Writing Packet #5 Evaluation
10=perfect
8=one mistake
0=more than one mistake
_____1. Paragraph follows 1232323 format,making sure
that all supporting sentences relate directly to
topic sentence.
_____2. One sentence reverses the traditional
subject/verb word order to add sentence
variety.
_____3. One sentence appropriately ends in an
exclamation; this sentence should contain a
surprising fact or an interjection.
_____4. One sentence opens with an adverb after the
transition word. This adverb should be in addition
to any adverbial transition words.
_____5. One sentence should demonstrate a sentence
variation you have already learned. Choose from the
following: topic sentence as a question, open with a
prepositional phrase after the transition word, or,
in addition to #4 above, another sentence which opens
with an adverb after the transition word.
_____6. 2nd and 3rd power sentences should start
with a transition.
_____7. Include all necessary commas and exclude any
unnecessary commas.
_____8. The paragraph contains no "be"
verbs.
_____9. All sentences are complete; the paragraph
contains no fragments or run ons.
_____10. Appearance: the paragraph is indented,
written in ink, contains no crossed-out words,
capitalized correctly, and contains no misspelled
words.
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