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I am but a servant
whom you've thrown rocks at. When I came back bloodied, you didn't want to help me. When the world you drove me to, hurt me, I came back to you, but you didn't want me. But I have known no home other than you. |
Copyright ©2007 Ashi Shadow 11/17/07 on Katie.
* I think that knowing it's a love poem makes it much more powerful.
The two buts had bothered me after writing it. Considered making the 2nd last an "and." Tim suggested making one a "though."