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Dead Men Don't Come Back [Unedited Version]

If you read my other story, "The Ridge", this may be a little similar. This time, rather than a single sniper, I'm working with a squad of four, working together, singular, not divided, yada yada yada. Needless to say, there's more guns and more shooting.

So, with that said, I'll leave you to the story, and I hope you enjoy it. Oh yeah, feedback me if you like the ending (just so you know, I have recieved feedback for this and I have revised as I saw fit). So yeah, sit back, relax, and remember:




"Dead Men Don't Come Back (v1.1)", by Some Guy


We knew we were about halfway through our mission time, and we still had yet to make contact with the enemy. Through the thicket of trees we could all hear the shots being exchanged, but that was where it ended. It was definitely not like the movies. No one was screaming. They were too busy getting shot.

The four of us had just come to a clearing in the forest when Vick, our guy up front, pulled a fist back and stopped.
"All right, there's two guys behind that wall." Sure enough, poking around the side and top of the hastily fastened fortification were two black gun barrels.
"No way we're gonna hit them from here," Frankie told us, as if we didn't already know.
"Okay, I'm gonna close in," Vick said.
"I'll come with," Frankie quietly seconded.
"Okay," Vick continued, "we'll close in. You two cover us."
"That I can do." Paul said comfortably. I just nodded.

It didn't take long for the two guys to notice us, which really sucked for Vick and Frankie, who were quickly under fire. We weren't worried, though. As far as I knew, Vick and Frank had some hefty adamantine balls stashed under those pants. As the fearless ones advanced, Paul and I put fire on the wall, making the two guys ducked back like clockwork. Vick and Frankie then finished the job, and waved us forward.

"Man, that was nice!" Frankie said proudly. "Those two got their asses pelted to hell!" There really wasn't a lot to say, so I just told him,
"Nice, man."
"Damn straight it was nice!" he assured me. It was under his facemask, but I knew he was beaming.
"Come on," Vick said, "Let's get moving."

The four of us reformed our tactical column with Vick leading in the front, followed by Frankie directly behind. I remained as the rearguard to watch our backs - that, or to get shot first and give the others warning. It's something to do, I suppose.

As we ran in formation, a funny thought reached me.
"Hey guys," I said, loudly enough to be heard, "don'cha think we should have bayonets?" Everyone gave a friendly chuckle, but Frankie still had to say,
"Johnny, you're an idiot."
"Yeah Johnny," Paul agreed, "besides, you'd be long gone before you ever got close enough to bayonet someone. And even then, how would that work?"
"I'm just sayin' it'd be cool," I replied lightly.
" . . . You're an idiot," Frankie repeated.

Our squad eventually came to another small clearing dotted with more sections of wooden barriers. Directly afterwards, a fantastic roar and a shower of expended ammunition greeted us. Paul's face (or at least what I could see of it) went completely cadaverous as we dropped behind a barrier.
"Where the hell did they get a friggin' machinegun nest?" our shaking friend screamed.
"You didn't know about their guy with the big gun?" Frankie started. "Where the hell were you?"
"Guys, cool it," Vick reminded us. Everyone cooled it.

"All right," Vick went on, "we obviously can't just exchange fire with him, or we'd get blown away . . ."
"Oh, you think?" Frank tagged on quickly.
"Shut up," Vick tagged back. He looked back and forth among us. "Did anyone bring a grenade?"
"Yeah, I got one," I told him.
"Can you throw that far?"
"I'll probably need to get a little closer."
"Okay, you do that. Push up, we'll cover you."

I took a slow breath and got my bearings set on a new position behind another barrier.
"Hey, how are we for time?" I breathfully asked. Vick checked his watch.
"Not good."
"Great . . ." I gripped my gun extra tight as Vick quietly counted to three and directed the squad to let loose a hail of suppressing fire on the gunner. I ran like hell. The plan worked out, and I was still in the game. I quickly found the grenade on my belt and pulled it loose. As I prepped it I checked to my team and saw them motioning for me to hurry up. I pulled the pin and let the damn thing fly.

There was a huge spray of red colour from behind the barrier. Likewise, the automatic fire ceased - we got the bastard. I shouted to my people,
"It's clear! Let's go!" We regained our column and headed forward.

By this point our squad was deep in the enemy's half of the forest. We knew we were going to be in a heap any second.
"Hey, should we worry about our flanks?" Paul asked under his breath. "I mean, we're the only ones from our team out this far . . ." Frankie interrupted,
"Okay, you can get shot and we'll hide behind you, okay?" We all laughed at Paul's expense, but we all knew his words held some significance. Still, there really wasn't a lot we could do about it if it happened. Of course, I was never one for luck . . .

"Cover! Two guys behind the wall!" Vick shouted as the shots impacted the thick trees around us.
"One on the right behind a tree too!" I added as I crouched behind a hefty trunk. The four of us returned fire, Vick and I behind one tree, Frankie and Paul crouched behind another. I swore quietly to myself. Over at the other tree Frankie did the same, saying something about "God-damned pitched gunfights". I had to agree . . .

After about half a minute of exchanges, Vick finally got lucky and left a crimson splatter across the man behind the tree. Our worries were shrunken down to only one direction for a thankful bridge of time. Of course, there's the saying about all good things. As the four of us fired on the two, Paul switched the focus of his shooting.
"Three more coming from the left side!" I turned in time to see three heads duck behind a fallen tree. The area instantly became heavy with commotion as the air was filled with shots from all directions.

"Push forward!" I called out, though it came out as more of a suggestion to the others. I knew I had to make the first move. "Cover me," I told Vick before I ran, serpent-like, to another tree. I heard the shots skip off the ground around me, but none dared to impact my being. Looking back, I could just see the tip of Paul's gun, pointed up awkwardly at God knows what. Frankie was just trying to do what he could with his cumbersome line of sight. Vick just looked pissed off. "C'mon, we're running out of time!" I screamed to them. Vick readied himself.

I gave some covering fire as Vick began his sprint. By now Frankie or Paul (probably Frankie, though) had taken out two of theirs, but the enemy was still firing hard. I could hear Vick nearing me, so I scooted over behind the other half of the tree to give him more room; too little too late.

The heavy thuds the rounds made against Vick's camo-covered chest seemed to freeze the moment, giving him more time to call out things I didn't want to hear him say. Behind me I could hear Paul saying something to no one, but I was too far away to hear it clearly. I didn't have to, though; I knew what he was thinking. The bastards tagged Vick.

With Vick slowly departing from us, the others put heavy fire on me behind my tree. I would poke out now and then to snap off a few shots, but apart from that I was pretty useless. I looked back to my remaining mates.
"You two! Try to get around to their flanks! I'll cover ya best I can!" They both gave a nod and displaced themselves. "Hurry too! We're running on no time!"

I snapped off another pair of rounds and ended up scaring the hell out of one guy. Before I pulled myself back behind the tree I saw one of the guys displacing - pushing forward. I rained hell on him, but missed. We had two minutes left, and Frankie and Paul seemed to have disappeared completely from the engagement.

I gave up on waiting for my colleagues and took flight. I gave a good burst of fire on all three of their positions, but still to no avail. Unfortunately for me, physics also dealt a form of justice in that if I could see them, they could see me. I barely had time to baseball-slide behind a nearby log barrier before the dreaded volley reached me.

I was angry now. No, I wasn't angry; I was pissed off royal! This whole operation was screwed up. Hardly anyone on the team committed to the attack, Vick bought it, and the rest of the damn squad had disappeared! I ducked back down as a shot skimmed past my ear . . . yeah, that did it for me.

I stood straight up and fired madly with the intent of getting some head shots. In its own way, it was a little bit like the movies, but that's why we watch them and not act on them. My uncouth tactics ended up lasting about two seconds before someone hit me. The shot snapped me back to reality like a hard slap in the face. I touched my quivering hand to the side of my neck as I dropped behind the barrier. It stung hard, much worse than lots of people said. That was beside the point, though. My fingertips were still covered in the thick, red liquid . . . . .






A smiling Vick greeted me when I passed through the gate.
"Oh, the neck, you unlucky bastard!" I took off my facemask and smiled back.
"Yeah, they got me."
"Man, we got rocked . . ." Vick trailed off as he took a sip from his water bottle. I just agreed with him again as I towelled the paint off my neck.
"Oh well," I said, "we'll get 'em when we go back out next game . . ."