'Hi Honey, Sweetheart.' |
Copyright ©2009 Ashi Shadow -1/31/10
on Kiera, fictional.
Added 2nd line break later.
The lines: I said as she smiled, "While you're in my arms" have an
issue, but oh well.
The scene is correct that way, it's just hard to read when written.
Tried adding italics to make it less of an issue.