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“Cinerarium”

 

An experiment in CPS in Movie Reviews

 

 

By David EJ Felker

 

What is Cinerarium?

 

                Cinerarium is an idea I have for a movie review tv show or an article.   In Websters Dictionary (1988, p. 253, 73) the prefix cine- is defined as film or movie. The suffix -arium is defined as a place for or connected with.   Cinerarium is a place for and connected with film and movies.   You will read below that not only is film is a creative product but tools are needed to create a more accurate review of the product.

What is a creative product?

 

                The creative product is a product that is novel.  It is a product that is completely original or changes an old one.  A creative product is one that changes that way we are whether it is across the world or in a community.  The creative product is a mirror image of the inventor.

                Hilgard (1959, p.162) speaks about the importance of products and the creative problem solving process.   He Stated:

                “The capacity to create useful or beautiful products and to find ways of

                resolving perplexity is not limited to the highly gifted person, but is the 

                birthright of every  person of average talent.   Because I believe these

                symposia to be concerned primarily with ways of bringing the best out of

                people, I have chosen to consider how we might best encourage creativity and

                problem solving approach among those with whom we deal, whether they be

                children in our homes, students in our classes, or workers in our factories,

                offices, and laboratories”.

                (Iskaksen, Dorval, &Treffinger, 1994, p. 8) “Creative products can be found in the arts, sciences, the humanities, and in any discipline or domain of human endeavor.  They can be the result of the efforts of individuals or groups.  They may be varying degrees of novelty and usefulness”.

               With this papers I will refer to a specific type of creative product.  This product is film.  It is important to look at creative product (film). It is just as important to look at assessment of creative product (film review).

               Kael (1963) spoke about how Sturgis’ movies are creative.   Antonioni movies are complex.   Both movies are creative in their own way.

Assessment of The Creative Product

 

             In assessing the creative product or reviewing the film, the assessor or critic, has the ability to shape the thinking of the theater goer.

            Altshuler and Janaro states (1967, p. 9):

                 “ Nonetheless, a glance through the amusement pages of the local newspaper                                 reveals movies as by far the most popular form of theater-going available. Nor        

                 is it unrealistic to expect an expect an exciting, rewarding experience at the

                 movies.  With a careful selection of films, based on the reputation of the

                 moviemaker, the opinion of a discriminating critic, or our own previous  

                experience, we may be attending a screen drama that will someday be read        

                 and  analyzed as the great live plays of are now  preserved and studied”.

           Altshuler and Janaro point out the importantance of a good critique.  A bad critique leaves the reader or viewer confused.

           McCreadie states (1983, p. 67-8)

                “ In a “10 Best” piece for the New York Herald Tribune written in December

                1964, Judith Crist, like many others, liked director Stanley Kubricks’s Dr.

                Strangelove, or How I learned to stop Worrying and Love the Bomb.  She calls

                it a masterpiece of movie making of a very American Kind.” But Crist doesn’t

                explain what an “American Kind” means. Too, The Script, performances, and

                cinematic techniques are “ superb”, but we don’t find out why.”

           Altshuler, Janaro, and McCreadie point out the importance of clear and concise information. This information leads to a good review and a happy moviegoer.

            I have brought together three tools in order to create a more accurate movie review. These tools are:

             A: ALU

             B: CPSS or Creative Product Semantic Scale

             C: Evaluation Matrix

For an example I have chosen to use the film “ Dazed and Confused”.

ALU

           The ALU is a tool that was designed by Isaksen and Treffinger in 1985.   This tool looks at  the advantages, limitations, and unique qualities of a problem.

Advantages:

·         Tells people about life in 1976

·         very simplistic. fun too watch

·         characters are amusing

·         great music

·         every scene flows into the next

 

Limitations:

·        some of the actors are okay at best

·        person who plays Michael is a real bad actor

 

Unique Qualities:

·        timing of music and scenes flow very good (music matches action)

 

Creative Problem Semantic Scale

             Besemer and O’Quinn (1989) created a model to look at a products novelty, resolution, and elaboration and synthesis

Novelty

Original

 

  over used -  fresh

  predictable –  novel

 

  usual – unusual

unique -  ordinary

original –  conventional

 

Surprising

  stale –   startling

  customary – surprising

astonishing –  commonplace

shocking   old-fashioned

astounding –  common

 

Germinal

  warmed over – trendsending

revolutionary –  average

radical –  old hat

uninfluential –  influential

  pioneering – unprogressive

Resolution

Valuable

worthless –  valuable

  important - unimportant

  significant – insignificant

unessential –  essential

unnecessary –  necessary

Logical

 

illogical –  logical

  makes sense – senseless

irrelevant  relevant

  appropriate – inappropriate

  adequate – inadequate

 

Useful

ineffective –  effective

  functional – non functional

          

  operable – inoperable

  useful – useless

  workable – unworkable

Elaboration and Synthesis

Organic

  ordered - disordered

  arranged – disarranged

  organized – disorganized

formless  formed

incomplete –  complete

 

Elegant

  graceful – awkward

repelling –  charming

coarse –  elegant

  attractive – unattractive

retained –  busy

Complex

intricate –  straightforward

  simple - complex

plain –  ornate

  complicated - uncomplicated      

boring –  interesting

 

Well Crafted

  skilled – bungling

  well made – botched

crude –  well crafted

  meticulous – sloppy

careless –  careful

Understandable

  meaningful – meaningless

mystifying  understandable

  intelligible - unintelligible

  clear – ambiguous

unexplained –  self explanatory

 

Evaluation Matrix

               Dorval, Isaksen, and Treffinger (1994) created a model to compare problem and criteria. This model is the evaluation matrix.  Below are the areas that the film will be reviewed on

            Plot

            Premise

            Acting

            Language

            Nudity

            Violence

            F/X

            Length

            Adult Content

 

Plot: Storyline of film

         = Good story line from 

                  beginning to end

            O = Like Ragu “It’s in there”

            O = What storyline

 

Language: Profanity

      O = Many words that cannot be   

                  repeated

   = A little word here or there

      O = No profanity

F/X: Is there any special effects

      O = Fully loaded with F/X

      O = It has some

   = No F/X

 

Premise: Underlying idea of film

        = Underlying idea is great

         O = It’s the usual piece

         O = We were making a film

 

Nudity: Is there any nudity and to what  

             degree

      O = Lengthy scenes

      O = brief nudity

    = No nudity

 

Length: How long is the movie

      O = Within 1hr 30 min

     = Within 2 hrs

      O = Over 2 hrs

Acting: Talent of actors

         O = academy award winners

       = Not that bad

         O = Cannot act way out of paper bag

 

Violence: To what degree of violence is there

      O = This movie is or should be

                  an action film

    = Something here or there

      O = No Violence

Adult Content: Adult orientated subjects

    = Talk of sexual actions

    = Drugs

      O = Clear of Adult content

 

 

In Conclusion

 

            I feel that CPSS & the ALU can be looked at together in order to write the perfect review.  The ALU makes you look at good, bad, and unique aspects of the film.  CPSS is a paper and pencil test that makes you really sit down and think about the movie.  The CPSS brings about some key words that can help you the reviewer to write a much deeper ALU.   This could then be used for a column in a paper or tv movie review show.  This information along with the Evaluation Matrix could be used to create a better informed viewer.  People could get better ideas about that film they are not sure about. 

            I feel that my learnings from this project were very important.  When I researched the topic, I didn’t think anything in film critique would have anything to with creativity.  Then I found this: Borwell states (1989,p.29-30).

                    Four problems confronts the critic

1)                            Don’t be afraid to review pieces outside of the norm. ( ex. Trailers, home 

                  movies, documentaries, etc)

2)                            Use of appropriate and understandable language

3)                            Sufficient novelty in critique

4)                            Persuasiveness of article

 

      This section of the book was referred to as “ problem solving”. I was very happy with the information I gathered on film critique.  This information justified my thoughts on the ambiguity of film reviewers.  Bordwell has pointed out the need for Creative Problem Solving in Film review.   In speaking about film and tv, Gianetti states

(1995, p.vii) “we watch them uncritically, passivly, allowing them to wash over us, rarely analyzing how they work on us, how they shape our values.”   It is time as reviewers we drop the passiveness and the ambiguity and write clear and concise reviews.

   

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Biography


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