My first boyfriend         taught me lust, My second boyfriend         taught me trust, My first husband         taught me stability, And my second husband         taught me love, My next boyfriend         taught me loyalty, And my third husband         taught me independence. When I was young,         my father told me to live life to it's fullest.         And I have, just one step at a time. |
Copyright ©2011 Ashi Shadow - on Stasia, 01/11/11
The Loyalty line was supposed to be somewhere else originally, and something else there, but I ended up going with this version even though I didn't come up with an ordering that I felt was perfect.
The ordering of the boyfriends/husbands feels perfect to me, and the ordering of most of the traits feel perfect (lust, independence, stability, love), it's the other ones that I feel like could use some tweaking.
At the end, considered "to trust" and "The next boyfriend."