Comments on "Bars and Shackles"

Beautiful writing as usual

Gerry - 5/11/03

Powerful indeed, Jen. So well done.

Lil - 5/13/03

I agree with Lil ... a really powerful piece

Ven - 5/13/03

Your writing reflects a sad sort of beauty... it is as if everything wonderful has been tainted by sorrow. However, lovely verse!

Aurora - 5/13/03

Very moving. Very beautifully written.

Jeanne - 5/13/03

beautiful yet still in that haunted monotone...

Terry - 5/14/03

Good write, Ravyn. Much enjoyed this piece.

C.G. - 5/15/03

Awesome poem Jenn, it's deep and just kinda gives a dark tone...but it's soooo well written! Great work!

Kimberly - 5/25/03

Amazing. Very meaningful and wonderfully written.

Don C. - 8/3/03