You have written a very vividly real description of your day. I wish there was something more, anything, I could say. I am a bit emotional myself right now having read this piece.
Adrian - 11/5/02
Jenn, this poem is both mesmorizing and breathtaking...
Carolyn - 11/6/02
I am speechless and breathless.
Tim - 11/7/02
I just wish i could express how wonderful I think this poem is....
Kate - 11/7/02
This isn't the first time I've read this poem, and as I feel most truly good writing does, it has only touched me deeper each time I've revisted it...
Cathlyn - 11/11/02
nothing puts our deaths so well inside of us like the funeral of a friend...i will come back to this one many times, because you have totally said it.
Esmark - 11/14/02
I suspect I'll be writing a similar poem one day ... I keep reminding myself that home is where you make it. Hopefully you were able to find some closure, and thus, some peace.
Sallie - 11/16/02
Very powerful work... the recurring line gave it a haunting quality that really enhanced the mood. Well-crafted.
Max - 6/12/03
very haunting, i really liked this piece
Kalikala - 6/12/03