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Hisoka Seme!: Hi there. I just finished reading the second part of 'Left Foot' and just wanted to ask, no beg, to have you write another chapter with Hisoka on top! Thanks! -Melissa Hull
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GENERAL COMMENTS You've got some really nice lemons at your site!Which are humurus,too.Especially the Tatsumi/Watari relationship,with Watari being even worse than Tsuzuki in goofiness^_^Poor Tatsumi-san... - Sayanora
For fanfiction Affinity
I love it. but now I must go to your site. Damn you Fanfiction.net! We are not all pure minded! -Menchi and Tama-chan
Heh-heh-heh-heh-heh. . .*this continues for a while* Woo. Got my pervvy fix. . .now must check site. Heh-heh-*gets bopped by muses*
*is unconscious*
Kai: She loved it. She even hid during the couch scene thing. (Hid behind a cup of Sierra Mist, that is.)
Subaru: Yeah, it's nice. They're so nice to one another. . .*angsty sigh* *gets bopped*
Fe: Stop angsting, you twit. You're filling the air with bad vibes.
Subaru: :P
Fe: *bonks him again*
Kai: I give up on them. Great story. Will read more of your works. ~Ann (and her muses) of TR
For fanfiction Demon Life
Intresting case-fic.And Tsuzuki is such a hentai.What did Watari put in his
sweets xD?And the mysterious woman kicks ass,too.
-Naruto
Though simple,it's a nice continuation.I like lines like 'and inhaled the sweet, yet masculine, scent of Hisoka's hair.'that combine diffrent things.Keep up. - Palladin
It gets more complcated,I like that.Sure Hisoka passes out recently.And he needs Prozack.Lots of them. - Ákuma-sensei
At least a Hisoka who doesn't melt melt when he and Tsuzuki become more-than-partners. I am fed with all those OOC little-girlish Hisokas. Fine work. - azdriel
Good story so far. One mistake: in chapt.1 it was a king sized bed and in chapt.2 it was a queen sized bed. I'll write more later. Gotta fininsh the story first. Love it! - SapphireDragon
Love it! Love it! Love it! Write the next part now! Can't wait 'till then!^_^ - SapphireDragon
I loved it! - Moonfairy2000
For fanfiction On My Mind
Hehe,Hisoka revealed his big bad seme side for good!Nice steamy lemon.Maybe you
should use the 'violet-eyed man' and 'young teen' characterizations less often
in a paragraph,just my opinion. -HiddenWolf
Yes want more want more want alot more *droolz* -Miyu Yomano
For fanfiction BREAKING IT DOWN: Sweetest Vibrations version on fanfiction.net, before I deleted this old version for the new.
Very nice. X33 I like the ending to this chapter. It's pretty without
being stupid. For someone who hasn't written in a while, you do a
wonderful job.
Rar, I want to see where this is going.
-Catesith18
For someone who hasn't written for awhile, you're doing a good job.
It's a pretty introspective piece to me. Update soon. -j
Pretty original introspective fic,not the typical Hisoka-recalls-the-night-under-the-sakura.I like the way the chapter ends.Nice start. - HW
It's getting more intresting.Keep it up ^_^ - howling
Funny and weird.Lets see what's giong on...O_o - ~Kuilla~
Awesome fic. You gotta finish the next one quick. ^_^; Sorry, unintentional rhyme. Still, I hope you will finish writing the next one soon. It would be funny if you add a small scene with Hisoka and Kei. Wonder what Tsuzuki's expression will be? ^_- - SapphireDragon
Interesting... - PoPo
*points* ITS FRANK! *screams*
...*coughs*...*huggles Donnie Darko* ^^
^^ *cant wait for the other updates so reads these* yay ^0^ - YukaYuka
@_x GAAH! This basically ends off in the same place as the other fic... *cries rather pathetically* I shall wait... *mumbles grumpily* - YukaYuka
For fanfiction Sweetest Vibrations
o_x GAAH! *points* YOU! WRITE MORE! *cries* The angst... waah.. *wants more* ~.~ Stupid Soka-chan and Tsu-chan misunderstanding eachother... pleeh XP
^^ *adds to favourites* - YukaYuka
hi! wow... i'm reading now this version of the fic... VERY GOOD! i'm wandering what's gonna happen now, and what it's going to change... (and my perverted mind still waiting for the NC-17 lol)
Sayonara! - Daniela Lynx
WAHT THE ...?! HEY, WHAT THE **TUT** IS GONNA HAPPEN?! I DEMAND THAT YOU CONTINUE! NO! JUST DO IT!
**sorry, but PLEASE do continue...for me...?! - neji
For fanfiction Twister
Twister+Drunk bishounen=FUN
And yes,you must continue this >_< stopped at the best part like that..:p - Kotarou
Fuck... I am gonna burn in hell! I love this shit! Carry on, guys! BWAHAHAHA! More drunk bishies having a good time! Yeah! - Ehehehe...
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