THE SINS HE COMMITTED

Knocking on the doors to heaven
with fists clenched
and wild teary eyes bent over his shoulder,
he could not escape his recent past,
as the sins he committed nipped at his heels
with the muzzles of wild wolves.

Copyright ©2008 Ashi Shadow 7/21/08
Imperfect but acceptable. As my balancing act comes crashing down, I shall try to catch the crash. It is not may ability to hold a thousand plates, but for me to catch 800 of them as they fall that I owe my success.
Not supposed to be titled, thought about "knocking on the doors to heaven" as a title but thought that would be worse.