PRESENT TENSE
Chapter Six

 

"Rose! Rose, wake up!"

Rose jumped, startled, as the speaker shook her. Blinking sleepily, she looked up, trying to remember where she was.

Michelle stood in front of her, looking at with concern. "Are you okay?"

"Huh?" Rose looked around, finally remembering where she was she. She was sitting in a chair in the waiting room at Memorial Hospital. Stretching, stiff from sleeping in the uncomfortable chair, she sat up, trying to find her crutches. They were lying on the floor beside her.

Still groggy, Rose looked up at Michelle. Suddenly, as she became more alert, everything came back to her. "What time is it?"

Michelle looked at her watch. "8:30."

Anxiously, Rose struggled to her feet. She had been waiting for an hour and a half, and there had been no word. What if something had happened, and they had chosen not to disturb her while she was sleeping?

"Where are you going?" Michelle followed her to the front desk.

Rose leaned on the counter. The nurse, a different one from the one who had been there earlier, turned to look at her. "Can I help you?"

"Has there been any word on Jack Dawson?"

The nurse turned to look at a collection of sticky notes attached to the computer monitor. "Yes. About half an hour ago, one of the nurses came looking for you. You were sound asleep in that chair over there, so she told me to have you go up to intensive care as soon as you woke up."

"Did she say anything else?"

"No, just go on up there. Someone will be able to tell you what’s going on."

"All right." Rose turned toward the elevators. Michelle followed her.

"Want some moral support?"

"Sure." Anxiously, Rose swung herself into the elevator. She leaned tiredly on her crutches as the door closed. She was exhausted, having gotten only an hour and a half of sleep in the last twenty-five hours, and her ankle ached. She felt dirty and sticky, and had already noted the layers of dirt and soot on her face. Her dress was stiff and stained with dried blood, and ripped in dozen places. She looked and felt awful, but her concern for Jack overwhelmed her own misery for the moment.

She found the room that Jack was in and hurried over to his bed. He hadn’t stirred. Rose looked at him, her anxiety nearly overcoming her. He should have been awake hours ago.

The doctor had seen her come in and hurried over to her.

"How is he? What’s going on?" Rose gripped her crutches so hard her knuckles turned white.

He hesitated for a moment, trying to think of the best way to tell her.

"He’s in a coma." At Rose’s horrified look, he explained, "The brain swelling got worse, which is probably why he’s in a coma. There’s no telling when, or if, he’ll wake up. We’re doing everything we can, but the prognosis is very poor."

Rose stared at him, not wanting to believe it. This couldn’t be happening. It wasn’t possible.

A voice came over the intercom, paging the doctor. He looked sympathetically at Rose’s stricken face. "I’m sorry," he told her, before hurrying away.

The chair she had sat in earlier was still there. Rose sank into it, her hands shaking. Numbly, she stared at Jack. He didn’t look quite as bad as earlier. His face had more color, and the blood transfusions had been stopped. Nevertheless, he was still pale, and he was completely still.

Gently, Rose took his hand, the one without the IV attached. Stroking his hand, she spoke quietly to him.

"Jack, come on. You’ve got to wake up. It’s going to be okay; I know it is. You’ve just got to wake up."

Michelle had found another chair somewhere. Sitting next to Rose, she tapped her on the shoulder.

Rose jumped, startled; she had almost forgotten Michelle was there. She turned to look at her.

"You know, my grandpa’s a preacher, and he always says that prayer is an important part of healing. Maybe we should try it now. It can’t hurt."

Rose hesitated; she had never been one to pray much. Still, Michelle was right. It couldn’t hurt. Bending her head, she prayed silently that Jack would wake up and recover. She wouldn’t pray out loud; it made her think of the loud-mouthed, bigoted evangelists who swept down upon the campus of Elias University twice a year and angered the students so much the police had to stand nearby to protect the demonstrators. But she would ask for a little assistance. Jack needed all the help he could get.

She finally looked up. Michelle’s head was bent, too, and Rose was suddenly grateful. Michelle didn’t know Jack very well, but she still cared.

Rose sat quietly for a few minutes, holding Jack’s hand. Finally, she spoke.

"This is all Cal’s fault."

"How so?" Michelle had assumed that Jack’s injuries were from the earthquake.

"Cal’s the one who shot him in the back."

Michelle’s mouth dropped open. "He’s been shot?"

Rose nodded. "Cal was aiming for me, but Jack got in the way. We took cover between two half-collapsed buildings, which then collapsed on us. We had to climb out, which is when Jack got hit in the head with a chunk of concrete. If Cal hadn’t pulled that gun, none of this would have happened."

"You’re not still planning on marrying him, are you?"

Rose held up her hand, showing her bare finger. "I broke off the engagement before any of this happened, which was probably why he was so upset."

"I guess he didn’t take it well."

"That’s an understatement."

"I thought you were committed to him."

"Committed is a good word. That’s what happens to crazy people, isn’t it? Getting engaged to him was a colossal mistake. I wish I’d never met him."

"He did seem to be a real jerk, the few times I met him."

"He is. But I was dumb enough to keep hoping things would change, even though they just kept getting worse. I finally realized just how futile it was yesterday, and decided to end the relationship."

"What finally changed your mind?"

"Yesterday morning, he slammed my hand against a door frame because I disagreed with him." She showed Michelle her bruised wrist. Michelle raised an eyebrow, but didn’t comment. Rose already knew her opinion of Cal.

Rose continued with her story, telling Michelle about picking up her wedding gown, about going to see Jack, and about the subsequent confrontation with Cal. She left out only a few details, such as the interlude in Jack’s bedroom, and the fact that she had broken Jack out of jail.

"And now Jack’s in a coma, and he might not make it," Rose concluded, her voice breaking. She took a deep breath, blinking her eyes rapidly, as she squeezed Jack’s hand.

"Are you going to be okay?" Michelle asked her. "You’re not going to cry, are you?"

"No," Rose told her, and promptly burst into tears. Michelle dug into her purse and handed Rose a crumpled tissue.

"Don’t worry, it’s clean," she told her, as Rose took it gingerly.

Rose tried to stop crying. But she was worried, frightened, and exhausted, and her aching ankle and ribs didn’t help. "I’m sorry," she choked out, wiping her face on one of the few clean spots left on her skirt.

"Don’t be," Michelle told her, handing her another tissue.

"Why are you here, anyway?" Rose asked her, swiping at her face with the tissue. It came away covered with dirt.

"I brought Mari here this morning."

"Mari? What happened?"

"Well, the dorm building survived the earthquake, but a bunch of things fell down. We cleaned up most of the mess, but Mari didn’t realize until this morning that her lava lamp had also fallen down and broken. She figured it out right about the time she stepped on a shard of the broken glass and cut her foot open. I’ve never heard such...creative...swearing before," she told Rose. "She jumped up and down, hopped back up on her bed, and called the lava lamp a few things that shouldn’t be repeated."

For some reason this struck Rose as hilarious. She clapped a hand over her mouth, trying to muffle her giggles. Michelle looked at her oddly.

"Must be something in the air," she mumbled.

Rose finally stopped laughing. Clutching the crumpled tissues in her right hand, she shook her head. "I don’t know what’s come over me."

"You’re probably overtired," Michelle told her. "I’d bet they’re about through with Mari by now—there was a line, which was why I wandered off. Enough of the roads are passable here that we can get back to the dorm. Classes are canceled this week because of the earthquake—one of the dorms collapsed and the library caved in."

"Was anyone hurt?"

"Quite a few people in the collapsed dorm were hurt, and three died that we know of. Luckily, it was that one story dorm, so there wasn’t so much to fall, and about half of the people who lived there were out. No one was in the library except a custodian, and he got out okay. Lucky for him, he was near the door. If he’d been caught in amongst all those mazes of shelves, he would have been crushed."

"How do you know all this?"

"One of the campus cops helped get Mari to my car." She shook her head, then looked at Rose. "You’re both strange. You laughed, and Mari tried to flirt with the cop."

"What’s so strange about that?"

"His wife was right behind him."

"Oh."

"Why don’t you come back to the dorm for a while? You aren’t missing any classes, and you could get some clean clothes and some rest."

"I can’t. What if something happens and I’m not here?"

"If he wakes up now and sees you, you’ll probably scare him." She pulled a small mirror out of her purse and handed it to Rose. "You look like something out of a horror movie."

Rose had to admit she looked pretty bad. Her face was streaked with dirt and soot, she had dark circles under her eyes from lack of sleep, and her eyes were red from crying. Still, she didn’t want to leave Jack. If something happened, she would never be able to forgive herself for not being there.

"No. If something happened, I wouldn’t know."

"You could have them call you on your cell phone. I noticed the phones here are working, although they’re not back at the dorm. The power’s out, too, but you can still get cleaned up and rest. The water is still running."

Rose still shook her head. “I lost my cell phone—and my purse—in the earthquake.”

Michelle tried another tactic. "Well, then, they could you on my cell phone, or Mari’s. You aren’t doing him any good, anyway, staying here and making yourself sick because you won’t rest. What if he wakes up and discovers that you’ve hurt yourself?"

Rose sighed reluctantly, too tired to argue further. "All right. I’ll go back to the dorm. But I want to come back here this afternoon."

"Fine. I’ll bring you back then. Now, let’s go find Mari."

Rose got up, then kissed Jack on the forehead before following Michelle.

Chapter Seven
Stories