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Name: Metal's Loveless
Gender: Male
Parentage: Wild
Genetics: EE::tt::gg::HH::mM
Notes: He and his only sibling, Metal's Beloved, are the sole survivors of an attack from Sith's Vengence upon their birth shriek. Vengence had come across them, and Loveless's father had crossed her in the past. Everyone knows never to cross Vengence, well at least they did then, because Vengence went into a murderous rage slaughtering them horribly. Beloved and Loveless ran at the beginning of the attack, and seeing how they were in a desert, were forced to hide behind the body of their fallen mother, hiding under her wings. Of course, Vengence's amazing nose could sence life still in the area and began searching, taking only seconds to find the two traumatized hatchlings clinging together hoping she would just make it swift. But being the cruel feoraptor that she is, she found amusement in their misfortune, and promised that she would spare their lives if they would be her slaves. Well of course being young they had no idea of Vengence's intentions and just wanted to stay alive, so they agreed.
Vengence is one of the only feoraptors beside's None's Raven to have a demon or Celestial being parent. Because of this...she can demon touch other creatures. She did just this to Beloved and Loveless, she made them her minions. They can fully think on their own, but they hold the spirit chains that are characteristic of Vengence's Minions. These chains are as light as a feather on the feoraptors themselves...but if they ever tried to take them off they would find them to weigh something in the tons. They also grip tightly around the feoraptor in question when they try to take them off. They burn like red hot metal to other feoraptors or creatures attempting to get them off. These chains also have magical properties that, despite what the feoraptor wants to do, will make them do whatever Vengence tells them to do.
Loveless has been completely and utterly traumatized by the experience with his shriek and to this day is haunted by the images of his dead fellows. He often can be found broading. However, he is completely fearful of Vengence, and does whatever she wants without even the help of the chains. This is all internal. On the external, when not broading, Loveless builds himself up to be hard as a rock. He often has an expression of hatred in his eyes and is extremely agressive with those who oppose Vengence. While he might be hurting on the inside...on the outside he looks as if he's fairing very well, and is worthy of the status that Vengence has given him amoung her minions along with his sister. He is an excellent fighter. He tries never to appear weak to Vengence, while on the inside his reason for this is out of fear, he tries to make it seem like he just wants to please her every wish.
He is in a shriek with his sister and Vengence, which is very strange because the shriek system doesnt allow for siblings of the opposite sex to be in the same one. But because they are the most valuble of her minions Vengence has made it so they are both in her shriek. The shriek is called, "Shriek of the Hated".




Name: Midnight's Cloud
Gender: Male
Parentage: Wild
Genetics: EE::Tt::gg::HH::mm
Notes: He is one of Vengeance's demonic slaves. He bares the mark of this with his changed eyes and the chain that he wears around his legs. All of Vengeance's slaves must obey her every command. They have absolutely no choice in the matter, as the demonic chains keep them from thinking on their own free will. If they do happen to have some sort of power to overcome the chains...the chains begin to constrict, reminding the barer of who they serve. If someone attempt to take it off it will sear flesh from off the bone as well as constrict the wearer. The chains do not burden the barer in the slightest, if they were so bright red, one might even forget they even have it on. Their slave status will only end in death(and even this is not certain) or in the death of Vengeance.
He was found by Vengeance, asleep with his benat companion. He knew the wareabouts of a certain feoraptor she was looking to kill and so she set out to have him tell her. He did so without much hesitation, to which Vengeance was rather suprised. For his great cooperation she spared his life, but made him and his companion her slaves for all eternity. She also just prefered to have him living in the misery of knowing he helpped in the death of a friend.

Name: Sieka
Gender: Male
Parentage: Wild
Notes: He's demon touched, and also the first Vengeance Slave Benat. He serves much the same purpose as a messanger pidgeon.



Name: Hopeless' Determination
Gender: Male
Parentage: Wild
Genetics: ee::tt::gg::HH::mM
Notes: He is one of Vengeance's demonic slaves. He bares the mark of this with his changed eyes and the chain that he wears around his waist. All of Vengeance's slaves must obey her every command. They have absolutely no choice in the matter, as the demonic chains keep them from thinking on their own free will. If they do happen to have some sort of power to overcome the chains...the chains begin to constrict, reminding the barer of who they serve. If someone attempt to take it off it will sear flesh from off the bone as well as constrict the wearer. The chains do not burden the barer in the slightest, if they were so bright red, one might even forget they even have it on. Their slave status will only end in death(and even this is not certain) or in the death of Vengeance.
Determination was given his name by his mother, who began to see at an early age that he was going to go down the same hopeless path of his father. He showed the same signs of depression as his father...and the same hopelessness. She hoped that his name might inspire him to be less like his father and to find a goal in life and go for it. When his mother died in an accident during a hunt, Determination was left more hopeless then before, only to go further into depression when his father left his birth shriek and abandoned him that night, never to be seen again.
His mother had been Determination's biggest form of hope, and not wanting her to die with her wishes unfulfilled, he began searching for some goal to accomplish and to try and finish it. Unknowningly he had already sorta had a goal...in trying to find a goal. None the less he came across Vengeance. And she promised him she would give him happyness and goals if only he served her for the rest of his life. Being the confused young one that he was he agreed. He has sence regreted his choice, but there really isnt anything he can do about it now. In trying to find a way to make his mothers wishs come true...he has crushed them. He is more hopeless then ever.

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