Comments on "Where Once Were Four"

sad story, well written

Anne - 1/18/04

Sad and intense! Very vivid and well written. Excellent poem.

Mike M. - 1/18/04

wow, that's sad. you captured the emotion and feelings nicely...

Alyssa - 1/18/04

Truly followed this piece until the last verse? Love the way you write and the intent, just lost this one at the end.

C.G. Labb - 1/21/04

sad undertones..written beautifully ..a touching,wonderful write!..

Moonflower - 1/21/04

Great write. Sad in everything it entailed but wonderfully written.

Reig - 1/22/04

Ravyn, this very much is right on the mark. To define the impact of illness in a poetic manner is difficult, but this piece is well written.

Deb - 1/23/04

Ya know I read through this twice just to enjoy the words employed. It conjures all kinds of interesting images other than the one you intended In my book,.....what fine poetry ought to do.

Gerry - 1/23/04