A Vision of You
by Jari Vester from Finland
Musical Standing: Amateur composer, just a hobby
Style of Piece: Pop-music
Evaluation:
Structure - (8.5) From the intro to measure 51, the building is really well done. However, after the change in 51, something new would be nice to hear. The change in 83 is very nice. You may want to bring that out sooner. The break from the "83" change to the coda is a bit sudden.
Musicality -(8.5) Very nice! The piece is constantly moving ahead. The breaks 51, 83, and 99 are all good, but not all of them are placed well.
Theme - (7) There is not a single theme that seems to jump out of the piece. On the other hand, one can sing along just because of the simplicity and predictablity of the Strings soprano line.
Performance - (8) Very Enjoyable. Dramatic
dynamic changes would be very helpful to the motion of the piece.
Total: 8
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