FLEXIBLE METAL

You know,
I might not be in your life
much longer.

Because you push me
and you pull me, and
I'm not made
of strong enough metal.

But I wrote a poem on you,
and I just wanted you to see it,
before I leave.

***

You know,
I might not be
in your life much longer.

Because you push me
and you pull me, and
I'm not made of
strong enough metal.

But I wrote a poem on you,
and I just wanted you to see it,
before I leave.

Copyright ©2007 Ashi Shadow 8/6/07 On Jen (Mz Skeptic)
Not sure which one is better, or another variant.