She form:
I see her face in another's face |
walking down the street- |
and I want to call her to say to her that |
"You are the red in my paintings," |
but I know that I'm not allowed to do that |
or to say anything past the comma, |
because although she's my intellectual equal |
and a peer among morals... |
she was still one of my students. |
You form:
I see your face in another's face |
walking down the street- |
and I want to call you to tell you that |
"You are the red in my paintings," |
but I know that I'm not allowed to |
or to say anything beyond the comma, |
because even if you're my intellectual equal, |
and a peer among morals... |
you were still once one of my students. |
Copyright ©2005 Ashi Shadow 4/15/05 on Jessie
Note: although it's a completely different context and meaning, the "Red In My Paintings" idea came from "I am Sam" (the movie).