This piece is built around the song "Kata Rokkar" by Bjork. In order to get the full effect of this piece, download Kata Rokkar and listen to it as you read. (Right click on the above link, and select "Save target as"). The notations of time in the writing correspond to passages in the music.
Copyright © 2001 by C. Scott Thomas
Location: outside public library
Background: bright sunny day, warm. Mackenzie wears a 40s style dress that comes just above her knees. It’s short sleeve, with a tiny, pale buttercup flower pattern on it. She also has stockings with back seams and Mary Janes. Her hair is parted down the middle and held in place on either side by shiny barrettes, and it flips up a little at the bottom.
0 sec. - :10 Camera angle is low to the ground, stationary facing the front of the library from across the street. Mackenzie crosses the street, casts a furtive glance behind her, then goes inside.
:10- :20 Cut to the inside of the library, Mackenzie standing between 2 shelves reading a Kama-Sutra book. The room is somewhat dim despite the window next to her. She looks up from the book (moving only her eyes) to see a pair of eyes looking at her from the next aisle between the books. She gives only the slightest smile of recognition, then looks back down at the book and turns the page.
:20- :33 Cut to a view of Mackenzie from the waist down, rubbing the toe of her shoe against the back of her calf. Chris (the pair of eyes) appears in a crouch, and with a smile lifts Mackenzie’s dress up, goes in and drapes the dress over his head. :23 Mackenzie feigns surprise, puckering her lips into an o-shape. Camera shows Chris moving around under her dress, then tight on Mackenzie’s head and shoulders. :29 She rolls her eyes and swallows, :30 then fans the air in front of her face.
:33- :46 Cut to Chris’s apartment- very brief shot of Chris’s cat with an interested look, watching the two of them. Mackenzie laying on her back on his bed. Chris’s head is up her dress again. The top of Mackenzie’s stockings are visible but no higher. Her shoes are off and her legs are wrapped around his neck. Alternate camera views between a close-up of her face from above, and her left hand. She moans and arches her neck, moves her head from side to side; slows clutches and unclutches the sheet.
:46 Mackenzie covers her face with her hands and giggles (shot from above from head to waist). Chris emerges from under her dress, hair ruffled, looks at her, then winks. :55- :57 shot of Chris’s cat trotting across the doorway with its tail in the air. Cut to a different shot (same angle) of the cat peeking in the room around the edge of the doorway. Chris gets up off the bed, stands to the side of it and begins to undress, while Mackenzie props herself up on her elbow and watches.
1:03 Shot of Chris (front) from waist up with shirt off, he smiles slyly and flicks his eyebrows twice. 1:07 Alternate between shots of him undoing his belt and zipper; and Mackenzie looking on eagerly, leaning forward in anticipation. The camera slowly zooms in (continuity between alternating views). Mackenzie looks from his crotch to his eyes and back again. Camera angle switches to behind Chris; he is in the very edge of the shot out of focus, Mackenzie is in the shot full laying on the bed. 1:14 As he pulls his boxers down, her eyes widen, focused on his crotch. 1:16 Close up, still focused on his crotch and wide eyed, she shivers and blinks.
1:18 Cut to Chris (same shot from waist up); he smirks and rolls his eyes. He pulls his pants the rest of the way down, then his expression starts to change as he begins to lose his balance. Struggling with his pants, he falls over 1:27 (a wide eyed, opened mouth shot as he falls) Then switch back to original waist down camera view, it doesn’t move as he falls.
1:28 View of Chris laying on the floor, then Mackenzie’s legs appear in front of him. He looks up at her (a short view of Mackenzie from his vantage point, smirking and unbuttoning her dress; then back to the original floor POV), then her dress slides down and lands in a heap around her ankles.
Cut to Mackenzie, naked, lying on her stomach on the bed, side view from her ribs up. She’s lying on her arms, which are folded, her head turned to one side toward the camera. Her eyes are closed and she has a big blissful smile on her face. Cut to Chris crawling up on the bed over her backside. His fingers walk from the small of her back up to her neck. The camera switches back to Mackenzie’s profile ribs up view as Chris settles between her legs and rests on top of her. Mackenzie shifts appropriately, raising up on her elbows.
1:47 4 quick shots: Chris grips her wrists, 2) looks down toward his waist, 3) Mackenzie closes her eyes and opens her mouth, tensing, and 4) Chris grimaces as he starts to penetrate. 1:53 camera tight on Mackenzie- her first reaction; her eyes snap open and her head comes up as he penetrates. 1:55- 2:08 passion, moaning and screaming. Chris slides deeper inside her in stages, provoking a reaction from her each time. Alternate between profile view and close-ups of their faces, also of their hands. Mackenzie’s dig into the sheets when Chris pushes; his grip her wrists more tightly, his knuckles whitening.
2:08 Stay with the same shot. After the initial violence of penetration Chris begins a steady thrusting. 2:17 (cutting to a slightly different angle and not continuous action; meant to show the sex in stages) He puts one hand on Mackenzie’s forehead and pulls her head back. 2:36 Chris’s face screws up as he climaxes, almost an afterthought. Their orgasms are gentle. 2:40 The thrusting slows, slows, and finally 2:46 stops. They both hold their posture, muscles tense, eyes closed, on the verge of collapse. 2:52 They collapse abruptly, Chris’s face landing between Mackenzie’s shoulders and stretching his mouth comically. 2:54 fade to black.