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Don't Forget Me

It was August 10, 1999.  Melissa and I decided to go to a dance club, called Road House Ruby's.  We danced with, like, 10 guys there.  We met two guys that we really liked.  Their names were AJ and Brian.  Brian was with Melissa and AJ was with me.  Oh yeah, my name is Lorie. 

But anyways, Melissa and I decided to go with the guys to their house.  Brian had drove AJ and himself to the club and I had drove Melissa and I. 

So, I was taking AJ in my car and Brian was taking Melissa.  While AJ and I were driving to the house, we decided to go the long way.  While we were going through a green light, someone decided to turn right in front of us.  My car went right into the side of that car.  My door had come open.  I flew out of the car and hit the pavement.  Then I blacked out. 

When I woke up, I was in a white room.  I didn't know where I was.  Until a doctor walked in.  He saw that I was awake and smiled.  He told me that I had hit my head on the pavement hard, but I would probably be fine. 

Then I remembered AJ.  He said that AJ had a broken arm and wrist.  Also, he had hit his head pretty hard on the dash board.  But he should be fine.  I was really glad to hear that.  I asked if they had called Melissa. 

"Yes! She is in the waiting room!" 

"Can I see her please??" 

"Yes you may!" the doctor said,walked out, and sent Melissa in.  Melissa came running over to me, crying. 

"What happened??" she asked.  I told her the whole story. 

"Have you seen AJ??" 

"No I haven't and neither has Brian." 

That night, I finally convinced Melissa to go home and so, her and Brian went to our house.  I snuck out of my room to find AJ.  My head hurt really bad, but I ignored it. 

I finally found his room and went in and stood beside him.  I looked at him and it didn't even look like him.  His face was all scratched and bruised.  I picked up his hand and held it against my cheek.  I felt a tear trickle down my cheek and it fell down his hand.  His fingers moved and I looked at him.  He opened his eyes and we stared at each other. 

Tears started flowing; they were dripping off my chin.  I spoke out, softly

"Oh AJ! I'm so sorry!!" 

He smiled at me and I could see tears in his eyes. 

"It's alright!  It wasn't your fault!" he said in a whisper. 

More tears started flowing down my cheeks.  I layed his hand back on the bed.  I looked at him and saw tears going down his cheeks.  By this time, my head hurt really bad.  It hurt so bad, my head was pounding.  But I didn't want to leave AJ.  So, I pulled up the chair and sat down.  I tried my best to smile, but with all the tears it was hard.  I picked AJ's hand up and kissed it.  I asked him if it would be alright if I hugged him.  He shook his head yes and I stood up.  I bent over him and carefully put my arms around him.  I hugged him and I could feel him put his hand on my back. 

I started crying more.  We hugged and then after awhile, he went limp.  I knew what had happened.  He had died in my arms. 

This made me cry really hard.  I stood back up and picked up his hand.  I saw all of his rings and took one of them off and put it on my thumb.  I then kissed his cheek and turned to go out of the room.  I started running, but it was blurry from the tears.  I ran around one of the corners and ran into a table.  I fell and hit my head really hard on the floor.  I whispered 

"I'll miss everyone!" and blacked out.  I had died.

(Melissa's view)

It was August 14, 1999.  I was standing at the casket, crying my eyes out.  Lorie had died 4 days ago, at the hospital, and I hadn't been there with her.  I started crying really, really hard.  I missed Lorie so much.  I missed AJ too, even if I didn't know him that well. 

But Lorie was like a sister to me.  I loved her so much!!  It only felt like yesterday that we were walking through the mall, checking out all the guys.  And now......and now she was gone.

(Lorie's room)

I had woke up in a strange place.  I looked around and there stood AJ.  I also noticed that I saw all my friends and family.  Then I realized where I was.  I was at the grave yard.  I walked over to the crowd and then I realized who they were burying.  It was me!!  I looked back and saw AJ walking to me.  He walked beside me and wrapped his arms around me.  He said

"You are here to say good-bye!" 

I looked at him, with tear filled eyes and nodded.  I walked over to my mom and dad, who were hugging and crying.  I said

"I love you so much!  Even if it didn't seem like it at times!  I love you both so much and will miss you!!  Bye mom and dad!!" and blew them a kiss. 

Then I walked over to Melissa and said.

"Melissa, you don't know how much I care about you!!  You and I have been through thick and thin.  I am going to miss you so much sister!!!!  I love you Melon!!  Bye!" 

I then blew her a kiss and blew Brian a kiss.  Then I walked back over to AJ.  We started walking towards a bright light, but I stopped.  I turned around and looked at everyone. 

"Don't forget me!!" I whispered. 

Then AJ and I walked into the light. 

~The End~

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