Comments on "Did You Find Everything Ok?"

Wow...i forgot how much i loved your poetry...i haven't read your poetry in a long time...it was a nice first read from a long break! Wonderful work!

Kimberly - 12/29/03

oh, i've been there, but you always seem to put scenes in that sort of perspective that makes me say that's how it was when i felt it then,yes.thankyou.take care,

Kari - 12/29/03

a vivid read, particularly the images you use to describe your disgust.."blood and urine crusted mashed potato gravy.."

Richard - 12/30/03

Very, very nice imagery. Powerful piece.

Sara - 12/30/03

Oh mann Jenn this is astounding! the slippery slope . . .

Susie - 1/2/04

Yeah... Glad someone got that out... Now I know how to word it. Awesome job.

Anita - 1/2/04

whoah, who is this "you" in the poem, someone who has obviously put you through some heavy negative personal experience... (or at least implied so). i love the way that so effectively spiralled down into this dark metaphoric world within an otherwise innocuous retail scene

Agnes - 1/2/04

Okay, that was really good. That was an excellent description of how someone feels when they run into that once (but no longer) special person. Great setting and use of words. Exquisite.

Max - 1/2/04

wow you blew my socks off...i have never read something that explains those type of flashbacks like this does...thank you, i've been there, and now i don't feel alone in that...

Amy - 1/16/04