarks hurt someone's reputation, but your remarks are true, you are absolutely privileged. An absolute privilege cannot be lost through bad faith or abuse. So even if you maliciously defame another person, you will be privileged if the statement is true. Truth is an absolute privilege because our society values truth more than a person's reputation.

Keep in mind that while truth is an absolute defense, the burden of proving the truth may sometimes fall on you. So if you make a defamatory statement, you should be prepared to prove that it is true -- which may not be an easy task.

Another privilege is the conditional common law privilege of fair comment and criticism. This privilege applies to communications about a newsworthy person or event. Conditional privileges may be lost through bad faith or abuse. This privilege has been largely superseded, however, by a constitutional privilege applied in the context of statements about public officials or public figures.

Public figures,[iv] such as celebrities, or public officials, such as senators, have a much higher burden in order to meet to prevail in a defamation action. They must prove that the defendant acted with "actual malice." Actual malice is a term of art meaning that the defendant intentionally defamed another or acted with reckless disregard of the truth.

Plaintiffs often find it difficult to prove that a defendant acted with actual malice. That is why so few celebrities sue the National Enquirer. To successfully defend itself, the magazine need only show that it acted without actual malice. In other words, the newspaper can come into court and concede that its report was false, defamatory and the result of sloppy and careless research. But unless the celebrity can prove that the National Enquirer acted with actual malice, the court must dismiss the case. Mere negligence is not enough to create liability when the subject is a public figure or a public official.

B. INVASION OF PRIVACY

The right of privacy has been defined as the right to live one's life in seclusion, without being subjected to unwarranted and undesired publicity. In other words, it is the right to be left alone.

Like defamation, the right of privacy is subject to constitutional restrictions. The news media, for example, is not liable for newsworthy statements that portray another in a false light unless the statements are made with actual malice. Unlike defamation, a cause of action for invasion of privacy does not require an injury to one's reputation.

Many defenses to defamation also apply to invasion of privacy. Truth, however, is not a defense. Likewise, revealing matters of public record cannot be the basis for an invasion of privacy action. Express and implied consent are valid defenses. If you voluntarily reveal private facts to others you cannot recover for invasion of your privacy.

Privacy actions typically fall into four factual patterns:[v]

Intrusion into One's Private Affairs

This category includes such activities as wiretapping and unreasonable surveillance. The intrusion must be highly offensive. Whether an intrusion is highly offensive depends on the circumstances. Most people would find it offensive to discover a voyeur peering through their bedroom window. On the other hand, a salesman knocking on your front door at dinner time may be obnoxious but his actions would not constitute an invasion of privacy.

Public Disclosure of Embarrassing Private Facts

One who gives publicity to a matter concerning the private life of another is subject to liability for invasion of privacy if the matter publicized is of a kind that would be highly offensive to a reasonable person, and if the matter is not of legitimate concern to the public, i.e., if the information is not newsworthy.

This type of invasion of privacy occurs, for example, where someone digs up some dirt on another person and publicizes it, but the information is not of legitimate interest to the public.

Appropriation

An action for appropriation of another's name or likeness is similar to an action for invasion of one's right of publicity. An invasion of privacy action seeks to compensate the plaintiff for the emotional distress, embarrassment and hurt feelings that may arise from the use of his or her name or likeness. A right of publicity action, on the other hand, seeks to compensate the plaintiff for the commercial value of exploiting his or her name or likeness.

As with the right of publicity, a person cannot always control another. s use of his name or likeness. While you can prevent someone from putting your face on a pancake mix box, you cannot stop Time magazine from putting your face on its cover if you have been involved in something newsworthy.

False Light

Publicity that places a plaintiff in a false light will be actionable if the portrayal is highly offensive. This type of invasion of privacy is similar to defamation, but harm to reputation is not required. For example, false light invasion of privacy could entail a political dirty trick such as placing the name of a prominent Republican on a list of Democratic contributors. Although this person's reputation may not be harmed, he has been shown in a false light.

An interesting false light case is Spahn v. Julian Messner, Inc.  Here Warren Spahn, a well-known baseball player, sued over the publication of an unauthorized biography, alleging that his rights under New York's misappropriation (privacy) statute had been invaded. In the purported biography, the author took great literary license, dramatizing incidents, inventing conversations, manipulating chronologies, attributing thoughts and feelings to Spahn and fictionalizing events. The invented material depicted the plaintiff's childhood, his relationship with his father, the courtship of his wife and important events in their marriage, and his military experience.

The defendant argued that the literary techniques he used were customary for books aimed at young people. The defendant never interviewed Spahn, nor any members of his family or any baseball player who knew him. The author's research was comprised of newspaper and magazine clippings, the veracity of which he rarely confirmed.

The court concluded that the defendant invaded Spahn's privacy. The New York privacy statute protects a public person from fictionalized publication if the work was published with actual malice. Since the defendant writer invented large portions of the book, he obviously knew his statements were not true. While Spahn could not prevent publication of an unflattering biography simply because he didn't like its contents, this fictitious report masquerading as fact was not protected.

C. THE RIGHT OF PUBLICITY

The right of publicity is the right of individuals to control the use of their name and likeness[vi] in a commercial setting. You cannot put a picture of another person on your brand of pickles without their permission. The right of publicity is typically exploited by celebrities who earn large fees by endorsing products.

The right of publicity is similar to the appropriation form of invasion of privacy. The principal difference is that the right of publicity seeks to ensure that a person is compensated for the commercial value of his name or likeness, while the right of privacy seeks to remedy any hurt feelings or embarrassment that a person may suffer from such publicity.

Celebrities may have difficulty proving damages for invasion of their privacy because they necessarily sacrifice some solitude and privacy by virtue of their fame. How can a celebrity claim that the unauthorized use of his likeness on a product embarrassed and humiliated him while at the same time he willingly appears in television commercials? By thrusting themselves into the public eye, celebrities waive much of their right of privacy. On the other hand, celebrities have an especially valuable property right in their names and likenesses -- for which they are often paid handsomely.

Under either a publicity or privacy theory, subjects can recover for some unauthorized uses of their names and likenesses. A problem arises, however, when one person's publicity/privacy rights come in conflict with another person's rights under the First Amendment. Suppose a newspaper publisher wants to place a picture of Cher on the front page of its paper. Is her permission needed? The answer is no.

Although Cher's name and likeness is portrayed in the newspaper, this "product" is also a form of "protected expression." Products such as books, movies and plays are modes of expression protected by the First Amendment. The First Amendment also allows journalists to write about others without their consent. Otherwise, subjects could prevent any critical reporting of their activities. When one person's right of publicity conflicts with another person's rights under the First Amendment, the First Amendment rights are often, if not always, paramount.

When the likeness of Elvis Presley is used on an ash tray, however, there is no expression deserving protection. The seller of this product is not making a statement or expressing an opinion. He is simply trying to make money by exploiting the name and likeness of Elvis. Since there are no competing First Amendment concerns, the right of publicity in this instance should prevent the unauthorized use of Elvis's likeness. In summary, the law draws a distinction between products that contain protected expression and those that do not.

Courts have struggled with the issue of whether the right of publicity descends to a person's heirs. In other words, when a celebrity dies, does his estate inherit his right of publicity? Can the estate continue to control the use of the celebrity's name or likeness, or can anyone use it without permission?

Some courts have held that the right of publicity is a personal right that does not descend. These courts consider the right similar to the right of privacy and the right to protect one's reputation (defamation). When a person dies, heirs don't inherit these rights. Suppose, for instance, that you were a descendent of Abraham Lincoln. An unscrupulous writer publishes a defamatory biography claiming Abe was a child molester. You couldn't sue for defamation or invasion of privacy. Perhaps this is why many scandalous biographies are not published until the subject dies.

In California prior to 1984, the courts held that the right of publicity was personal and did not descend. In 1984, however, the California legislature changed the law. Civil Code Section 990 now provides that the right of publicity descends for products, merchandise and goods, but does not descend for books, plays, television and movies. The statute was recently amended to extend protection so that heirs can enforce this right for up to 70 years after the death of a celebrity.

A similar statute, California Civil Code Section 3344 prohibits the unauthorized use of the name and likeness of living individuals. Both statutes provide exceptions for uses in the news and public affairs arenas in an attempt to balance First Amendment rights against rights of publicity and privacy.

In other states, although the right to publicity descends, the rights of the heirs may be outweighed by First Amendment rights. An interesting case is Hicks v. Casablanca Records, which concerned a movie made by Casablanca Records called "Agatha." The movie was about the well-known mystery writer Agatha Christie. The story was a fictionalized account of the eleven day disappearance of Christie in 1926. The film portrayed her as an emotionally unstable woman engaged in a sinister plot to murder her husband's mistress. An heir to Christie's estate brought suit to enjoin Casablanca from distributing the movie, alleging infringement of Agatha Christie's right of publicity.

While the right of publicity descends in New York, where the case was tried, the Christie estate nonetheless lost the suit. The court found that Casablanca's First Amendment rights outweighed the estate's right to control the name and likeness of Christie.

D. UNFAIR COMPETITION

The law of unfair competition prevents a person, for instance,  from establishing a movie studio and calling it "Paramount Pictures" if he/she is not affiliated with the well-known company. A person would also be barred from displaying the Paramount logo or using any other mark that might mislead or confuse consumers by leading them to believe that films are genuine Paramount movies when they are not.

The names of persons and businesses may become associated in the public mind with a supplier of products or services. The name can thus acquire a secondary meaning, and the supplier can acquire trademark rights even if he does not register the name as a trademark. In Dallas Cowboys Cheerleaders, Inc. v. Pussycat Cinema, Ltd., the defendant exhibited a pornographic movie, "Debbie Does Dallas," which portrayed a "Texas Cowgirl" engaged in sex acts. The character wears a uniform strikingly similar to that worn by the Dallas Cowboys Cheerleaders. Ads for the movie showed the character in the uniform and included such captions as "Starring Ex-Dallas Cowgirl Cheerleader Bambi Woods."

The Dallas Cowboy Cheerleaders brought suit alleging that they had a trademark in the particular combination of colors and the design of their uniforms. The court agreed and issued an injunction against further distribution of the film. Filmmakers should take note that if they portray people or products in a way that is likely to confuse the public as to the origin of a product, they may be liable for unfair competition.

E. DEFENSES

Here are some guidelines you may follow to avoid liability from subjects portrayed in your script or film.

1) OBTAIN RELEASES: Obtain releases whenever possible. It never hurts to have a release even if it is not legally required. Do not forget to get releases from the immediate family and friends of a subject if those people appear in the story.

2) FICTIONALIZE THE STORY: Change the identity of the individuals, the names of the characters and the location so that the public will not be able to identify any characters with any living individuals.

3) ADD A DISCLAIMER: If your characters are fictional, add an express disclaimer to that effect so viewers will not be confused.

4) PRIVATE INDIVIDUALS: Be especially careful about portraying living individuals who are not public officials or figures. Remember that deceased individuals cannot sue for defamation or invasion of privacy, and that public figures and officials have to prove actual malice in order to recover. Thus, a filmmaker is most vulnerable when portraying living private individuals.

5) ASSEMBLE EVIDENCE TO PROVE THE TRUTH: Make sure you can prove that any defamatory statements you make are true. Annotate your script with the sources of your information so that you can document its truth and show that you acted carefully and without actual malice.

6) CLEAR THE SCRIPT: Have an attorney closely review your script for potential liability before production. If you can change the names of subjects and the setting without detracting from the dramatic value of the story, do so.

7) OBTAIN INSURANCE: Make sure the production company obtains an Errors and Omissions (E & O) insurance policy and that it includes you as a named insured.

Annotation Guidelines

Screenwriters should annotate their scripts to document the source of their work. A careful annotation will help a screenwriter defend against defamation and invasion of privacy lawsuits by demonstrating that the writer acted carefully. Recall that when a public figure or official sues for defamation, he or she must prove that the defendant acted with "actual malice."

Annotations should specify the source of all script elements except those elements that are completely fictional and arise wholly from the writer's imagination. Script elements include characters, events, settings and dialogue. Annotations are typically written in the margin of the script or included as footnotes or endnotes to the text. Annotations should include the following information:

1. CHARACTERS: For each character, add the following information:

(a) Whether the character is a real person, a fictional or a composite character.

(b) For real characters, whether the actual person is living or dead.

(c) For composite characters, the name(s) of actual person(s) on whom the composite character is based, and what traits can be attributed to the real person(s).

2.  SCENES: Note whether each scene portrays fact or fiction

(a) If fact, or an inference from fact, describe the source material including the following:

(i) For books: title, author, publisher and page(s).

(ii) For newspaper or magazine articles: title, author, publisher, and  page.

(iii) For materials obtained from the Internet: author, title of article and web site address. If material has been taken from another medium, note the title,  author, publication date, and where the work first appeared.

(iv) For materials based on radio or television interviews or programs: date and time of broadcast, broadcast station or source, interviewer and program name.

(v) For interviews: name of subject, whether notes or tapes exist, reference to tape or transcript page number.

(vi) For trial or deposition transcripts: the court or other forum, date,  name of the person testifying, and transcript page number.

(vii) To the extent possible, multiple sources should be identified for each script element.

(b) If partly fact and partly fiction, indicate which portions are fact and which are fiction. For factual parts, describe source material as specified in Paragraph 2(a) above.

(c) If entirely fictional, notation is not required.

3.  MISCELLANEOUS:

 

(a) Copies of reference materials referred to in annotations should be retained for at least five years after the film or program has been released. Materials should be cross-indexed by script page and scene numbers.

(b) If margin annotations are coded to avoid repeated lengthy references, a key to such coding should be provided.

(c) If a Writer's Guild member is asked to annotate a script, this request must be made at the outset of the assignment.

[1]. Please note that the information provided in this article is not a substitute for consulting with an experienced local attorney and receiving counsel based on the facts and circumstances of a particular transaction. Many of the legal principles mentioned are subject to exceptions and qualifications which may not be noted in the text. Furthermore, laws  are subject to revision and may not apply in all countries and regions.

[i] An author's organization and patterning of ideas and facts may be protected, however.

[ii] Of course, Jackie Kennedy's right to sue for defamation and invasion of privacy expired when she died.

[iii] The common law is the law of precedent that arises from cases decided by courts. Another type of law is statutory, or law that has been enacted by a legislative body such as Congress.

[iv] There are two types of public figures: 1) persons of pervasive fame or notoriety, such as a celebrity sports figure; and 2) persons who voluntary inject themselves into a particular public controversy and become public figures for that limited range of issues.

[v] Privacy actions need not fall within one of these four categories to be actionable.

[vi] Voice and signature are also protected under this right.

Self-Defense Checklist

1. GET ALL PROMISES IN WRITING. Don't ever accept oral assurances from a producer or studio executive. If they promise to spend $50,000 in advertising, get it in writing. If there is not enough time to draft a long-form contract, obtain a letter reiterating their promises.

2. REGISTER ALL WORKS WITH THE WRITER'S GUILD. Before you pitch a story, register the work with the Writer's Guild. Non-members may register. Alternatively, register your work with the Copyright Office.

3. OBTAIN AN ARBITRATION CLAUSE: Make sure all contractual disputes are subject to binding arbitration with the prevailing party entitled to reimbursement of legal fees and costs.

4. WATER DOWN THE WARRANTIES: Make the warranties to the best of your knowledge and belief, rather than absolute. With an absolute warranty, if you make a good faith mistake and defame another, you may be liable for damages.

5. RETAIN POSSESSION OF YOUR NEGATIVE: Give the distributor a lab access letter rather than your original negative. If they breach your contract, you can cut off their access to the negative. Try to retain your original still photos and any artwork.

6. GET ADDED TO THE E & O POLICY: Have yourself added as a named insured to the Errors and Omissions Insurance policy. If you are on the policy, the insurance company will pay for your defense and damages that may arise from liability if you inadvertently defame someone or infringe their copyright.

7. CHECK REFERENCES: The best contract in the world can only protect you so much against a scoundrel. Thoroughly check out any party you contemplate doing business with. For distributors call other filmmakers who have worked with them. People who have lousy reputations have earned them.

8. TERMINATION CLAUSE: If the other party defaults you should have the right to terminate the contract and regain all rights to your film in addition to monetary damages. Writers should insist on a reversion clause so if a script is bought and not produced within five years, all rights revert to the writer.

9. INVESTOR MONEY: Never make any "offers" to investors or accept any investor money without fully complying with all applicable state and federal security laws. Have an entertainment attorney with experience in securities prepare the paperwork for you.

10. SAVE COPIES: Retain copies of all correspondence, contracts and every draft of your screenplay. When you make a story contribution or make an oral agreement, follow up with a letter reiterating the terms of your agreement.

11. MISCELLANEOUS: Delivery schedules, reversion of advertising materials, territory minimums, separate bank accounts and limitations of remedies. Obtain an experienced advisor to assist you on these and other points.