I sit here in over 70 degrees chilled after reading this.
Kate - 7/16/03
jaw still dropped at this one
Ken - 7/16/03
Great imagery that truly enhances the theme. Awesome poem.
Max - 7/17/03
This poem is very much alive- intense in wording and lyrical in flow...
Nico - 7/17/03
you know, i think this is the best i've seen of you yet. this poem is so well-done; you have nailed it to the wall.
Pam - 7/17/03
Great job of conveying the emotions, vivid and intense.
Don C. - 8/3/03