“Cinerarium”
An
experiment in CPS in Movie Reviews
By David EJ Felker
What is Cinerarium?
Cinerarium is an idea I have for a movie review tv show or an article. In Websters Dictionary (1988, p. 253, 73) the prefix cine- is defined as film or movie. The suffix -arium is defined as a place for or connected with. Cinerarium is a place for and connected with film and movies. You will read below that not only is film is a creative product but tools are needed to create a more accurate review of the product.
The creative product is a
product that is novel. It is a
product that is completely original or changes an old one.
A creative product is one that changes that way we are whether it is
across the world or in a community. The
creative product is a mirror image of the inventor.
Hilgard (1959, p.162) speaks
about the importance of products and the creative problem solving process.
He Stated:
“The capacity to create
useful or beautiful products and to find ways of
resolving perplexity is not
limited to the highly gifted person, but is the
birthright of every person
of average talent. Because
I believe these
symposia to be concerned
primarily with ways of bringing the best out of
people, I have chosen to
consider how we might best encourage creativity and
problem solving approach
among those with whom we deal, whether they be
children in our homes,
students in our classes, or workers in our factories,
offices, and laboratories”.
(Iskaksen, Dorval, &Treffinger,
1994, p. 8) “Creative products can be found in the arts, sciences, the
humanities, and in any discipline or domain of human endeavor.
They can be the result of the efforts of individuals or groups. They may be varying degrees of novelty and usefulness”.
With this papers I will refer to a specific type of creative product.
This product is film. It
is important to look at creative product (film). It is just as important to
look at assessment of creative product (film review).
Kael
(1963) spoke about how Sturgis’ movies are creative.
Antonioni movies are complex.
Both movies are creative in their own way.
In assessing the creative
product or reviewing the film, the assessor or critic, has the ability to
shape the thinking of the theater goer.
Altshuler and Janaro states
(1967, p. 9):
“ Nonetheless, a glance
through the amusement pages of the local newspaper
is it unrealistic to expect an expect an exciting, rewarding experience
at the
movies.
With a careful selection of films, based on the reputation of the
moviemaker, the opinion of a
discriminating critic, or our own previous
experience, we may be attending
a screen drama that will someday be read
and analyzed as the great live plays of are now
preserved and studied”.
Altshuler and Janaro point
out the importantance of a good critique.
A bad critique leaves the reader or viewer confused.
McCreadie states (1983, p.
67-8)
“ In a “10 Best” piece
for the New York Herald Tribune written in December
1964, Judith Crist, like many
others, liked director Stanley Kubricks’s Dr.
Strangelove, or How I learned
to stop Worrying and Love the Bomb. She
calls
it a masterpiece of movie
making of a very American Kind.” But Crist doesn’t
explain what an “American
Kind” means. Too, The Script, performances, and
cinematic techniques are “
superb”, but we don’t find out why.”
Altshuler, Janaro, and
McCreadie point out the importance of clear and concise information. This
information leads to a good review and a happy moviegoer.
I have brought together three
tools in order to create a more accurate movie review. These tools are:
A: ALU
B: CPSS or Creative Product
Semantic Scale
C:
Evaluation Matrix
For an example I have
chosen to use the film “ Dazed and Confused”.
· Tells people about life in 1976
· very simplistic. fun too watch
· characters are amusing
· great music
· every scene flows into the next
Limitations:
·
some
of the actors are okay at best
·
person
who plays Michael is a real bad actor
Unique
Qualities:
·
timing
of music and scenes flow very good (music matches action)
Novelty
Original
over used - fresh predictable – novel
usual – unusual unique - ordinary original – conventional |
Surprising
stale
–
startling
customary
– surprising
astonishing
–
commonplace
shocking
-
old-fashioned
astounding – common
|
Germinal warmed over – trendsending revolutionary – average radical – old hat uninfluential – influential pioneering – unprogressive |
Valuable worthless – valuable important - unimportant significant – insignificant unessential – essential unnecessary – necessary |
Logical
illogical – logical makes sense – senseless irrelevant - relevant appropriate – inappropriate adequate – inadequate
|
Useful ineffective – effective functional – non functional
operable – inoperable useful – useless workable – unworkable |
Organic
ordered -
disordered
arranged – disarranged
organized
– disorganized formless
-
formed incomplete – complete
|
Elegant
graceful
– awkward repelling
–
charming coarse
–
elegant
attractive
– unattractive retained – busy |
Complex intricate
–
straightforward
simple
- complex plain
–
ornate
complicated
- uncomplicated boring – interesting
|
Well
Crafted
skilled
– bungling
well
made – botched crude
–
well crafted
meticulous
– sloppy careless – careful |
Understandable
meaningful
– meaningless mystifying
-
understandable
intelligible
- unintelligible
clear
– ambiguous unexplained – self explanatory |
Dorval, Isaksen, and
Treffinger (1994) created a model to compare problem and criteria. This model
is the evaluation matrix. Below
are the areas that the film will be reviewed on
Plot
Premise
Acting
Language
Nudity
F/X
Length
Adult Content
Plot: Storyline of film
= Good story line from
beginning to end O = Like Ragu “It’s in there”O = What storyline
|
Language:
Profanity
O
= Many words that cannot be
repeated
= A little word here or there
O = No profanity |
F/X: Is there any special effects
O
= Fully loaded with F/X
O
= It has some = No F/X
|
Premise: Underlying idea of film
= Underlying idea is
great
O = It’s the usual
piece O = We were making a film
|
Nudity:
Is there any nudity and to what
degree
O
= Lengthy scenes
O
= brief nudity = No nudity
|
Length:
How long is the movie
O
= Within 1hr 30 min
= Within 2 hrs O = Over 2 hrs |
Acting:
Talent of actors
O = academy award
winners
= Not that bad O = Cannot act way out of paper bag
|
Violence:
To what degree of violence
O
= This movie is or should be
an
action film
= Something here or there O = No Violence |
Adult
Content: Adult orientated subjects
= Talk of sexual actions
= Drugs O = Clear of Adult content
|
I feel that CPSS & the
ALU can be looked at together in order to write the perfect review.
The ALU makes you look at good, bad, and unique aspects of the film.
CPSS is a paper and pencil test that makes you really sit down and
think about the movie. The
CPSS brings about some key words that can help you the reviewer to write a
much deeper ALU. This could then be used for a column in a
paper or tv movie review show. This information along with the Evaluation Matrix could be
used to create a better informed viewer.
People could get better ideas about that film they are not sure about.
I feel that my learnings from this project were very important.
When I researched the topic, I didn’t think anything in film critique
would have anything to with creativity. Then
I found this: Borwell states (1989,p.29-30).
Four problems confronts the
critic
1) Don’t be afraid to review pieces outside of the norm. ( ex. Trailers, home
movies, documentaries, etc)
2)
Use of appropriate and understandable language
3)
Sufficient novelty in critique
4)
Persuasiveness of article
This section of the book was referred to as “ problem solving”. I
was very happy with the information I gathered on film critique. This information justified my thoughts on the ambiguity of
film reviewers. Bordwell has
pointed out the need for Creative Problem Solving in Film review. In speaking about film and tv, Gianetti states
(1995, p.vii) “we
watch them uncritically, passivly, allowing them to wash over us, rarely
analyzing how they work on us, how they shape our values.”
It is time as reviewers we drop the passiveness and the ambiguity and
write clear and concise reviews.
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