May 05, 2001
>Upon a quiet night
>when all seems so dark
>we are set upon a journey
>of many tiring miles
>A journey of which we know not
>a journey of which we see not
>a journey of which we fear not
>a journey of which we want not
>In a landscape of violent colors
>one desire enters the mind
>one obsession blinds us
>one question drives us
>And so we walk a path
>many have walked before
>and though many prior to us
>the path is unexplored
>So go the way you know not
>the one that you fear yet want
>go the extra mile to find your self
>and enter the scape of the dream
>-Dream Maker
>No E-mail given
Comment: I like it alot! Colorful imagery and metaphors. A++
-Mageta Leon
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