Motown Heat Feedback

Finally, I'm able to link this page up, because we finally got some opinions on a Motown Heat issue!


On Monday, July 28th, I received this comment about Issue #11, Shattered Innocence:
GOD BLESS THE WOMAN WHO TAUGHT HER KNIVES AND GOD BLESS HER FOR KILLING HIM. THAT WASNT MURDER IT WAS FLUSHING SHIT DOWN A CRAPPER. SOMETHING TO BE DONE AND NOT REMEMBERED
--- Marblecat1@aol.com
I'm going to respond to this firstly by saying this:  I do not either condone or condemn either Rocky for teaching Jasmine how to fight, nor Jasmine for killing her father.  What happened, happened.  There's no way to take it back now.

However, I believe that Song Chin was the true villain of the story.  The pressures he put on Jasmine, both emotional (indirectly blaming her for Chelsea's death), dutiful (making her take up the "housewife" role), and physical (the rape itself) were a despicable act by a man whose moral structure collapsed when the love of his life died, unfairly as he saw it.  The eventual rape of Jasmine seemed to be a logical conclusion to their relationship, as far as he saw things.
As for Jasmine's remembrance of the event, two factors come into play when we discuss this:
1) The team had just liberated a young girl from her own father, who had been doing something similar to what Song Chin did to Jasmine.
2) Deep down, Jasmine still feels guilty about her father's death, even eight years after the fact.  If you'll notice, in the next issue, when Rocky returns (#12, Fagin's Kids, pt. 1), Rocky mentioned that Jasmine went to jail.  In fact, she went to jail for her father's killing.  She only plead guilty to it because she had no idea what she could do about it.  Let's consider the facts: we have a young teenage girl, 17 years old, frightened out of her wits, who's just killed her father because he was about to rape her.  She would not be thinking very clearly, to be realistic.

Thank you, Marblecat1, for your response to my words.  It's nice to know that my writings are having an impact, not just sitting idly on the Web.



On Monday, September 8th, I received this message, also about "Shattered Innocence":
Your story touched me. I too was molested when I was 7 yrs old, but not by my parents, it was a neighbor, who was older than me. As I read your story, I felt your fear, shame, insecurity, and all of those other feelings we feel when someone robs us of our innocense.
I am now 37 yrs old, and I have walked through all the feelings I needed to feel in order for me to heal. I'm a social worker with a police department, and work with victims of domestic violence, sexual assault, child abuse, and juveniles.This is a way for me to not only continue to grow spritually and emotionally, but to help others who have been abused. I hope that your life has changed and that you have grown and turned your experience around as a way to empower others who are beginning to walk the walk that we've been down.
Well I think I've rambled enough, just know that you have a friend in TExas who has shared your pain. Your Friend, Rg
--richmansrags@centuryinter.net (Richard Godoy)
My first reaction to this message? "Wow."

My second? I should have stated on this story that it was a pure work of fiction, that nothing like the situation ever happened to me, personally. I feel really bad now! I have this outpouring of love and support from Rg, and to be quite truthful, I really don't think I deserve it, since the entire story was made up!!

 Still, it's good to know that, like with Marblecat1, this story had an impact, however different, on the reader. Rg's horrible experience, I'm glad to hear, is in the past, where it can't hurt him anymore. This is the way Jasmine wanted to be after her father died. However, as you may see through her actions, she really hasn't resolved this, and put it in her past yet. She still allows her emotions to get in the way of her better judgment. Sometimes this isn't a bad thing; she was thinking clearly when she went to rescue her cousin in Issues #7 and 8, "The Homecoming." However, most of the time, such as in Issue #2, "Bad Memories," or in "Fagin's Kids," she winds up getting hurt, or worse. I don't think anyone thinking clearly would challenge a psychotic immortal or a super-strong punk carrying arm-length blades and jet-powered in-line skates, would they?

My point to all this is that I was shocked to find out exactly how realistic "Shattered Innocence" was. I honestly had no idea! Honest!!



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7th Precinct is now linked with the Detroit Coppers Website, formerly the official Website for the Detroit Police Officers Association (DPOA). This is a major coup, to have the real Detroit Police link up my page! Thanks go out to Jim Orlando, the Detroit Coppers Webmaster, for linking us up!


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