This was a case where collaboration worked well. I wasn't sure as to what to have our peers focus on after the presentation but Naphtali was quite sure of the focus. Naphtali was having the same problem I was but in a different way. He had a focus but the language was just awful, which is usually not his style. What he sent me was incoherent and riddled with sentence fragments. I understood the gist of what he wanted to say so I took the liberty to finesse the language that resulted in the following focus question. The follow-up Blackboard focus question for "Shopping Happens."