As I stand over you looking into your eyes, I ask myself: |
Copyright ©2009 Ashi
Shadow -1/31/10 on Kiera, fictional.
Was originally one stanza.
I am aware that the last line is not the same as the first instance.
I do that sometimes intentionally in my poems.
Considered "Pillars of the Earth", but I think I will keep
"world."
Considered "in my chest" instead of "in my ear"
Considered adding as introductory lines:
"I stand above you, with my eyes just inches above yours,
looking into them, and I ask myself:"
Ended up still adding an introductory line, but shorter.