OPPRESSED CLASSES

Oppressed classes are like
kidnapped white women
when it comes to slam poetry.
All they need to do,
after identifying themselves
as either a woman who was mistreated by a man
or a black adult who had a drug addict for a parent
is make guttural noises
emphasizing the mistreatment that they suffered
and then the crowd goes wild.
It does not matter
if the poem has
talent, rhyme, or meter.
Diction or metaphor?
What’s that?
Perhaps that’s an exaggeration:
some of the poems do have
diction, rhyme, and meter,
and plenty of them have metaphors.
But what they have more in common than that
is an audience of college students
and college dropouts
and college wishfuls
who wish that they could claim
their failures to be productive
came out of something so traumatic.
So they clap to their
empty heart’s content,
trying to fill it with
a little purpose
on the back of somebody who was
probably only mildly abused.
You’re supposed to applaud the poet, not the score
but you’re supposed to score the poem, not the poet.
I understand that the score is for the performance
and not just the poem,
but you’re not supposed to score the identity,
of the poet,
and yet people do.

Copyright ©2018 Ashi Shadow -3/14/18 on experiences at slam poetry (also observed elsewhere in society).
Initially, I meant to have some lines about how it is good to encourage people to perform and to give them self-esteem etc. to build them up into better performers, since they may have anxiety etc., but ultimately I'm sufficiently satisfied with what I ended up writing.