My Love, I love you more than my favorite flower, Your skin more than the feel of soft petals, Your eyes more than the sky your smile more than the crests of waves crashing down in their ascent for the sky. If only I could tell you in person, If only I had never let you down. |
Copyright ©2009 Ashi Shadow - 12/01/09
Only first 2 lines can stay so far.
On Katie. <-- upon later reading, actually seems okay.
2nd and 3rd line originally had periods instead of commas.