This is beautiful, Jenn.
Paul - 1/29/04
I normally don't go for the rhyme thing, it usually sounds forced, but this one flows freely. Well done. :)
Lori - 1/29/04
This is beautiful. It's lovely being able to find your wings. I found mine a couple nights ago. Thank you so much for sharing this, Jen :)
Lisa I. - 1/29/04
I think the message of this is fantastic! Get those wings and fly!
Jeanne - 1/29/04
This was absolutley stunning! A rare poetic insight into a beautiful soul.
Just Perfect!
Gerry - 1/29/04
a true gift to read... thank you...
Terry - 1/29/04
Beautiful! A wonderful flight into the nature of faith, and a lesson of life for everyone to hold close.
Tom - 1/29/04
a really awesome job!!! i like the way it flows along and the positive message. keep up the good work.
Gordy - 1/29/04
Loved it Ravyn, I got totally into it. It was a beginning to end and read it over and over poem. :)
Catchalook - 1/29/04
this is fantastic from beginning to end. great writing.
Brezz - 1/29/04