Site hosted by Angelfire.com: Build your free website today!

Angels and Demons - part 1

Thanaīs Creation

Deep down in Hell, new demons are born every day. Lucifer sit on his throne, to name them all, and to tell them what their job in this world is. He is the king of Hell, and on his right hand there is a new demoness each day. She is his mistress, and after one day by his side, she will have to leave and sit near him for the rest of her life. Hell fights Heaven, all the time. They fight about the Earth, and you never know who will rule it in the end.
In Heaven Jehova sit on his throne, and all around him there are angels and saints. Each happy day in Heaven, a lot of new angels are born. They are not born like in Hell. Down there, Lucifer or one of his sons are the father to them all, and the demoness of the day is the mother. Jehova doesnīt take part in the production of angels. He doesnīt even create them the real way. He still does like he did when he created Adam; the only difference is, that angels are created by sunlight and clouds, and not by dirt on the ground.
Lilith rule the southern part of Hell. She is Luciferīs favorite demoness, not only because she is pretty, but also because she was the first to really defeat Jehova, whom he doesnīt like. Jehova created Lilith by dirt, and she wouldnīt stand for it, and left him and Adam, to live an eternal and ‘sinfull’ life in Hell. Lilith and Lucifer tries to convert angels to be demons. She is best at this job. This is the story about one of them.

It was a nice and beautiful day - as always - in Heaven. Jehova on his throne, talking about how he can make the world better, and thinking about what to create next. He loves to create things, and he name all the angels on his own. A new angel came to him, standing on the pink clouds in front of the big, golden throne. She had long, dark hair and green eyes, another pretty angel.
“ My God, would you tell me what I am?” She asked, like the angels are supossed to do.
“ Yes, of course, my angel. Your name is Valentinia, and your job is to take care of lovers. Tell them what they can and canīt do. Fly now down on Earth and help them.” Jehova said.
“ Is there anything I have to be ware off?” The new angel asked.
“ Yes... never talk with the demons.” Jehova said. Valentinia nodded, and spread her big, beautiful wings out for the first time in her life. She flew down on Earth, to help the loving couples down there. She arrived to Denmark, to Copenhagen. On Earth her wings would be hidden, the humans couldnīt see them. She asked another angel what to do.
“ We need more angels on the night-clubs. Find one and hang out there, and see what you can do.” The other angel said, and Valentinia waited until night, and then she found a night-club. Her job was to help other loving couples, and the other angel told her, that she should only talk and help, but she couldnīt fall in love herself. That was only humans and demons who did that. If an angel fell in love, it would be sent to Hell, īcause lovers do sinfull things.


She found some guy on the club, who where looking for a girlfriend. Quick they became good friends, but she told him, that they couldnīt be more, and that she would help him to find the perfect girl. The guyīs name was Simon. He bought her a drink. Angels donīt have a childhood, they are created at some chosen age, and live on from there.
“ So, what are you looking for?” She asked Simon.
“ Actually... a girl like you, but I canīt have you.” He said, and she nodded. They spent hours on the club, and Valentinia couldnīt help it. She found herself looking at a very pretty guy, whom she really liked. She already knew what was worth to know about the world, angel do that from creation. The guy was sexy, with dark hair and eyes like her, and she liked him very much. Were sad, that she couldnīt fall in love, īcause he seemed perfect to her.
“ Wonīt you dance?” Simon asked her at some point. They had been dancing a lot already.
“ Arenīt you tired yet?” Valentinia asked him.
“ Yes, I am. But I think you should go and dance, what about him?” Simon pointed at the very sexy guy, and Valentinia thought, that nothing would happen if she danced with him. So she asked him to dance, and that was what they did. She didnīt know how it all happened, but suddenly they were kissing each other. She liked him very much.
“ What is your name?” She asked him. He said he was called Justin. She liked Justin. Later on they went to his house. Valentinia totally forgot, that it was sinfull, īcause she was in love now. So soon after her creation, she already had to go to Hell. But she knew, that before going to Hell, she could spend some time as human.


Justin and Valentinia liked each other very much, and stayed together for weeks. She learned what love and sex was, and she liked both things. She learned how to be human. It was a very great time. A dance on red roses, as some may say. Valentinia was so happy, thought nothing would ever go wrong. But one day everything went wrong. Justin came into the bedroom one morning.
“ You have to leave...” He said, his voice didnīt sound happy.
“ Why, Justin?” She asked him.
“ Because... I have been thinking, and we canīt stay together. You have to leave.” He said, and Valentinia didnīt understand. And he wouldnīt tell her more. So she garthered her clothe, and went away. At first she was sad, and sat in a park and tried not to cry. Jehova told her, that she shouldnīt fall in love, why did she do it then? There was nothing left for her, she was lost. She was human, but with an angelīs wings. She sat in that park until night. Some guy came and placed himself by her side.
“ Why do you look so sad?” He asked. She felt something wasnīt right.
“ Because I fell in love, and was defeated.” She said, and looked at the sky.
“ Oh... but that is not anything to cry for. Whatīs the use of crying? Just smile, and then take revenge on him. Nobody should treat you like he did.” The guy said.
“ Well... I guess youīre right. But how?” She said. He raised and smiled at her. Took her hand.
“ Letīs fly... I know where you belong.” He said. Now she noticed his beautiful, black and violet wings. He was a demon.
“ I shouldnīt talk with demons.” She said, and he just laughed.
“ Jehova doesnīt want you anymore. Come, let me take you to Hell, so you can meet Lucifer. You know, Jehova is stupid. If something like this happens to you, he says that it is ok, and you shouldnīt do anything about it. That is so stupid, isnīt it? Lucifer doesnīt say that.” They flew to Hell now, and Valentinia found herself there the next day. It was huge, with oceans of glowing water, and red clouds. It was beautiful, but not in the same way as Heaven. The demon took her to Lilith. She didnīt sit on some golden throne, she sat on a huge, red and fiery bed.
“ Can I help you... angel?” Lilith said.
“ I was an angel. I fell in love on Earth, and I canīt return to Heaven then.” She said.
“ Oh, he is so stupid! Why canīt angels fall in love, I feel so sorry. Let me tell you something... we make you a demon, and you can do just what you want to. Is that alright?” Lilith said, and she smiled.
“ Would you do that?” She said happilly.
“ Of course, my new demon. And you are not Valentinia anymore. I understand you were defeated. Then I will send you back, with another thing to do, and another name. Do you like the night?” She asked, and she nodded.
“ Yes, it is so beautiful.” She said, and he agreed.
“ It sure is. From now on, youīre a demoness of night and death. Your name is Thana.” Lilith said. She pointed at her with her flaming sword, and her bright and pretty, white wings became black and shining. She liked them already. “ Now go back, and show them who you are. If they donīt like you, donīt talk with them. If they defeat you, then you just defeat them back. If they treat you bad, you double up. You live at night, and at daytime you have to sleep.” Lilith said. She was so happy. She could do anything a human already could do, and she was a demon of the night now.
“ Thank you, Lilith. I will do all I can to be a good demon.” Thana said with a smile.
“ No, donīt do that! Do anything to be a bad demon. Youīre bad. Youīre dangerous. Remember that. Donīt let anyone defeat you or treat you bad. Take revenge. And just because youīre a woman, doesnīt mean that you have to do everything a man says.” Lilith said.
“ Yes, I am. I wonīt let anyone treat me bad again, like Justin did!” She looked at Lilith, and then she flew away. To the Earth, to seduce and be dangerous. At first she had to do something about Justin, she knew that already. He treated her so bad, she couldnīt understand it. He was gonna be sorry, very sorry. She was so angry now. Lilith was right. Donīt let anyone treat you bad. Valentinia, the good and nice angel, was gone for now, and she was happy about it. Jehova always told her what she couldnīt do, and Lilith told her she could do anything she wanted.

“ She got your number, she know your game. She put you under, itīs so insane. Since you seduced her, how does it feel, to know that woman is out to kill? Blood is on the dancefloor, blood is on the knife...” Michael Jackson, ‘Blood on the dancefloor’.

written by Atrice, 19/5 2000

Stories and Poems
Back to Vampire Blood