This is a good writing...I admire your style...I really liked your ending to this...I did not expect it...
Elizabeth - 4/28/01
wow, i can relate to this so well. such a shame when all the walls come tumbling down that you've worked so hard to build. terrific.
Jennifer C. - 12/10/02
powerful imagery, communicates so well the feeling of helpless collapse and confusion.
Richard - 12/10/02
wow really powerful images, brilliant
Christina - 12/10/02
i never thought about it that way, funny how that happens yes? take care,
Kari - 9/10/03