EVEning things out

There once was a young lady named Eve
Whose boyfriend she started to peeve
By pointing out his faults to her friend
To the point he thought it wouldn’t end

When her best friend left for the washroom
He whisper the position for her to assume
Eve pretended that it was all a joke
And gave him a good natured poke

It wasn’t till he took her into his arms
She resorted to exposing her charms
Eve knew what he had in his mind
which didn’t auger well for her behind

Her tactics almost quelled his intent
As she kissed him whispering to relent
But when he caught the twinkle in her eyes
Her skirt was soon lifted up to her thighs

Then with a quick twirl of her waist
Her panties were exposed post haste
His hand as it reach for the waistband
She knew she must make a last stand

She pleaded not to lower her panties here
It was enough that her friend would hear
She heard all your criticisms just before
So I don’t care if her ear is to the door

He then lowered her panties with a yank
Then to her chagrin he started to spank
Eve muffled her reactions for quite a bit
Her mind however was still having a fit

Sure her friend could hear every smack
For strength his left hand didn’t lack
Still Eve struggled not to show her voice
But soon she really had little choice

As the tears trickled down her face
He even picked up the spanking pace
Till she had to let on it was her seat
That was feeling his spanking hands heat



When she thought she heard the door squeek
She dared not even take even a peek
It wasn’t till she saw her friend shoes
That she really knew the blues.


Still her boyfriend didn’t stop the spanking
A fact on which her poor bottom was banking
But she had to continue to bounce on his knee
As he soft wet tears now flowed quite free

It never seemed that her spanking would end
Even found herself now promising to mend
But when he finally stopped raising his hand
He still had more punishment for her planned

First she had to apologize to her friend
To which her friend promptly grinned
Then with a smack to her left cheek
She was told to the corner to retreat

Eve obeyed feeling the fire as she walked
Then stood quietly while they just talked
To Eve it seemed like forever in the corner
But it took only one look over to warn her

So she sobbed with her red cheeks still bare
To listen to them talk as if she wasn’t there
But Eve started to realize she had been unfair
And was ashamed of abusing his loving care

It was then that a new Eve emerged from the wall
With a long hug from both, that made her stand tall
She had learned a great lesson she knew that day
And an amazing new women had emerged to stay


Ron J

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