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Like the petals of a flower,
my bonds with you fall away, and I wane. |
Copyright ©2007 Ashi Shadow 9/8/07 On Jen/Ms Skeptic
*started as "my bonds with you" when I wrote it. Had tried "the bonds that
hold me to you," at some point. Not sure which it was closer to when I wrote
it in my head, I think maybe it was "my bonds with you"
originally wrote it as a comma and linebreak after the word "you", but I
think this is actually how I meant to write it in my head originally, and
that this puts more emphasis on "and I wane"