Comments on "A Pale Horse"

have never read of this sentiment being said quite this good, such vivid discription with so few words...

Elizabeth - 4/28/01

After reading this, I couldn't help but laugh, which is a good thing since I just came from a funeral today.

Taylor - 7/16/03

lolol..... Amen! I love that your sense of humor works even with this form!

Kate - 7/16/03

lol..that would do it to me!

Ken - 7/16/03

Keen wit. Lovely last line.

Max - 7/17/03

Haha, oh that's great. The thing is, if the last line weren't there, or it was changed, it would be completely different. Great work.

Ryan - 8/1/03

Oh I love this one, hehe, a short but striking piece. bravo.

Angelene - 8/16/03