Comments on "God Loves a Sacrifice"


You have written a very vividly real description of your day. I wish there was something more, anything, I could say. I am a bit emotional myself right now having read this piece.

Adrian - 11/5/02 Jenn, this poem is both mesmorizing and breathtaking...

Carolyn - 11/6/02

I am speechless and breathless.

Tim - 11/7/02

I just wish i could express how wonderful I think this poem is....

Kate - 11/7/02

This isn't the first time I've read this poem, and as I feel most truly good writing does, it has only touched me deeper each time I've revisted it...

Cathlyn - 11/11/02

nothing puts our deaths so well inside of us like the funeral of a friend...i will come back to this one many times, because you have totally said it.

Esmark - 11/14/02

I suspect I'll be writing a similar poem one day ... I keep reminding myself that home is where you make it. Hopefully you were able to find some closure, and thus, some peace.

Sallie - 11/16/02

Very powerful work... the recurring line gave it a haunting quality that really enhanced the mood. Well-crafted.

Max - 6/12/03

very haunting, i really liked this piece

Kalikala - 6/12/03




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