Avid Writers FanFiction - Reviews For Godzilla : Godzilla Reborn (Part 2)

Name: meca-prime (Originaly Posted on FanFiction.Net)
Review: I liked this as mush as the first one. Can't want to read your third story.

Name: Gomess
Review: Mmm, nice and dark; emotive, sombre tone to the ending. Just one constructive criticism: use more punctuation, just commas and semi colons.... or maybe just shorter sentences. That way it's easier to keep the reader's interest and makes it sound more like real people talking. Snappy sentences are especially useful during fight scenes! As noone else has replied I'd like to be the first to congratulate you on a great story, especially good considering I normally hate (edited due to spolier).



	Reviews For Godzilla : Godzilla Reborn (Part II) Name: meca-prime (Originaly Posted on FanFiction.Net) Review: I liked this as mush as the first one. Can't want to read your third story. Name: Gomess Review: Mmm, nice and dark; emotive, sombre tone to the ending. Just one constructive criticism: use more punctuation, just commas and semi colons.... or maybe just shorter sentences. That way it's easier to keep the reader's interest and makes it sound more like real people talking. Snappy sentences are especially useful during fight scenes! As noone else has replied I'd like to be the first to congratulate you on a great story, especially good considering I normally hate (edited due to spolier).
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Reviews For Godzilla : Godzilla Reborn (Part II)